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Post by Dutchy on Mar 10, 2007 8:51:15 GMT -5
I only have a few . . . I use them with avatar images to make them look better like the one is my sig or and another poem: I always had this anger, I always carey a weapon with me, I'll always be abled to remember you, I always think about tommorow, The day after tommorow or later, But one thing I will get, I will not leave my body, Untill I destroyed yours I will get my revenge ^ maybe a bit rough but still ^.^ ^
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Post by avatarspirit on Mar 10, 2007 17:01:47 GMT -5
Beautiful! just beautiful!
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Post by TML on Mar 10, 2007 18:12:26 GMT -5
@ The Happy Dutchy: I really like your poems *2 thumbs up*
I'm thinking of a poem....I just need to write it and proofread it.....
EDIT: Here it is
I don’t know how to explain myself to you This is something that is so true something so fresh and new.... yet this is so hard to describe Every night I talk to you I feel like I can’t control myself. I even sometimes think to myself, “Can this be real?” I smile to myself and know that it is. I can’t believe that this is true. That I truly do love you I really do wish that I could express my feelings to you. Not like this........but somewhere else where we could be together........only you and I..... just the two of us.....no one else.... I truly desire that...... I just feel like I need you...... Everything feels so right when it comes to you...... I know that this isn’t a mistake.... This isn’t anything fake.....
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Post by Dutchy on Mar 11, 2007 7:34:01 GMT -5
thanks guys the things in the avatar pics where made in 1 minut but the revenge one took me some time TML: the one who'll get the poem will be glad (at least if you're going to give it to the one you like )
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Post by TML on Mar 11, 2007 13:47:08 GMT -5
^ =^^= Why thank you, but I don't know if I will. The one I want to send it to is a waaay better poet than I am. He knows who he is.
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Post by Dutchy on Mar 11, 2007 13:51:22 GMT -5
That's not a good reason to not send I mean if the love of your life kisses better and (S)he wants to kiss you you're not going to ignore that either are you?
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Post by TML on Mar 11, 2007 14:07:06 GMT -5
^ No.. I'm a girl who likes guys... I would never let that moment go..only if I didn't like him. *sigh*.......I can't PM though....I don't know what the heck is wrong....it tells me that I can't PM until 15 seconds....but I wait and it doesn't work.......
oh.....I have another poem in my head.....Do you?
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Post by Dutchy on Mar 11, 2007 20:32:37 GMT -5
^ No.. I'm a girl who likes guys... I would never let that moment go..only if I didn't like him. *sigh*.......I can't PM though....I don't know what the heck is wrong....it tells me that I can't PM until 15 seconds....but I wait and it doesn't work....... oh.....I have another poem in my head.....Do you? Delete all the posts of your outbox worked for me too I had exactly the same I can think of one if you want, shall I think of one you can give me the title (something negative please)
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Post by TML on Mar 11, 2007 15:39:53 GMT -5
^ As you wish......let's see...something sad......depressing.......emo?...LOL
You Left....
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Post by Dutchy on Mar 11, 2007 15:46:37 GMT -5
You left and you won't come back You left me as a wreck You left my bed You left me everything that we had
You left my keys You left me there sitting on me knees You left me one memory A memory where you left me
^it's not awesome but it's ok^
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Post by TML on Mar 11, 2007 16:00:42 GMT -5
Don't say that........I LOVE IT. 10/10.....You're really good at this for a beginner. XD Omg... I love this part: You left me one memory A memory where you left me
^ I just love that part.
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Post by Dutchy on Mar 11, 2007 16:05:37 GMT -5
^.^ thank you very much
you need something like i have a lot of anger in me so i can make a poem with that and persons with a lot of love jalousy or anything can make a good poem just take your time and try to get some inspiration
btw I always make the poems my own for all who will join the thread I don't try to get them from the internet!
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Post by TML on Mar 11, 2007 16:11:10 GMT -5
You're too fast at this. To quick. I'm just to slow....... ....heh....I guess I need practice.....
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Post by Dutchy on Mar 12, 2007 13:23:07 GMT -5
you can practice it but you really only need inspiration
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Post by TML on Mar 13, 2007 18:44:52 GMT -5
^ You have good come backs......
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