Storyteller's OC Request Shop

[~*Tea Sage*~]

Hey guys, I just got the green light to start an OC request thread. But here's what to expect from me:

+ I will only accept 1-2 OC request a week
+ I don't color (I might collab with someone to do so)
+ I will put in quality effort in it
+ I have various unique style, I don't a don't have a primary style, it changes with the occasion or mood I'm in
+ However if you want a particular style just ask, I'm versatile
+ I might experiment with various photoshop features (I'm new to photopshop)
+ I will experiment with drawing technique/perspective/and etc.
+ I will only draw PG-13 related stuff
+ My (first) DA account: thestoryteller88.deviantart.com/

So now that you guys know what to expect from me, here's what I will expect from you (request application):

+ Name:
+ Age:
+ Gender (I'd be nice to know):
+ Detailed Physical Description (Optional - Doodle):
+ Background Information (What? I love backstories!!):
+ Other: Whatever you like to include

p.s. Empyreal Maiden gets first dibs since she may have hinted it..

[Empy]

Lol, well I didn't mean to hog up the shop but since you have time...
My OC!

Name: Chih- Yuan
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Nation: Fire
Bender?: No

History: Chih-Yuan is the poor daughter of craftsmen. Her father is in the Fire Nation military in order to bring more income for the family and her oldest brother is training to join him. Unlike her brothers, Chih-Yuan is not a bender and so always felt inferior since her family placed an emphasis on firebending. Her mother does not bend either leading to a lot of conflict between her parents as her father always blamed her mother for Chih-Yuan’s lack of fighting ability. As a result, her father tried to teach her martial arts but she was never as good as her brothers no matter how hard she tried. As a result of her constant criticism, Chih-Yuan became distrusting and introverted, preferring to work on the loom by herself rather than fight. Her mother was a well known weaver and she taught her only daughter her craft. As the years passed, Chih-Yuan’s mother could no longer continue weaving due to arthritis and so she took her place. Her tapestries earned widespread acclaim and Chih-Yuan sold most of her work in the hopes of moving to the capital city with her mother.

Appearance: She has long black hair that falls to the middle of her back that she usually keeps in a high ponytail or a braid. Her clothing is that of an average fire nation citizen, red loose fitting attire with the classic high collar. The outfit is adorned with embroidery and has a modest slit running up the side. She wears loose pants underneath the dress. She has one silk outfit while the others are made from cheaper material. CHih-Yuan is pale, paler than the average fire nation citizen since she prefers to stay indoors. She enjoys nature and animals but is also fearful of them. She has dark eyes and she has the tendency to wring her hands when nervous. She isn’t what people consider beautiful but she is passably pretty.

Abilities: Chih-Yuan has basically no fighting abilities, just enough for defense in a tight situation from her father’s training. She cannot hold her own against benders or experienced fighters. She has some skill in medicine from her mother but her main focus is weaving and crafting.

Personality: She is shy and uncomfortable in new surroundings and when she’s around new people. She doesn’t like talking much and her silence is sometimes mistaken for indifference or arrogance. She likes praise but doesn’t take criticism well, being prone to crying. When she sets her mind on something, she makes sure it becomes a reality. Her dreams of moving to the city stem from her unhappiness in her current home and the hopes that her weavings could earn more money in the city for her family. She is a very loyal individual and cares for family and friends however she is judgmental and if someone gives her a bad first impression she won’t care about them unless they work hard to change her perception of them.
She is also stubborn and becomes easily frustrated when things aren't up to her standards or don't go her way. She doesn't have the best social skills.

[~*Tea Sage*~]

urg...I'm terribly sorry!! Lets just say a series of unfortunate event happened to me. I was not barraged with projects, homeworks, and exams, but I also lost the my drawing folder, and thus the final copy (where I keep all of my work) at the college library...

...anyways after a couple of hours of designing and drawing, I managed to draw another picture. I must say, I'd not very satisfied with it, and I would put more time in it, but I draw my promise for almost an extra week now, I'll do one day, because I like the design, I'm just not satisfied with the quality.

So here it is: img205.imageshack.us/img205/6506/scan0002xh7.jpg

Note: As an artist, I made a couple of modification to the appearance of Chih- Yuan, for one a discarded the collar, as I felt it was restrictive to the overall design. I was a tad bit confuse with what exactly was an "embroidery;" I did a little search, but I got mixed results in term of simplicity. The "Phoenix" design was actually the embroidery, which I felt was pretty fitting to represent the fire nation.

