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Post by kaibasgirl on May 18, 2008 2:35:33 GMT -5
Dazzle...LOL, yah, right XD uh...wow, that's really, really dark, and AU-ish.
I like the alternate reality bit of it, sounds very intriguing. Kind of reminds me of that episode in Justice League Unlimited that had that AR where Flash died by Superman's hands, though this is waaay darker than that episode ever was.
I'd read it if you decide to write it up, definitely an interesting idea, especially the part where Katara's haunted by thoughts of Hama after throwing Zuko off a cliff XD though I don't see why her mother would be disappointed in her. That's more Azula's department, speaking of which, do you always have to be so mean to her -__- a lobotomized pet? Honestly, just kill her off instead of humiliating her that way. She's not that, M&B said there's still hope for her. but I guess to each their own.
Though my only question would be why Dark!Zuko would demand that the true heir (Iroh) come claim the throne, and why when he finally faces him and Ursa, he says Zuko's dead...
also, I thought that the point of the demons was to bring more of their kind into the mortal world, so why'd they just pick up and leave...?
if I'm being annoying, just ignore me XD but those are just some things that struck me as odd.
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Post by marvel26 on May 18, 2008 2:41:51 GMT -5
Dazzle...LOL, yah, right XD uh...wow, that's really, really dark, and AU-ish.
I like the alternate reality bit of it, sounds very intriguing. Kind of reminds me of that episode in Justice League Unlimited that had that AR where Flash died by Superman's hands, though this is waaay darker than that episode ever was.
I'd read it if you decide to write it up, definitely an interesting idea, especially the part where Katara's haunted by thoughts of Hama after throwing Zuko off a cliff XD though I don't see why her mother would be disappointed in her. That's more Azula's department, speaking of which, do you always have to be so mean to her -__- a lobotomized pet? Honestly, just kill her off instead of humiliating her that way. She's not that, M&B said there's still hope for her. but I guess to each their own.
Though my only question would be why Dark!Zuko would demand that the true heir (Iroh) come claim the throne, and why when he finally faces him and Ursa, he says Zuko's dead...
also, I thought that the point of the demons was to bring more of their kind into the mortal world, so why'd they just pick up and leave...?
if I'm being annoying, just ignore me XD but those are just some things that struck me as odd. After all he's done, Zuko doesn't consider himself a son to Ursa and Iroh anymore. Plus the demonic influence is getting stronger. Zuko and Suki are just still human enough to have hearts. That's why they left. Would you rather they stayed and destroyed the world? Like I said, it's just an idea. I don't have all the details yet. I'm mean to Azula? Well, then I guess I have to scrap WT6 then, if all I can be is mean to her. Guess she doesn't deserve her spotlight chapter than....
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Post by kaibasgirl on May 18, 2008 2:46:55 GMT -5
Sure, that works but seriously, what about Aang exorcising the demonic spirit or something? Well, then again, if you want to end it on a more tragic note, the former will work better. I really like the idea of Dark Aang a lot though, it would be awesome if you developed it more (in the AR sense, not in the Koh-Aang sense, you know, like he actually tries to steal Toph cause he failed to do so the first time because of his...ah...error). EDIT: don't scrap the chapter! I just really hate the word lobodomy >__> the entire concept creeps me out to no end. um...ignore me. really.
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Post by marvel26 on May 18, 2008 2:52:43 GMT -5
Sure, that works but seriously, what about Aang exorcising the demonic spirit or something? Well, then again, if you want to end it on a more tragic note, the former will work better. I really like the idea of Dark Aang a lot though, it would be awesome if you developed it more (in the AR sense, not in the Koh-Aang sense, you know, like he actually tries to steal Toph cause he failed to do so the first time because of his...ah...error). Azula's spotlight chapter is good to her. But since you said that all I can be is mean to her, then I'll just have to change it to suit your expectantions then, won't I? Dark!Aang is psychotic. He wouldn't try to steal Toph. He'd kill everything around her first then take her. I won't write Aang being able to exorcise the demons, he's already too powerful, why add another item to his repetoire? Let some one else do it. In fact I planned on having Dark!Zuko beat the living hell out of Aang just before leaving...but then I remembered good Aang would still be just a 12 year old kid, so I scrapped that idea. The idea of Dark!Zuko, Dark!Suki and Dark!Aang leaving was also a kick to opposition ships. "There you've got your Kataang and Tokka. The opposing characters (Zuko and Suki) are evil and inhuman now. We can all hate them without feeling bad."
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Post by kaibasgirl on May 18, 2008 3:01:43 GMT -5
And since when do you do things to suit my expectations? -__-;;;
I'll shut up now.
