Chevalier Vi Liberté
Ty Lee
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Post by Chevalier Vi Liberté on May 24, 2007 0:47:54 GMT -5
I just wrote this in my free time. Nothing special but my mind was lost.
I look across The darkened sky Nowhere to go All alone
I wonder why And how come Is this all Just one dream
Am I asleep… Or is all this real For my life Has frozen
I think for a while And it all comes back She is gone And now So am I
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Post by Poetic_Tragedy on May 24, 2007 1:01:47 GMT -5
INSPIRATION:My Friend Yeah it sucks.Ill do better later
She cries tears, for you, Salty beauty in glass eyes, Seeing into the depths of her, She goes blind.
She breaks fingers, for you, Words wilting on dead scrolls, Hearing, of distant memories, She goes deaf.
She bruises bodies, for you, Battered remains, crimson covered, Scars masked by the flood, She goes numb.
She shatters pictures, for you, Distortion, reality, crumbled images, Memories broken in a soul, She goes lifeless.
She kills a dream, for him, Belief in the immortality to bring, Broken angel needing a home, She goes to hell, For you.
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Chevalier Vi Liberté
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Post by Chevalier Vi Liberté on May 24, 2007 1:04:11 GMT -5
INSPIRATION:My Friend Yeah it sucks.Ill do better later She cries tears, for you, Salty beauty in glass eyes, Seeing into the depths of her, She goes blind. She breaks fingers, for you, Words wilting on dead scrolls, Hearing, of distant memories, She goes deaf. She bruises bodies, for you, Battered remains, crimson covered, Scars masked by the flood, She goes numb. She shatters pictures, for you, Distortion, reality, crumbled images, Memories broken in a soul, She goes lifeless. She kills a dream, for him, Belief in the immortality to bring, Broken angel needing a home, She goes to hell, For you. Man, there is a lot of self-hating going on in that poem. It scares me. Tis deep but a little on the terrifying side.
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Post by Poetic_Tragedy on May 24, 2007 1:11:20 GMT -5
Hahaha I guess.But you have to be though in order to survive.[right?!] Yeah I wrote beacuse girls are to soft [because most of the guys are cute but jerks] By the way your poem is good
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Post by Chevalier Vi Liberté on May 24, 2007 1:15:20 GMT -5
Hahaha I guess.But you have to be though in order to survive.[right?!] Yeah I wrote beacuse girls are to soft [because most of the guys are cute but jerks] By the way your poem is good Point proven. Need some toughness to survive unless your da*$ rich. Thanks. I have much better work though. Finals have just burned me out. This is poem I wrote a while ago. I managed to find it. It is one of my more personal poems about love. There is one tree It is of the color pink I wonder why It is the color pink Then I see her And now I know the truth It is her radiant beauty Which colors the tree The beauty of the girl Of which whom I love So it is her The one I have been searching for She is the one I feel different I have never felt this feeling Is she doing this to me Or is it the nature around me No, this feeling is different It is of love My love for this girl? No, it cannot be Yet it is Is she the one? She is the one whom I love I know what I must do I must make her mine And then never let her Be harmed I must love her with all my heart And never let go until my last breath Has been taken I am in love Is this how it feels? Here is another poem that I found. I have to make a poem that is not about love. I shall try. There is nothing more Nothing less There is only one Only one I need She is pure She is strong She is the only one The only one I need She makes me hurt And long And want She is all I want All I need My heart aches It longs and struggles on Only for her For she is the one The one and only one That I need And truly can say I...love
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Post by TML on May 24, 2007 18:01:23 GMT -5
dreamer: Nothing Less....Those poems....... Those memories...... That Tree? The hill that I spoke of first. The sunset with the colored pink sky. The fire that I felt burning inside me is now hurting me. @poetic_Tragedy: I love that poem of yours. It reminds me of someone I know. She's hurt but is trying to forget the one that almost broke her heart. *shrugs* You deserve your first karma. ^.^ Wow....My friend was right. Don't try to fix a broken heart. It is like a broken mirror. If you try to piece it back together you'll only get hurt. It's really sad how I'm still here I haven't shed one single tear But I'm looking at the ashes before me And wondering if you'll ever reappear. I feel like you lied to me I kick these ashes which are in front of me How could I have been so naive? I'm still here But know that eventually I will leave. Another one of my poems which can not be compared to Poetic Tragedy or Dreamer's works or masterpieces. I'm so sick of this dang feeling It is pulling me I'm trying so hard to pull out of this grip But I'm struggling You just used me I can't believe that I believed everything that came out of your lips I have three words for you, my dear. A BEAUTIFUL LIECount them they are three. Ha! Did "I Love You" come to your little mind? Haha..how sad....
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Post by taiyo *on limited hiatus* on May 24, 2007 18:26:45 GMT -5
Woah. All you guys' poems pwn. I found an old one. (I wrote two today but they're in Spanish and I don't wanna offend Spanish speakers cuz I'm still in the process of learning Spanish.)
