Post by syarafire on Jan 22, 2007 17:39:44 GMT -5
I've been wanting to roleplay lately, so I figured I might as well tweak my Avatar character's profile a bit and post it up here. I'd love some advice/constructive criticism, since I'm afraid that she might be a bit too uninteresting. Thank you!
Name: Mali
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Nation: Earth Kingdom
Bender?: No
Appearance: Mali has tangled and messy brown hair that reaches just above her shoulders, and green eyes. She is rather scrawny, standing at 4'11" and weighing 90 pounds. Mali wears an oversized dark green shirt and a pair of worn and tattered baggy green pants. The sleeves of her shirt stop around her elbow. Her forearms are bare, but her hands are wrapped in bandages to allow for easier handling of her bow. Her tomboyish look is perhaps caused by the lack of an outstanding mother figure in her family.
Personality: If one were to meet Mali for the first time; the first outstanding personality trait they would notice would be her laziness. She is rarely willing to train; rather, she enjoys more leisurely activities such as reading or socializing with friends and family. She is rather perceptive to others' emotions, and can easily figure out when someone is troubled or upset. However, because of her lack of patience, she is rarely able to effectively console others. She is easily annoyed and angered; and she easily becomes jealous of others. However, she is trustworthy and mature, and she knows not to cross the line in arguments by using blackmail or personal insults.
History: Mali was born in the same village she currently resides in, of two middle-class Earth Kingdom parents. She is the eldest child of two, her brother being two years her younger. When she was four years old, her mother became ill and died. Although it caused the family much grief at the time, they eventually overcame it and went on with their lives. In order to cope with the loss of a family member's income, Mali has tried many times to get a job. However, she has been fired at almost all of them for frequently coming in late and oversleeping. She began her archery training when she was only eight years old, under her father's guidance. She didn't advance in skill very much until she turned thirteen, when she finally began to take the war and her own fighting skill seriously. She still slacks off and neglects her training frequently, but she tries to train at least once per week.
Name: Mali
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Nation: Earth Kingdom
Bender?: No
Appearance: Mali has tangled and messy brown hair that reaches just above her shoulders, and green eyes. She is rather scrawny, standing at 4'11" and weighing 90 pounds. Mali wears an oversized dark green shirt and a pair of worn and tattered baggy green pants. The sleeves of her shirt stop around her elbow. Her forearms are bare, but her hands are wrapped in bandages to allow for easier handling of her bow. Her tomboyish look is perhaps caused by the lack of an outstanding mother figure in her family.
Personality: If one were to meet Mali for the first time; the first outstanding personality trait they would notice would be her laziness. She is rarely willing to train; rather, she enjoys more leisurely activities such as reading or socializing with friends and family. She is rather perceptive to others' emotions, and can easily figure out when someone is troubled or upset. However, because of her lack of patience, she is rarely able to effectively console others. She is easily annoyed and angered; and she easily becomes jealous of others. However, she is trustworthy and mature, and she knows not to cross the line in arguments by using blackmail or personal insults.
History: Mali was born in the same village she currently resides in, of two middle-class Earth Kingdom parents. She is the eldest child of two, her brother being two years her younger. When she was four years old, her mother became ill and died. Although it caused the family much grief at the time, they eventually overcame it and went on with their lives. In order to cope with the loss of a family member's income, Mali has tried many times to get a job. However, she has been fired at almost all of them for frequently coming in late and oversleeping. She began her archery training when she was only eight years old, under her father's guidance. She didn't advance in skill very much until she turned thirteen, when she finally began to take the war and her own fighting skill seriously. She still slacks off and neglects her training frequently, but she tries to train at least once per week.