As a storyteller I wanted to incorporate the character's backstory and history into their visual design. Since Chih-Yuan is a weaver, and specializes in tapestries, I figured why incorporate them into her outfit, the cloth you see wrapped around her waist multiple time is the tapestry. I also took notice that her dad is a fire nation officer, so he probably travels a lot, and thus would send home local goods, such as clothes, to his family. In the design, Chih-Yuan is wearing golden mukluks boots from the Northern Water Tribe, a black headgear from the Earth Kingdom, and a red under garment from the Western Air Temple.

I figured her outfit would also correlate with her social problem. Here you have a poor girl with an exotic attire, the lower-class community would think "oh she think's to good for us." The upper-class community would think "oh she think's she could be like us." I'd say being rejected by most of society would affect anyone's social skills. So yeah, when she does go to the city, things won't go as she has expected to be, making her more shy and quiet. But hey, like any good story, she'll win the heart of the people, and be the best dang weaver the fire nation have ever seen..lol..well thats for Empyreal Maiden to decide...

Anyways, empyreal, sorry for making you wait for no reason, I'm gonna make a final copy of the new drawing again, but another time, I'll send you a better version when I'm done. I think for now, I'll move to the next request.

[edit]: The if you guys aren't sure about what she's carrying, the rectangular object with pegs are called tapestry blocks (i think), anyways its used to make well tapestry. The other object is just random accessories bundled up.

[edit x2]: I forgot empyreal, I know it might not be exactly as you wanted, so by all mean just tell me what to change, and I'll do so.

[pirateliz]

Oohh, I really like her outfit, would you like to do one of my OCs? In fact, I have several ^^;; I have several and cannot decide who I'd like to see, would you like to do Matsu, Hatsuon, or Abeni?
Here are their profiles, and they have been updated for a current role play. Matsu has his own fanfiction in the works-

Name: Matsu

Age: 23

Gender: Male

Nation: Born and raised in the Fire Nation.

Bender: Matsu is a semi experienced fire bender who is good enough to be in the ranks of the Fire Nation army.

Appearance: Matsu has black hair that falls to his shoulders and it is usually unkempt because of his lack of attention to it. He has golden brown eyes and pleasant facial features, giving him the appearance of a nice person (Not that he isn’t). Because of this people are sometimes surprised when they find out he was a soldier. Matsu is of average height, around 5’8 and of good physique because of his years of training in the army. After an accident in battle he lost his right arm though. He wears an average Earth Kingdom that is dirty and tattered his shoes are also worn thin. He received the clothing and shoes from the Earth Kingdom family who took him in, but he has not had the chance to acquire anymore clothing. Matsu has a hand held dagger hidden with him that belonged to his brother, he is learning how to use it with his left hand.

Personality: Matsu is a shy and quiet man who prefers not to speak to others. He is not rude just quiet. He is however open to family and friends.

History: Matsu was born in a large city into the Fire Nation. His parents were jewelers and him and his older brother lived in relative comfort because of their business. His mother was a firebender and would frequently use her skills in helping the family business. His older brother, Shanju , was skilled in the martial arts and because his parents could not afford to send Matsu to the school also Shanju would personally teach Matsu. Matsu had little interest in joining the army even though he had the potential with his skills in fighting with or without his bending ability.
One day when a member of the royal family entered the shop to purchase some jewelry is loyalty was renewed and he decided when he was older he would join the fire nation army.
Shortly before his 16th birthday Matu’s brother died of an illness. His family was heartbroken and Matsu was crushed because he idolized his brother. His resolve to join the army was confirmed when he found out his brother had been one out of many that had died due to the Earth Kingdom. Earth kingdom troops had poisoned food that had was exported from the island ports to the fire nation. Matsu trained harder and soon he enlisted in the army.
At twenty Matsu met the love of his life, Kauri. He was about to propose but the proposal didn’t receive the chance to happen as Matsu was deported to fight against a rebel group of Earthbenders who didn’t seem to enjoy the peace that had been uneasily put in place after the war.
During the battle he was pinned by a boulder and his right arm was wrenched from his body. His comrades, believing he was dead, left him. Matsu was saved by the stubbornness by the young lady, Song, who had talked another family into sheltering him and helping him heal.
Matsu was unconscious for several days and when he awoke he was with this strange family in the Earth Kingdom. He stayed with them for only a month maximum before rumors starting going around in the nearest village that he was a firebender spy. Fearing for his life he fled towards Ba Sing Se, even further away from his home. Along the way he is learning how to cope with the loss of his right limb, which is why he is usually in a state of uncleanlyness, explaining why his hair is usually tangled and not in the traditional firenation top knot. Along with learning how to cope with daily things he is also trying to learn how to fight again and maybe one day firebend again. Hearing about the growing new Lotus City he altered his course and headed there.

