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Tikaion
Dec 15, 2006 19:11:49 GMT -5
Post by writer on Dec 15, 2006 19:11:49 GMT -5
Delete your post in Feral Insticts, this Character isn't Approved
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Tikaion
Dec 15, 2006 19:16:49 GMT -5
Post by Kataang's Supreme on Dec 15, 2006 19:16:49 GMT -5
What is wrong?
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Tikaion
Dec 15, 2006 19:20:00 GMT -5
Post by writer on Dec 15, 2006 19:20:00 GMT -5
First it isn't check and Approved Second I reconmend you use our Format, because I can't read it
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Edynol
Momo 
Elite Starbender
Posts: 46
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Tikaion
Dec 15, 2006 19:20:14 GMT -5
Post by Edynol on Dec 15, 2006 19:20:14 GMT -5
You might want to look at other people's characters that have been approved and see how their bios look. Your whole intro is not even two paragraphs long. You need to take your time and put a good deal of thought into your intro. I didn't even get approved the first time around, and I did put alot of thought in mine. Just be creative. And if you don't get it all right, the RP admins/mods will guide you until you have a great intro.  |
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