Angel Eyes
Koh
Okay. Who ate the cookies?
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Post by Angel Eyes on Apr 29, 2006 9:04:48 GMT -5
Ooookay, this is just a bit of fun, but I wanna see if this project takes off the ground... lets write a zutarian fic (not bcos I'm a shipper, but I'll just start with this first before trying Kataang).
How?
Simple.
I'll give some sentences, and some one else gives another, and so on and so forth, until we complete the story.
Here's mine:
The moon rose steadily over the austere tree-tops, its soft rays illuminating the sleepy camp below in the clearing. Three figures slept in sweet slumber. One of the figures stirred; a slip of a girl. She opened her blue eyes and gazed sleepily at her surroundings. She thought she heard a sound echo in the dense foliage...
Try to add on to that! ;D
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storybookgirl
Hakoda
Zutarian Ambassador
Mom, I will try to, try hard to make you proud of your boy. (icon by Gotterdammerung)
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Post by storybookgirl on Apr 30, 2006 3:25:48 GMT -5
Wow, someone put this up before me! I was going to do something like this with all/most of the ships! Nice!
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"Momo...!" the girl whispered into the silence. "Come back to camp! All the bugs have gone to sleep. You won't catch any."
Katara closed her blue, sleepy eyes and felt all consciousness start to float away. Then she heard a rustling in the brush at the far side of the camp. She extended her arm without opening her eyes.
"Here, Momo. Come on."
Katara felt something with small paws jump onto her legs from in the area of the small tree stump near her feet. She furrowed her brow.
"Momo?" she muttered, sitting up slowly and allowing her eyes to flutter open once again. The leemur chattered back to her, his eyes focused on something behind the girl. She turned sharply, then gasped. A frightening white and blue mask stared back at her.
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Woohoo! These are so much fun. So what will come next, guys? You decide.
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HawkWind
Iroh
Not bein' funny but...
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Post by HawkWind on Apr 30, 2006 7:46:13 GMT -5
OOo, love this idea guys! ------------------------------------------
Raising her hand to her mouth to keep from screaming, Katara pulled back into her sleeping bag until only her eyes stared out of it's depths.
The figure did not notice she was awake, instead it moved stealthily across the campground to the belongs Katara and Sokka had left piled together. Reaching them, the figure's hand reached into the one of the bags, and began to search through them Ontop on Katara, Momo gave a high screetch.
The figure froze and the mask turned in the direction of Katara and Momo, locating what had made the noise. Then it rose and came slinking toward them. Katara did the only thing she could think of doing...
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Post by thiylan on Apr 30, 2006 7:58:22 GMT -5
She stood up as fast as seemed humanly possible, the sleeping bag not even tripping her. Her eyes found a bowl of water and she bent some out, swirling it in a ball above her head. All thoughts of fear had left her, only anger left. What right did this person have to come and steal from this camp.
The figure slowed and reached over its back and pulled out a sword, but the near silent noise from the metal was not silent enough, and another person lying in a sleeping bag jolted awake with a small war cry. Then, that cry alerted a small bald monk who rose quickly ... -------------------------------------------- This a great idea relaxedguru
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Post by nitefire on Apr 30, 2006 9:03:35 GMT -5
such an awesome idea! __________________
Aang pulled out his staff imediatly and sent a wave of air towards the masked figure. Before it reached him, he jumped into the nearest tree and made the trio belive he was gone. After they were all asleep again(or so it seemed)the masked boy jumped silently from the tree nito the camp. But again,not silently enough. The water tribe girl was not asleep yet and had realized the boy had returned. BUt then......she heard another thing come closer. Momo hid inside Her sleeping bag. Was it one of the masked boy's allies? Certainly not. The other man was a firebender and noticed Katara's conciesness. Without even noticing The masked figure, he charged towards the girl. SHe gasped at loss of breath.........and then the masked figure............