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Name: Hatsuon or Hati (Hawt-sue-on)

Age: 18

Gender: Female

Nation: Born in the Southern Water Tribe but raised in the Earth Kingdom

Bender: Yes, but not a very good one.

Apperance: Hati has a slim curvacious figure. A result of always insisting at being on the top of the fashion for the city. She has full pouting lips and large blue eyes framed with thick dark lashes and she has the usual dark skin of a Water Tribe member. She has dark brown hair pulled back into a single braid with strands of hair connecting to them, lined with beads. (Much like Katara's hair loopies, but against her head and excluding the bun.) Her wardrobe is one of major changes. Whatever it is, it is sure to be in style though.

Personality: She is a persnickity rude person. The only reason she know show to water bend is to suffice her own needs such as cleaning and drinking. She has no idea how to use it as a defense or offensive weapon, in fact her only weapon is a loud scream. It infuriates her attacker and can usually bring the nearest warrior to her raid. Its a very loud scream. She is very rich and she acts like she knows it. SHe's not afraid to speak her mind but its not in the kind way that give most people a better personality, her way is to be flat out rude.

History: Hatsouon and her parents moved to the Earth Kingdom when she was just an infant. Her father did not want to fight in the war so they fled the country. While there her parents were able to start a spa business in Omashu.
The rest of her life was spent in complete comfort. Her parents and her were rich. Once Omashu was taken over and turned into New Ozai they still didn't leave. They weren't supporters of the war on either front so they had nothing to fear. After the war was over Hati decided that she needed to sperate herself from her parents and live on her own. She got a whiff that Lotus City did not have a large fashion industry. After gathering money and items she took off to go to Lotus City and start a new fashion capital.

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Name: Abeni

Age: 7

Gender: Female

Nation: Earth Kingdom

Bender?: Yes but so bad she can hardly be called a bender. Explanation below.

Appearance: Abeni is a short young girl who lacks any of the childish fat that most children her age have. Because of her environment she grew thin and has a slight gaunt look about her. She has soft muddy brown eyes with light brown hair. When her hair is not covered by a hijab like garment worn by the sand benders they are in two buns at the top of her head. She worked very hard to learn how to put her hair up like that and is proud of herself every time she puts them up correctly. Abeni has a cleft lip though that extends almost to her nostril and it makes her very shy.
She wears traditional sand bender clothing and almost always wears her sand cloth that protects her nose and mouth from the sand. She wears it to cover her cleft lip almost all the time.

Personality: Abeni is very shy if she becomes exposed without her mask. If her face is fully covered she is very chatty and will instantly bond with any person who is kind to her. If her mask is removed she will cry or run away or attempt to cover her face so they won’t see her.

History: Abeni was born into a poor Sandbender tribe with a twin sister. Her mother was shunned by the community because her father was not known and the rumors was that he was a crazed earth bender who later died in the desert, but Abeni never found out.
Many villagers wanted to disown Abeni when they saw her cleft lip, claiming that bad spirits were punishing her because of her mother’s foolishness. Her mother refused to give her up saying that Abeni’s twin would also suffer if she left. The tribe grudgingly allowed Abeni to live.
When she was three her mother married a new man and Abeni instantly realized he had no love for her or her family, but only married her mother to give himself a higher ranking within the tribe. She had never been loved much as a child compared to her twin but now her position in the family was even lower.
She was constantly teased by the other children and was even sometimes beaten up by the older ones, making her a very skittish frightened child.
When she was five her and her sister began their training as sand benders but Abeni quickly found she had no skill for it. The most she could do was raise dust clouds while her sister was much higher then she was. Now that the other children had even more ammo to use to make fun of her Abeni finally refused to quit learning how to sandbend. She preferred to spend her time drawing in the sand where she quickly learned she finally had one good talent, drawing. Of course it went unnoticed in her tribe.
It is possible if Abeni had a good teacher her skills as a sand bender may come back to her but it would still be very hard for her to master it.
When Abeni and her sister turned 6 they started traveling with their mother and step father on the sand sailor as they made trips for the tribe for various reasons. Her step father was slowly poisoning her mother against her and on many occasions she was nearly left behind with her mother making a protest, it was always her sister who managed to save her.


