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Post by Sazzy-Luff <3 on Dec 17, 2007 18:23:23 GMT -5
Torn is a fanfiction written by me (well duh. xD) There is no specific time when it takes place, but there is some form of timeline. I included some things that have happenened on the show, such as the Crystal Catacombs, and made reference to others as well. I have it posted on FanFiction.net. Please read it and give me reviews! I'd love to see more people read my work, and it makes writing worth the time! If you don't have an account there, post here and tell me! I'll take crits, comments, and suggestions for future chapters. I'll update when there's a new chapter up. ;D Current ChaptersChapter 1: DisorientedChatper 2: ColleaguesChapter 3: Saved |
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Post by ReelTrebleMaker on Dec 19, 2007 15:26:10 GMT -5
I like it. Both parts. It's interesting and intriguing, but I wonder... when is this story taking place? Is it after The Crossroads of Destiny? As a helpful comment, I'd like to suggest putting spaces between the end punctuation and the next sentence; I found this problem only in the 2nd part. It would make it easier to read!  I'd really like to see what happens next, and how Katara got lost in the first place. (And where Zuko went, obviously. *wink*) I'm a huge Zutara fan, so I'm excited to see how this plays out.  |
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Post by Sazzy-Luff <3 on Dec 19, 2007 15:42:45 GMT -5
I know there's a spacing problem in the second part. >.< I don't know how it got there. Probably just the way it was loaded from my computers. So, that was just an accident. ;] As for time...well, I guess you could say that it's a bit after the Crossroads of Destiny. I never have a set timeline, because I like to write around my timing, and not so much the show's. I'll include bits and pieces of information that occured on the show, but unless it's mentioned, you can assume that it either hasn't happened in my book, hasn't been brought up yet, or there's a specific reason. Thanks for reading! |
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Post by Sazzy-Luff <3 on Dec 21, 2007 9:35:28 GMT -5
Chapter 3 is now up! ;D
Come on...you know you want to read it! hurhurhur. ^_^
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Post by watergirl on Mar 15, 2008 12:49:55 GMT -5
NIce Fic, well written.
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Post by Sakura on Mar 15, 2008 17:04:44 GMT -5
I guess you did a good job... But it kinda sounds like they have electricity in the prison...
Good job, I guess... That might be all you get from a rabid Kataanger, though. LOLz, sorry.
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Post by firefists101 on Mar 26, 2008 13:23:03 GMT -5
Very good job. =]
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