Change
Why did you leave me alone, Past? To embrace this thing called Change? I wasn't ready to let go of you You left me too quick Change is different I rather stay with you, someone I know You left me in a foreign land I am in someone else's world, not my own You're hard, you know Change embraced me, I can't escape I had no power to escape and apparently no will When you left me, I made a new friend named Adaptation She's a friend of Change and she showed me the ropes I can see the sun and the moon now I don't remember seeing that with you, Past Maybe I don't want to remember, maybe I actually want to move on
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Post by Poetic_Tragedy on May 24, 2007 21:20:51 GMT -5
i like X_xPaper_Heartx_X poem really creative.
Dreamer i love your poem wow lucky girl however was your inspiration
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Post by TML on May 24, 2007 21:32:01 GMT -5
i like X_xPaper_Heartx_X poem really creative. Dreamer i love your poem wow lucky girl however was your inspiration Why thank you, Poetic_Tragedy. Oh, yeah. That girl must have or is lucky to have those poems inspire someone like him. You know he's an amazing person. The one that I remember reading over and over again is Nothing Less.
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Post by mcdefenseless on May 24, 2007 23:26:18 GMT -5
Wow. This thread makes me feel like I have an IQ of about 4. *can't even come CLOSE to comparing to you guys* *ahem* But anyways, here's a little excerpt from a song I wrote. No personal experience, I was just in an emo mood. -shrug-
Recognize me, see my face Die, come back to haunt me Don't disappear without a trace Even though you don't want me Kill me, break me, tear me up I know you'll have all the luck My fate is whatever you decide I'm broken inside....
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Post by Dutchy on May 25, 2007 13:56:45 GMT -5
My newest poem (has nothing to do with me btw)
A cutter's mind
It's the way I am, What others think hurts, But I learned to not give a d*mn, Sometimes in my mind something just snaps or bursts,
People look at me like I'm mud, That's why I cut, Because there is no cure, For emotional torture.
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Post by Linksy on May 25, 2007 22:00:45 GMT -5
Wow you guys. This thread is bursting with talent!!! ^___^ Good job!
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Post by TML on May 25, 2007 22:16:00 GMT -5
@dutchy: *thumbs up* Awesome Dutchy!! You're good. mc defenseless: You're a great poet!! Don't be soo pessimistic. XP taiyo *on limited hiatus*: Yeah, Change...It doesn't let go no matter how hard you try to pull out of his grip. @linsky!: Aww..How sweet. Thanks. ^.^ I have this one...I wrote not to long ago.. The Black Rose and The Precious Gift
There is this black rose It has these silky impeccable petals They stretch inward to protect the one inside It has thorns to pierce the flesh of the one who wants to harm her They are loyal to her They fall before her And fulfill her every need But there is something that they can not give They can not give her The gift that beats and feels They can not change the past For it all just happened so fast So, this is why they worry This fight for that one precious gift might even turn out to be gory She feels nothing on the inside She has no expression on the outside She has never been put out into the world
You maybe wondering what happened to the precious gift. It was stolen and never returned It was ripped apart She gave it to him. She believed in him. It’s because of him that she can’t feel anything. She stays silent while she looks at the grey sky It is filled with tears of sadness But the tears resist to fall She smiles faintly, Thinking of the things he said to her He made her smile when she didn’t think she could She has so many memories. She still cares for him. He might have never loved her but she loved him.
And, so, she lives like this everyday while the petals look down on her Trying to make her smile That’s something only he can do The thorns surround her to protect her He told her he wanted to protect her It just isn’t the same He told her that his heart was hers to keep She kept it She never wanted to harm his beating heart
He took it back But did not return her gift The moon has disappeared Never to reappear And, so, the skies fill themselves with so many tears She stays here Still thinking of him Waiting for only him And they stay here by her side Only to live for her. He may not even remember her, But she does. He doesn’t say a word to her anymore She is filled with some kind of piercing pain in her chest It’s the empty hole that creeps It creeps little by little every day It grows more and more It gets the best of her
She still has feelings for that liar Yes, he also lied to our dearest He told her those three famous words but did not mean them She said them and meant them. She has faith that he might come back But then again she hopes not to stay here until the day she dies They know she will eventually leave But she stays Refuses to listen But hears them The thorns tell her that he was never worth it The petals tell her that he loved her so much that he had to let go The precious gift is hidden away Hidden in some faraway place
She waits for him She waits for the return She waits for the precious gift
The precious gift called a heart.
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Post by Linksy on May 25, 2007 22:19:48 GMT -5
You're most welcome. ^_^;; Maybe sometime I might post a poem or two of my own. (Though they really can't compare)
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Post by Chevalier Vi Liberté on May 25, 2007 22:30:05 GMT -5
I finally managed not to write a poem that is more depressing.
This Pain
I have felt this pain Since that day I wondered why And how come
I tried so hard To put it to an end Yet it returned It would never leave
I had no choice It was to be done My thoughts were racing For I had to choose
Would I die? Or would I live? Time was passing So I let it out
The pain of love Had left me all alone And now… Was forever gone
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