I understand that you have the right to refuse any of these ^^; But your style looks good, and I appreciate the quality that you put into the last request. Also if its needed I have several other requests that have been done of them.

[Empy]

skyebleu said:

urg...I'm terribly sorry!! Lets just say a series of unfortunate event happened to me. I was not barraged with projects, homeworks, and exams, but I also lost the my drawing folder, and thus the final copy (where I keep all of my work) at the college library...

...anyways after a couple of hours of designing and drawing, I managed to draw another picture. I must say, I'd not very satisfied with it, and I would put more time in it, but I draw my promise for almost an extra week now, I'll do one day, because I like the design, I'm just not satisfied with the quality.

So here it is: img205.imageshack.us/img205/6506/scan0002xh7.jpg

Note: As an artist, I made a couple of modification to the appearance of Chih- Yuan, for one a discarded the collar, as I felt it was restrictive to the overall design. I was a tad bit confuse with what exactly was an "embroidery;" I did a little search, but I got mixed results in term of simplicity. The "Phoenix" design was actually the embroidery, which I felt was pretty fitting to represent the fire nation.

As a storyteller I wanted to incorporate the character's backstory and history into their visual design. Since Chih-Yuan is a weaver, and specializes in tapestries, I figured why incorporate them into her outfit, the cloth you see wrapped around her waist multiple time is the tapestry. I also took notice that her dad is a fire nation officer, so he probably travels a lot, and thus would send home local goods, such as clothes, to his family. In the design, Chih-Yuan is wearing golden mukluks boots from the Northern Water Tribe, a black headgear from the Earth Kingdom, and a red under garment from the Western Air Temple.

I figured her outfit would also correlate with her social problem. Here you have a poor girl with an exotic attire, the lower-class community would think "oh she think's to good for us." The upper-class community would think "oh she think's she could be like us." I'd say being rejected by most of society would affect anyone's social skills. So yeah, when she does go to the city, things won't go as she has expected to be, making her more shy and quiet. But hey, like any good story, she'll win the heart of the people, and be the best dang weaver the fire nation have ever seen..lol..well thats for Empyreal Maiden to decide...

Anyways, empyreal, sorry for making you wait for no reason, I'm gonna make a final copy of the new drawing again, but another time, I'll send you a better version when I'm done. I think for now, I'll move to the next request.

[edit]: The if you guys aren't sure about what she's carrying, the rectangular object with pegs are called tapestry blocks (i think), anyways its used to make well tapestry. The other object is just random accessories bundled up.

[edit x2]: I forgot empyreal, I know it might not be exactly as you wanted, so by all mean just tell me what to change, and I'll do so.

Wow, no need for apologies! It looks amazing and was well worth the wait ^_^ *karma*

[Sakura]

Here you go!:

Name: Hyana Kino (HI-ana KEE-no)

Gender: Female

Age: 17 (going on 18)

Nation: Earth Kingdom/ EK

Bender/Weapon(s): Yes; Her Weapons are long-range objects such as bows and arrows

Appearance: Hyana is 5’ 6” and muscular from work. Her eyes are a deep gray, and her hair is very long and brownish-blonde. Hyana’s outfits vary from day-to-day, but she’s usually wearing earrings, a necklace, leather knee-high boots, and a mint/sea green and black sleeveless dress ((usually ankle-length or knee-length and made of canvas)), with a matching ribbon or scarf tied around her arm, leg, or head. She likes putting her hair into long pigtails, buns, and ponytails, or sometimes she just leaves it hanging. She has scars running up and down her arms from fire. Hyana always carries a black backpack and she recently received a bow and arrows.

Personality: Hyana is very sweet and nice. She is extremely calm in the face of possible death. Her temper is short, but she doesn’t stay angry for long. Hyana tries not to cry, but most of the time she can’t help it. She hopes to conceal this by being tough, but it doesn’t change the fact that she needs a friend. She can rely on herself most of the time, though.

Note(s): I’m trying to make this less Mary Sue-ish then my other OCs. I’ll accept constructive criticism, but remember: I’ve worked very hard on this, so there are some things that simply cannot be changed. Also, I’m very, very sorry that I didn’t go into more detail about Hyana’s childhood, but what can I say? It was NORMAL. And again, I’m so very sorry about my lack of wordiness. I didn’t have any inspiration, though! I know that the history sounds pretty cruddy. Ah well, more stuff to fix then abandon! Good for us. But don’t let me hold you up: Read on!

