Post by historyman12 on May 27, 2007 11:36:07 GMT -5
BC: I followed your genral request on names, and many of may major characters have Chinese names. I hope you'rr happy.
The war rom was dark, the only light being from Sozin's ring of fire around his throne.
"Xiang Xun." bellowed Sozin, and Xun stepped up.
"Y-yes, my lord," said Xun
"How are the preparations coming?" asked Sozin
"They go well, my lord, the attack on the temples is set to be swift, and decisive"
"True to your style."
"Of course your highness."
"You may sit now, thank you. Chang Fu Li! Your turn to report, is the king fooled?"
"Yes, on the attack led by Zhen Yi is still set as a diplomatic journey by Bao Cheng, giving us an excuse to bring large forces; using them as bodyguards."
"Or so they think," Bao Cheng chimed in
"Yes, we know that Bao" Chang replied with exasperation
"sorry" Bao said curtly
"Back to the plan" said Sozin
"well, lord that's really it."
"Good, now Ru Wen, have you suggestions for anyone? You seem to know how past invasions have gone." said Sozin
"Why, yes, we beat Chin back due to our nationalism, and zeal to defend our homeland. Chin got as far as the beach on our second sourthern-most island due to surprise. We are nearly guarranteed Kai-Amibola but we must continue to keep them guessing, perhaps invasions on other areas and courses that seem different from what it looks like we would do. But that-of course" he said gesturing to the two genrals in presence. "Is up to our noble commanders. Two more things your grace, do you mind if I continue?"
"Yes, yes" Sozin replied distantly
"Thank you lord. Now, we must wzage a sea war, our navy could destroy theirs even if our navy was half its current size. We ought to blockade their ports and wreck their navy, they will be forced to divert men from their land forces to try and rebuild their own and attack our ships. Last, since they have national zeal, we ought to keep up ours, perhaps through propaganda, or other means. That isall your highness."
"Good ideas Ru, as usual. You are all dismissed!" he said cheerfully.
Well, that was the first scene. I know its awful
The war rom was dark, the only light being from Sozin's ring of fire around his throne.
"Xiang Xun." bellowed Sozin, and Xun stepped up.
"Y-yes, my lord," said Xun
"How are the preparations coming?" asked Sozin
"They go well, my lord, the attack on the temples is set to be swift, and decisive"
"True to your style."
"Of course your highness."
"You may sit now, thank you. Chang Fu Li! Your turn to report, is the king fooled?"
"Yes, on the attack led by Zhen Yi is still set as a diplomatic journey by Bao Cheng, giving us an excuse to bring large forces; using them as bodyguards."
"Or so they think," Bao Cheng chimed in
"Yes, we know that Bao" Chang replied with exasperation
"sorry" Bao said curtly
"Back to the plan" said Sozin
"well, lord that's really it."
"Good, now Ru Wen, have you suggestions for anyone? You seem to know how past invasions have gone." said Sozin
"Why, yes, we beat Chin back due to our nationalism, and zeal to defend our homeland. Chin got as far as the beach on our second sourthern-most island due to surprise. We are nearly guarranteed Kai-Amibola but we must continue to keep them guessing, perhaps invasions on other areas and courses that seem different from what it looks like we would do. But that-of course" he said gesturing to the two genrals in presence. "Is up to our noble commanders. Two more things your grace, do you mind if I continue?"
"Yes, yes" Sozin replied distantly
"Thank you lord. Now, we must wzage a sea war, our navy could destroy theirs even if our navy was half its current size. We ought to blockade their ports and wreck their navy, they will be forced to divert men from their land forces to try and rebuild their own and attack our ships. Last, since they have national zeal, we ought to keep up ours, perhaps through propaganda, or other means. That isall your highness."
"Good ideas Ru, as usual. You are all dismissed!" he said cheerfully.
Well, that was the first scene. I know its awful