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Post by kataangist™ Is Nostolgic <3 on Apr 6, 2007 17:29:22 GMT -5
Name: Hwonita (Huh-won-eat-a) Gender: Female Nation: Water Age: 14 Bender: Yes
Physical Appearence: Hwonita is a tall, thin girl with long brown hair and light coloured skin. She is about 5'5". She has small hands and feet, her hair goes down to her hips and is like a mother to her younger siblings.
Clothing: Her clothes are traditional Water Tribe that are sky blue robes with a dark blue belt. She also owns her great grand-mother's dagger in her great grand-mother's dagger holder.
Personality: Hwonita is a sweet and loving 14 year old who loves taking car of her 10 younger siblings and sometimes she even takes car of her 16 year old brother. She may be sweet but when she fight she takes no prisoners!
History: Hwonita's past is a sad one; when she was just 6 years of age her perants were killed in a boating trip, and she was left with her great grand-mother and father and now has to take care of her 10 younger siblings, 5 girls and 5 boys. The girls' names are Emiko, Akemi, Chidori, Hanae and Ioe. The Boys' names are Akashi, Chiyo, Dainagon, Hakaru and Junji. These names ARE asian!!! ( Japenese Actually! But that IS Asian! ) She was taught by her perants and then by her great grand-mother. She is greatly friendly with everone in the tribe but dosen't get on with her goofy older brother Shwolock.
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Kana
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Post by Kana on Apr 6, 2007 23:00:34 GMT -5
I dont accept these or anything, but I would advise you NOT to use your ship as your OC's name. It makes your character very Mary Sue.
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Post by kataangist™ Is Nostolgic <3 on Apr 7, 2007 12:36:55 GMT -5
What is Mary-Sue?
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Horyo
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Post by Horyo on Apr 7, 2007 22:50:19 GMT -5
Kanasha is right.
And..Rad? That's asian?
Mary Sues are abominations to the RP world, they are perfet people, or unoriginal creations by RPers/fiction authors who based their character off that of the show.
Please add more detail and change some names (Rad, Rachol?) And Kataangistra and Zutarain.
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Post by kataangist™ Is Nostolgic <3 on Apr 8, 2007 4:35:53 GMT -5
ok i'll change the ship names, but i did get those names of a baby name site and ok i wasn't looking at the origin so i'll change them to!
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Post by Zukosfire5 on Apr 8, 2007 18:07:04 GMT -5
Also, please don't list her qualities, but describe them in a paragraph instead. Check out some of the accepted profile to see what I mean.
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