History: Hyana Kino was born on May 4 to Mink and Jiang Kino, in the village of Ten-Shii. Hyana was a happy child who loved to play with Earthbending with her brother, Kuan. Her family was well off, so they could afford their children’s desires to attend school, learn from a dojo about weapons, and enroll in Earthbending classes. Hyana loved to sketch and write about things she thought were impossible or unreal, like spirits and the Avatar. Kuan, however, was the exact opposite. He liked roughing around in the mud, hated school, and he was often seen trying to persuade his sister to play pranks or practice throwing knives with him. Hyana’s father Jiang was a blacksmith, so you could often see his children in his shop, examining him as he made swords, knives, and an array of other metal things. Jiang liked to take his children camping trips to observe nature. Hyana’s mother Mink, on the other hand, worked at a bakery making pastries and cakes. She liked to take her children to the sea. All in all, Hyana had a normal childhood.

When Hyana was 17, she moved away from her home in Ten-Shii. In her village, it was a tradition for teenage girls to move to a new town in order to start a new profession and a new family. Hyana took the trip with her friend (who was a Waterbender) Mahoko, but she was still uneager to leave her hometown knowing that she couldn’t return for many months. It was two months before Hyana and Mahoko found a village of their liking. It was a small village named Inspiration Point, near the coast. Hyana and Mahoko bought a cottage there and learned the arts of painting and poetry. They were finally settled down in her new village when the worst happened.

It was late in the daytime, around midday. Hyana was sitting in front of a second-story window, painting quietly, and Mahoko was lying on the couch behind her, writing haiku on a notepad. It was eerily quiet. Then, screams echoed down the streets below the window. Hyana looked through the window and saw red soldiers on rhinos parading down the streets, breaking into houses and dragging people out. She, too, screamed and she and Mahoko started (quickly) packing all their money and clothes into knapsacks. Then, together, they ran out the back door just as a soldier burst through their front door. Suddenly, Hyana felt hot tendrils of fire dragging her back towards the house. She panicked and screamed, and Mahoko somehow managed to Waterbend a shield between her and the soldier. The fire was cut off, and the friends continued running for their lives, first between houses, then through forests, until they stopped in another town two days later. They warned the town of the danger before heading off again. Hyana and Mahoko knew that they couldn’t stay in the towns to long, in case the Fire Nation would be on their tales. They stayed on the move for many months, until they had enough skills to survive in the wild. One day, a couple of months later, Mahoko boarded a ship going to the Northern Water Tribe. Since that day, Hyana has traveled non-stop, sometimes camping in forests, sometimes staying in towns and working odd jobs, but the same question flutters into her mind everyday: How the heck will she survive? And what became of her neighbors and town? She can only dream as her destiny unravels before her.


I've only drawn her once of twice, and this is the first time I've OC Request-ed her!

[~*Tea Sage*~]

Alright, cool SakuraTheFanatic^^, I'll work on it this week....of finals, but I'll work on it. Can you by any chance post the two drawing you did of her, or just send it to me privately (PM)!!

Anyways here's my drawing for pirateliz's character:

i9.tinypic.com/82to2vo.jpg

I found drawing Abeni, personally very challenging since there isn't much images of sandbenders, let alone FEMALE sandbenders. Not only then, pretty much everything was new to me.

1) I hardly ever drew children before, so it was very hard to draw their anatomy. But, I drew inspiration from anime, usually children have big eyes/head and a stumpy body.

2) I don't know how to draw a variety of hair, so when pirateliz asked me to draw high double buns for Abeni's hairstyle, I was pretty much clueless as to how it was made, thus drawn. A quick research showed it was pretty easy, but drawing the bun was still a challenge, I didn't want to draw two oval and call it buns, so it took me sometime to draw the bun until I was satisfied.

3) Definitely never drew anyone wearing hijab, so it took me awhile to find some good images. I'm not really satisfied as to how it turn on, my rough sketch pictures were better. .And I know she looks funny with it on, but thats what a person would look like if they have two buns on their head.

4) The cleft lip is impossible to draw in anime, anime artstyle is too simple. I think I failed miserably at this, I ended up drawing what looks like a smudge. Its hard because if you draw the cleft lips closed, it looks like a tongue sticking up.

5) The clothing was a bummer, sandbenders clothings were overly simplifed, and I really wanted to adapt traditional tribal clothing, so I searched up some tribal pictures from pakistan and other desert region, and well lets just say there clothing were very rich with colors and embroidery; it just seems it contradicts sandbenders clothing scheme. Even though I was about to do it anyways, I remembered Abeni is poor, so I doubt she would have any colorful garments to where anyways.