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Makida
Zhao
Zutaraian Archer
Sokka will always be my hero!!!!! <3
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Post by Makida on Apr 30, 2006 10:31:31 GMT -5
.....quickly grabbed Katara off her feet, and fled into the forest. The blue masked figure was running at a great speed, trying to escape the enemy. While he was running, Katara was trying to break free of his tight grasp, but could not escape. She cried out for Aang, "Help me! I'm being..." The masked figure quickly put her down and tied a ribbon over her mouth to make her stay quiet. Then he picked her up again, but instead of running, he climed up into a tree that was attached to a huge tree village, or once was. Katara looked at this deserted place, and realized this used to be Jet's place. The masked figure placed her down in one of the huts. He had tied her to the pole in the middle of the room tightly, so her waterbending can't let her escape, and removed the ribbon from her mouth. Katara asked in anger," Let me go! Why do you want me so badly?" The masked figure stood there in silence, while Katara was still staring at him with a mean look. " Who are you? Show yourself coward!" The masked figure didn't reply. After a moment of silence, he took off his mask slowly. Katara saw whom this person was, for she has been with him before. Zuko quietly said...... ___________________ Sorry if it isn't that good, I never wrote a fan fic before. Good idea!
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Post by Mashnii on Apr 30, 2006 14:54:37 GMT -5
"Peasant... where is the Avatar?" She gasped, her azure eyes shimmering with fear, until she closed her mouth, a steady glare directly hitting his golden eyes. He stepped forward, clenching his fists in pure hatred, a wisp of smoke rising from his hand. She could feel her heart thumping within her chest, but, in an attempt to ignore it, she quickly gathered the water from her bottle and shot a spear of ice in his direction. But he only evaded it, thrusting his hand out toward her, and before she knew it, flames licked the air beside her, the heat intensifying as she dodged it. She gasped, her eyes averting towards Zuko. Why? Why was she so nervous? Why was it suddenly hard to breathe? But she ignored the heavy weight which pressed against her heart. -----------------
Oh, gosh! Kataang shippers! You may shoot me! Okay, wow, my gosh...I'm actually writing Zutara. Well, who cares? Is it crudtastic?
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Post by thiylan on Apr 30, 2006 15:18:00 GMT -5
Zuko stared her down, his golden eyes peering into hers. He lowered his hand, the flame dying slowly. Katara stared back, gasping for a few breaths. She watched the man who had been trying to kill them for the past months, the man she could not escape from. "Why didn't you just get Aang while you were at our camp?" She asked, her hatred evident. Zuko kept his eyes on her as he was silent for several moments.
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Post by Mashnii on Apr 30, 2006 15:31:58 GMT -5
"Because I have a different goal..." he breathed, walking behind her. She felt herself shift as she watched the firebender lean next to her ear, his steamy breath falling upon her neck and cheek. "Get away!" she cried. She thrust a wave of water at him, but to her dismay, he continued to stalk towards her, shooting a demeaning glare in her direction. "I said get away!" she shrieked, but as she did, he suddenly lept forward, a hand soon over her mouth. "None of that, now," he hissed.
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Post by thiylan on Apr 30, 2006 15:35:18 GMT -5
Katara's brow furrowed in anger and she started to lash about, grunting and kicking. Zuko watched her struggle, his mouth turned into a smirk. He lowered his head and spoke into her ear.
"You will get nothing out of that, peasant. I seriously doubt that anyone can actually hear you all the way out here." He saw Katara's struggles come to an end as she understood what he was saying. Zuko's smirk grew as he ...
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storybookgirl
Hakoda
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Post by storybookgirl on Apr 30, 2006 15:41:07 GMT -5
^No, it's not. Don't worry, I've written for other ships besides Zutara. You're not the only one who's done this, haha, so don't feel guilty!
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Zuko smirked, looking down at her with a slightly amused look. She could tell he was considering the situation, and she wasn't sure if she wanted to know what he was thinking about.
"Of course," he said, "I know where the Avatar is. I'm just not interested in capturing him anymore."
"Then why did you capture me?!"
"Don't look at me like I'm stupid."
"Too late for that."
Katara had been prepared for him to strike her or to shoot fire at her. She had tensed her her muscles, ready to dodge the best she could if she had to. However, her enemy did not hurt her. *At least, not yet* she thought.
Zuko crouched down in front of her, staring into her eyes. An intimidation act, no doubt.
"I have my reasons for capturing you. You see, you seem to be the most allert of your friends at night. How can I steal from you if you're awake? But I have something else in mind for you, too."
Katara tried to hold her glare, but she was a little frightened at what he might have planned for her. It must have showed on her face because Zuko's mouth curled back into his arrogant smirk.
