Post by catalyst283 on Jan 17, 2007 23:13:54 GMT -5
Never thought I'd be doing this; but hey; I saw the spirirt RP thing and thought of my OC; and wanted to work on her more to be able to use her in the spirit RP.
So yea, I need to work on her more, most likely; or should I completely change her around? (Some may consider her Mary-Sueish; I'm not sure)
Name: The spirit, Jia
Gender: Female
Age: Deceased, is now a spirit; though was in her 30's when she died.
Appearance: As a spirit she has light skin (similar to Fire Nation skin, but that does not necessarily mean she was Fire Nation) that is china smooth, no wrinkles; long, thick hair that is light brown. She has bright green eyes and is thin, but has noticeable curves. She is tall, about 5'10.
(Will have to work on her appearance more; may be slight Mary-Sueish; but you have to read more before completely saying that)
Personality: Soft and quiet spirit. She feels mortal people's emotional pain and it affects her as physical pain would in the physical world (i.e., the world you live in when you're alive). She is very quick to anger, especially when interacting with "mortals", but never raises her voice or shouts at anybody, making those whom she appears to very scared as she does not get 'upset' but rather 'disappointed' when mad at someone. And that is scarier when someone yells at you, for Jia’s disappointment sinks into the person’s very soul and makes them feel very guilty and almost ‘eats away at their soul’.
Her voice usually is the only thing that signals her emotions, for her face is usually emotionless mask. (Yet to see an emotion on Jia’s face, her tone alerts people to her emotions, like when it went soft when Jia is telling bad news, or flat when she has told people they only exist as a spirit (after their "wish") as if Jia didn’t like being a spirit herself)
She is the person who, as she says herself, “helps show the future to those who wish to change the past.” Meaning basically that she makes true people’s wishes to change the past and she shows them the future that resulted. No, she is not a ‘fairy godmother’ or something along those lines. She just has the ability to change the past as people perceive it; though really she is just "showing" people what could happen, though it doesn't have to happen.
As for the rest; the bio, spirit Connection, ect; I hope you all don't mind that everything else is kind of written in this story I wrote and hard to explain otherwise.
(I explain the appearance of her; why she's a spirit and her job, ect. in chapter 5 (and kind of throughout the story); it will make her pretty much un-mary sue; I believe; maybe not
)
www.fanfiction.net/s/2998232/1/
^Basically; that's one instance where someone "wished they were never born" and she "granted the wish".
If she's too Mary Sue; though, I don't have to use her, just a possibility, and I thought maybe she was sort of good enough for the spirit RP.
So yea, I need to work on her more, most likely; or should I completely change her around? (Some may consider her Mary-Sueish; I'm not sure)
Name: The spirit, Jia
Gender: Female
Age: Deceased, is now a spirit; though was in her 30's when she died.
Appearance: As a spirit she has light skin (similar to Fire Nation skin, but that does not necessarily mean she was Fire Nation) that is china smooth, no wrinkles; long, thick hair that is light brown. She has bright green eyes and is thin, but has noticeable curves. She is tall, about 5'10.
(Will have to work on her appearance more; may be slight Mary-Sueish; but you have to read more before completely saying that)
Personality: Soft and quiet spirit. She feels mortal people's emotional pain and it affects her as physical pain would in the physical world (i.e., the world you live in when you're alive). She is very quick to anger, especially when interacting with "mortals", but never raises her voice or shouts at anybody, making those whom she appears to very scared as she does not get 'upset' but rather 'disappointed' when mad at someone. And that is scarier when someone yells at you, for Jia’s disappointment sinks into the person’s very soul and makes them feel very guilty and almost ‘eats away at their soul’.
Her voice usually is the only thing that signals her emotions, for her face is usually emotionless mask. (Yet to see an emotion on Jia’s face, her tone alerts people to her emotions, like when it went soft when Jia is telling bad news, or flat when she has told people they only exist as a spirit (after their "wish") as if Jia didn’t like being a spirit herself)
She is the person who, as she says herself, “helps show the future to those who wish to change the past.” Meaning basically that she makes true people’s wishes to change the past and she shows them the future that resulted. No, she is not a ‘fairy godmother’ or something along those lines. She just has the ability to change the past as people perceive it; though really she is just "showing" people what could happen, though it doesn't have to happen.
As for the rest; the bio, spirit Connection, ect; I hope you all don't mind that everything else is kind of written in this story I wrote and hard to explain otherwise.
(I explain the appearance of her; why she's a spirit and her job, ect. in chapter 5 (and kind of throughout the story); it will make her pretty much un-mary sue; I believe; maybe not
)www.fanfiction.net/s/2998232/1/
^Basically; that's one instance where someone "wished they were never born" and she "granted the wish".
If she's too Mary Sue; though, I don't have to use her, just a possibility, and I thought maybe she was sort of good enough for the spirit RP.