6) I was kind of rushing, so it looks kind of rough...Overall, I'd say I'm pretty happy with the drawing form the left, but from the right, I'd say it could use a little bit of more fine tuning, I think I made her look too skinny, or her dress too narrow. And I wasn't very satisfied with the clothes, it doesnt look like something a kid would wear.

anyways, maybe third time is a charm!!

[~*Tea Sage*~]

Hey guys, to force myself to start drawing again, even if its small. I'm starting up my OC Request Shop.

I few minor changes:
*I will only do one request a week, Until the end of july, then I will decide whether if I will stop or do more requests per week.

*I required a picture of your character for the drawing.

And sorry to the other people request that I never got to finishing. I will start fresh.

[Chibi Chan-o]

I'm putting in a request. I can wait a few weeks; I like your art. ^_^

+ Name: Kiyoraka Megami (last name, then first)
+ Age: 14-15 (not decided)
+ Gender: Female
+ Detailed Physical Description:[url=http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/5251/kiyorakamegamicharactervs8.jpg
] Character sheet ^^[/url] (the link's being weird, so when it pops up in the address bar, just take off the <br/> on the end)
+ Background Information: Okay, I'll give you a small backstory. Megami is a girl who is a Tengoku worshipper (a denomination in her world). However, the country she lives in persecutes people like her and one day, she flees her village (a major center for Tengoku worship) after it is attacked. The only place safe for her to go is the country where Tengoku originated, as it is blessed with military prowess. The problem is, she would have to travel hundreds of miles through enemy territory to get there. So a local to her village, a boy named Senshi, reluctantly agrees to guard her as she makes her journey. (It's supposed to be a Holocaust type thing set in a fantasy world, and Megami doesn't live in the Tengoku country; she lives in a country that borders it)
+ Other: She's happy, quiet, and nice, but she's a very sad person on the inside. Easily frightened.

[~*Tea Sage*~]

haha I'm guessing your character was heavily inspired from sakura from Naruto? lol, sorry kiddo, I'm gonna have to change her a little, ain't no pink hair in the world of naruto. But, I'll see what I can do to compensate for it, find a nice natural color for it.

yes, I plan on coloring it, I need to learn digital painting, though I'm starting with flats for now though. I want to start with the basic.

lol what? Okay, I just reread her story, I'm guessing this has absolutely nothing to do with avatar does it. lol. Sigh. Its whatever. I'll make this an exception, but next time it has to avatar related.

[Chibi Chan-o]

That's what a lot of people say she looks like but she isn't!!! I actually use hair color, eye color, and names for symbolism for character personality. Pink is fragile, as is Megami's character. (I've been in English class too long XD) Besides, she's an anime based character; anime people have technicolor hair. XD

But I'm open to character edits so if you find a better hair color, I might keep it.

EDIT:

Yeah, she ain't Avatar, sorry. The other request threads don't mind non-Avatar requests so I thought you wouldn't either.

[~*Tea Sage*~]

nah I don't mind, lol. It doesn't make a difference really, since characters will be characters. Though, I under the impression that I was going to do avatar OC related stuff at first, since its under the Avatar board.

Its all good, I won't be changing your character's hair then, but I'll definitely change some minor things, since well we have to change that first impression of your character don't we. lol

[Chibi Chan-o]

You'd be surprised. In the Icon and Signature boards, people do non-Avatar stuff all the time. XD (my icons and signatures were all requested from the Avatar icon/sig board)

Yay, some OC edits!!! I'm bad at clothing design sooooo..... As long as we keep her shoes the same. XD

[~*Tea Sage*~]

hey I'm going to change the outfit, I'll still make it pink though, though I figured, a girl getting persrcuited wouldn't be running around in a skimpy outfit...then again....we are talking about anime...so anything is possible

Basically I'm going to deskimpify her, make her look more fitting for age. sorry....

[~*Tea Sage*~]

Here's A Rough Drawing:
i31.tinypic.com/wtt9vc.jpg

I'm pretty satisfied with it, I'll clean up the line, and straighten out her posture when I clean the lineworks on photoshop (I'm learning), and then I'll color it with flats..

Anyways this is about as much as I'm gonna do today. Just check up gain by the end of the week or this weekend. I'll have it done by then.

BUT!! If your not satisfied with something, just ask me to change it, this is after all your character.