"I hear that some waterbenders can heal. My birdhorse...er...Earth Kingdom..." He waved his hand. "Whatever those creatures are. Mine has an injured foot." He leaned closer to her face. "I'm sure you can manage. You can't be THAT weak..."
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Heehee, I was listening to Zutara-like music while writing this. It was just a coincidence, too. Weird...but amusing...
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Post by thiylan on Apr 30, 2006 15:48:18 GMT -5
Katara glared at him, "So, you kidnapped me so I could heal your pet?" she smiled sarcastically. "Why would I heal something that would allow you to get Aang faster?"
Zuko stood up, "What choice do you have, peasant? Maybe I won't chase the Avatar. Maybe I will. But you can't escape me." He walked away from her, to a window-like opening in the northern wall. He looked out at the moonless sky, his eyes scanning the trees and stars.
Katara watched him like a hawk, eyeing his every move. She saw his hair; had it been cut? And he wasn't wearing Fire Nation clothes. Of course he's not, Katara, she told herself silently, You can't hide wearing armor. She jumped slightly when Zuko abruptly turned around and walked back over to her in three steps.
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storybookgirl
Hakoda
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Post by storybookgirl on Apr 30, 2006 16:19:28 GMT -5
"You WILL do as you're told," he ordered, looking down upon her as if it were his birthright to take advantage of her abilities. "You will learn discipline and you will learn to respect me, by force or otherwise doesn't matter." He stepped right in front of her; Katara turned her head so she wouldn't have to look up to him so much. "You always were a defiant little peasant."
Katara straightened her posture the best she could. Yes, she was defiant, and dang well proud of it.
"Look at me," said Zuko. Katara still wouldn't look his way. "Look at me," he commanded once more. She didn't obey. He bent over her, grabbed her chin firmly, and forced her face to face his. However, Katara's eyes continued to glare in another, in any, direction other than his. "If you obey me and act like the humble little peasant you should be, your stay here will not be long. Fail to do so, and things won't go as pleasantly and smoothly as I would like. Now as much as I would love to continue our conversation, I have an uncle that I need to remind to stop following me."
Zuko took his hand away from Katara's chin forcefully. He then turned on his heal and started walking purposefully toward the exit.
"I hate you," said Katara to his back.
The Prince, or whatever he was now, stopped. Katara had the feeling that he was smirking again. After a long pause in which neither of the teenagers said anything, Zuko walked out of the opening in the hut and out of site.
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Gah! It's so hard to stop myself from writing!
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Post by Mashnii on Apr 30, 2006 16:46:09 GMT -5
I hate you... The cold words reverbrated inside his mind. I hate you... They stung, like knives of cruel ice, and as he yanked the water tribe girl through the forest, his pace slowed as those words shot a painful memory through his mind. His failure.
Suddenly, he stopped, and immediately, Katara's gaze averted from the ground to the Fire Prince. "What's wrong?" she questioned. "What, you don't know where your beloved bird is?" She smirked, as if she had made a small victory over him. Immediately, she almost regreted her words; her muscles grew tense, and her heart thumped within her chest. "No, I-never mind." His face continued to stare ahead, and after a moment, he loosened his grip and began walking. But as they continued to march threw the wood, Katara almost felt pity, mercy in her heart; sorrow over him. Maybe, just maybe, he was a good person. She shook her head. No! she screamed at herself in her head. Of course he isn't good! How could you think something like that? He's a firebender! The son of the Fire Lord!
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Makida
Zhao
Zutaraian Archer
Sokka will always be my hero!!!!! <3
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Post by Makida on Apr 30, 2006 17:03:56 GMT -5
The two of them were walking, for too long. Zuko couldn't see his bird in sight.
Katara sighs, "Where is your stupid bird? We've been walking for about 25 minutes. You are so unresponsable for your pet..."
"Enough! We will find it when we find it, just keep walking. I'm sure you're used to it peasent," Zuko said in a rude mannor.
"Will you quit calling me peasent!" she shouted at him, making an echoing sound through the still trees. "You can call me by my name, ya know."
Zuko stayed silent, and Katara just followed without making the slightest peep. He finnaly found the bird near a huge shaggy tree, picking at the bugs inside of it for food. Katara looked at this creature-bird-thing and trying to figure out if she's seen it or not.
Zuko said, " Well, here you go. Heal its foot for me, ok?" Katara replied....
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