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Post by marvel26 on May 18, 2008 3:04:34 GMT -5
-__-; I wasn't expecting anything. okay, I'm shutting up. I was using a joking tone. Darn the written media for not conveying my thoughts correctly. As a matter of fact I like writing for Azula. I like writing for villians in general. For Azula I can use a sense of sophistication and wit I can't use for the other girls. Sure I can give Katara, Toph and Suki sharp wits, but with Azula there's the nobility factor to enter as well. I look at Azula (And Zuko by extention) and I think British Comedy style wit. Dry and biting yet smooth. The hard thing is that in the World Tour series Azula's been brain damaged by Blood bending and can't fully remember her past personality. She's still scathing and viper-ish but nicer. I'm having a hard time keeping her good while trying to fully flesh her out without reverting her to her evil ways.
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Post by kaibasgirl on May 18, 2008 3:14:20 GMT -5
ohhh, sorry ^^; I'm sick and have a cold, so I'm a bit slow today.
mmm good luck with that. I find her hard to write as is because her personality's changed so drastically in the show. It's like she jumped from being cold and calculating to borderline manic. I guess that's what happens when everything starts crashing down.
but, um, back to Taang.
I like that kick at the other ships XD it's kind of like, you got the pairings you wanted, but at what price type of concept.
Though, truth be told, Zuko doesn't really affect Kataang too much XD all things considered, he has Mai.
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Post by marvel26 on May 18, 2008 3:23:25 GMT -5
ohhh, sorry ^^; I'm sick and have a cold, so I'm a bit slow today. but, um, back to Taang. I like that kick at the other ships XD it's kind of like, you got the pairings you wanted, but at what price type of concept. Though, truth be told, Zuko doesn't really affect Kataang too much XD all things considered, he has Mai. I hope you feel better soon. The underlying villian of the Dark!Story would have been Katara...because frankly, it's all her fault. And that Justice League episode you were referring to was titled 'A Better World'. An AU where Luthor became President and killed Flash. Hence the rest of the League taking up arms and instituting martial law on the world and calling themselves Justice Lords. That concept would be revisited later on in the series by The Question. And yes, back to the Taang. Any new fanarts and fics while I was away?
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Post by kaibasgirl on May 18, 2008 3:33:39 GMT -5
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Post by firefly101 on May 18, 2008 7:22:32 GMT -5
^ Imma Still behind with a lotta coloring. T.T
O, And Marvel! I loved the alternate idea! I even sketched dark!Aang. Well. that's at least I want him to be as a demon. Veeeeery evil~!
I've always thought that a deeper and darker plot actually fits avatar, not some happy ending childish fairy tale. If only Avatar was made in japan, it could best naruto and co. ...Butthat's just delusional me. ^^
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Post by kaibasgirl on May 18, 2008 12:35:12 GMT -5
whoa, firefly, I just saw your sketches! They came out really, really cool! I love how you did Dark!Aang XD he really looks creepy! Yeah, there's so much potential in the Avatarverse, they could've gone in a million directions with their story. But I guess that's just Aang's character, innocent till the very end -.- but I'm not complaining that it wasn't made in Japan XD otherwise every fight would be ten times longer + there would probably be more talking between every move. And every scene would be very drawn out. And until Aang enters the AS, there would probably be some intro. with flashing lights, and maybe some snappy phrase like, "Avatar Spirit, activate!" -exploding lights and music- -Aang transforms- "Prepare to meet your demise!" eh, that's not a good catchphrase, but it's the only one I can think of right now XD There's a thread around here somewhere about if Avatar would be an anime, it's hilarious to read through, I'll see if I can find it and link it here. EDIT: Here it is! =D
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Post by marvel26 on May 18, 2008 20:46:12 GMT -5
WT6 is coming along nicely.
There isn't much Taang in it, being a Azula spotlight chapter and all, but I think I can slip in a few things.
The working title is 'Mask of the Blue Spirit'
There's a Dark!Aang sketch?
Edit: Found the Dark!Aang sketch. Very nice Firefly. The spikes on his arm remind me of Agni and Rudra from Devil May Cry 3.
WT6 is running out of control. I'm at 21 pages and I haven't even touched on the main meat of the chapter!
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Post by kaibasgirl on May 19, 2008 1:16:43 GMT -5
Omgosh guys, you must check out this sketch! It is absolutely gorgeous!
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Post by kaibasgirl on May 19, 2008 10:06:43 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on May 19, 2008 14:15:57 GMT -5
firefly- I just checked out your gallery. You have one of the most amazing gallery's on DA. *karma*
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