Post by aangxchild on Jun 30, 2007 0:06:37 GMT -5
Okay, this is just merely to practice my poetry skills. I needed a subject to base this poem on so I've decided Maiko 
. It was more of a mere thought just out of my head for a few minutes while listening to a song. Tell me what you think.
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Time came and went.
Years were not spent.
I hope you know I could never forget.
From childhood memories.
To our darkest enemies.
I really hope you honestly remember me.
I never had the chance to say how I really cared.
From the breath of a demon, was what I really feared.
In my heart, my words shuttered alone and scared.
I see you now, you haven't changed too much.
Fingers laced together, eye closed, lips to a touch.
I realize now, this is pure love, not just a simple crush.
Times seem difficult, they seem like a dreaded task.
It felt much easier long ago in our simple past.
But the time flew by, and soon it went by to fast.
From the scars, and the tears I cried.
From the day you left me, I felt as if I died.
But now I see you again, and yet my emotions hide.
Please listen once, this is something I must do.
Tell you my deepest love, and tell you the passion that burns true.
I need you Zuko, and I will always love you.
. It was more of a mere thought just out of my head for a few minutes while listening to a song. Tell me what you think. ---
Time came and went.
Years were not spent.
I hope you know I could never forget.
From childhood memories.
To our darkest enemies.
I really hope you honestly remember me.
I never had the chance to say how I really cared.
From the breath of a demon, was what I really feared.
In my heart, my words shuttered alone and scared.
I see you now, you haven't changed too much.
Fingers laced together, eye closed, lips to a touch.
I realize now, this is pure love, not just a simple crush.
Times seem difficult, they seem like a dreaded task.
It felt much easier long ago in our simple past.
But the time flew by, and soon it went by to fast.
From the scars, and the tears I cried.
From the day you left me, I felt as if I died.
But now I see you again, and yet my emotions hide.
Please listen once, this is something I must do.
Tell you my deepest love, and tell you the passion that burns true.
I need you Zuko, and I will always love you.
Again, awesome writing and Zuko would (well should) be flattered. 
