Seabiscuit
Naga
Named for a Legend
I drive a flying bison, what else do you need to know?
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Post by Seabiscuit on Jul 18, 2007 16:58:35 GMT -5
I'm at a writer's workshop. I don't normally do poetry but since I had to...
I was born into a world of darkness, My parents worry constantly, Because my gray eyes are sightless. But I've never had a problem seeing, Every movement rings through the earth, And shivers through my feet, Showing me what I cannot see.
My parents never could understand, That my weakness is my greatest strength. I literally listen to the earth beneath, To see what it has to teach me, But the sound of roaring cheers, Is my favorite thing to hear.
I fought at Earth Rumble Six, Until my parent discovered my double life. They wanted to lock me up, I protested & even shed a tear, All to no avail, so I ran away. I'm going to see the world, With my feet anyway.
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Post by Blind Bandit on Jul 18, 2007 17:05:10 GMT -5
nice job karma also don't worry poetry is hard to write I know.lol
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Seabiscuit
Naga
Named for a Legend
I drive a flying bison, what else do you need to know?
Posts: 2,494
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Post by Seabiscuit on Jul 18, 2007 17:06:33 GMT -5
Thanks BB! *hugs*
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Post by Blind Bandit on Jul 18, 2007 17:20:46 GMT -5
your wlecome are you going to share the other one you did?
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Post by avaspaz on Jul 23, 2007 18:18:07 GMT -5
good job! you should be proud ;D
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ZukosGirl
Bolin
Mad-Eye and Sokka have so much in common
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Post by ZukosGirl on Jul 23, 2007 18:29:26 GMT -5
I really think this is a great little poem! You've pretty much captured how Toph feels about her life and her parents. Good job!
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Seabiscuit
Naga
Named for a Legend
I drive a flying bison, what else do you need to know?
Posts: 2,494
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Post by Seabiscuit on Jul 23, 2007 19:31:24 GMT -5
Thanks guys!
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