Ulu
Aang
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Post by Ulu on Mar 8, 2007 8:06:28 GMT -5
Do the next part! I really wanna see it!!!
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Post by Sokkaroksya on Mar 11, 2007 18:03:36 GMT -5
Yeah, man! Next part! w00t!
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Post by KyoshiWarrior on Mar 12, 2007 13:26:36 GMT -5
please put the next chapter up!!! I'll give you karma!! your story is good!!
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Post by Kirsten on Mar 12, 2007 22:22:13 GMT -5
I thought you said it would be up Sunday. Did you mean Sunday, March 18?
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Ming Ue
Haru
MingZula: The one true ship!
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Post by Ming Ue on Mar 18, 2007 18:54:08 GMT -5
A/N: Wow I’m learning not to make you wait forever for a new chapter. After this one I’m going to be updating another story, but don’t worry I’m not leaving this one. More chapters will be up in the following weeks. P.S all songs in this story that the girls sing unless said otherwise are made by me so if they suck…sorry.
Chapter Eight
Miya tapped her foot as she waited for Zuko at the back of the school, he wanted to meet her after school and he was the one who was late. “Just like a man,” she mumbled to herself. She heard foot steps and turned around to see Zuko running towards her holding something in his arms. He stopped in front of her and gripped his knees catching his breath.
“S…sorry for being late…” he gasped and stood up. There was a light blush on his face and she couldn’t help giggle.
“It’s okay babe,” she told him. “What did you call me for though? I have to meet Katara, Yue and Toph.”
Zuko looked down and he pushed a sliver jersey into her face.
“Wha?” she took it and opened it up. It was Zuko’s football jersey with a big red number one on it and his name on the back. “Zuko…you’re giving me your jersey?” she asked looking at him.
He had a light blush on his nose and he scratched his head. “Yeah well you’re the only girl I ever dated that really deserved to wear it. I hope you do wear it…I know it’s not your style and all but…” he was cut of when he felt her kiss him.
Miya pulled back smiling, she slid the jersey on with a prideful smile on her face. “I’m proud to wear your jersey,” she said kissing him again before running of. “I have to go meet the girls, but I’ll call you tonight.”
Miya practically skipped to the bus stop where her friends were waiting for her.
“Hey nice jersey,” Toph said sarcastically.
“Thank you Toph,” Miya said not caring about the sarcasm and twirling around.
Yue smiled and looked at Katara. “So now they are official.”
“Weren’t they official before?” Katara asked.
“Not in the eyes of the jocks and preps. One a football player gives his girlfriend his jersey they are going steady,” she explained.
Miya stopped twirling around. “Do you think I should give him my soccer jersey?”
“Girls don’t give the boys their jerseys,” Yue replied.
“Why not?” asked Miya.
“Because…” Yue started
“Because no matter how cool Zuko is he’s a guy and a jock guy, jocks only wear their own jerseys,” Tops interrupted.
Katara snorted. “How would you know about all that Toph?”
“Simple,” she smirked. “I’m also a jock and I know I’m sure as hell not wearing any other guy’s jersey.”
Miya frowned and zipped the jersey up. “Well Toph, Zuko isn’t like those other guys and I know he would love to wear my jersey.”
Katara leaned into Yue slightly. “Do you think Toph is right?”
“Well Zuko has always been a little jock-strap, but he had changed since being with Miya,” Yue said with a light smile.
Katara sighed and looked at Miya’s smile. “Let’s hope so for all our sakes.”
Toph crossed her arms and frowned. These dang girls are so boy-crazy. Yes, they all have guys and I don’t. Personally I don’t give a rats-Equus asinus, but must I hear about there love problems.
Katara slug her arm around Toph. “What’s with the frown?”
Toph shrugged out of it. “Nothing I just like to do it.”
Miya put her hands on her hips. “You better be okay, because I got the tickets to go see 300.”
Toph smiled and glomped Miya. “YOU GOT THEM?!?”
Miya laughed holding the girl in her arms. “I had to sell my soul to my sister, but it was so worth it.”
Katara rolled her eyes. “I can not believe you wanna see that blood-feast of a movie.”
“Hello, have you met us?” Toph said smirking. “We have waited all our lives for this movie.”
“We adore Sparta. Kick-Equus asinus woman, kick-Equus asinus men, that our kinda place,” Miya finished.
Yue sighed as the bus came and they took their metro cards out and swiped in. As usual they went to the back of the bus.
Katara sat down with a thump and looked up at one of the advertisement. “Who the hell is Coconut Fred?”
Toph groaned. “Some dumb cartoon who lives with an island of talking fruit salad.”
“What is our world coming to? Talking fruit?” Yue said with a scowl.
“You should see what they did to the Looney Tunes on that show the Loonatics Unleashed,” Miya told them.
“I’ve seen it,” Katara responded. “It’s a dang shame.”
Toph laughed out. “Remember Pinky and the Brain?”
“Do I ever that was comedy!”
“So was Tiny Toons!”
“No, the best was Animaniacs.”
“YEAH!!” the girls all yelled.
“Now we have all these dumb Equus asinus shows. Like all the loving Power Rangers,” Toph said frowning. “Tommy was hot as hell, we hated Kimberly cause she was always flirting and the yellow and pink rangers were girls.”
“Now they have male yellow rangers,” Katara said.
“Or how about the new Pokemon! WHERE IS PIKACHU?” Miya yelled. “Sure we hate May and we wanna see Misty, but I sure as hell don’t wanna see Tracy!”
The girls laughed and got looks from the people in the front. The girls laughter was reduced to snorts.
“One of these days they are gonna kick us of the bus,” Katara said calming herself.
“I would like to see them try. So Toph are you getting off at my stop?” Miya asked.
“Yeah, since I’m going to the movies with you at eight.”
Yue was quiet then looked at her friends. “What do you miss the most about your childhood?”
The other girls were quiet and looked at each other; none of them really had a wonderful childhood other than the cartoons.
Katara closed her eyes. “I miss my mom’s cooking. Every weekend she would make us her Sink Gumbo, because she would put everything, but the kitchens sink into the meal. It would be so good hamburger meat, shrimp, and mushrooms.” Katara had a smile on her face. “Those were the days.”
“Your mom cooked for you?” Miya asked quietly.
“Yeah,” Katara looked at her, “your mom didn’t”
“Nope,” Miya answered sadly. “The thing I miss the most are my cousins Amaterasu and Avani, and my two first friends, Jin and…Ba Nee. We would get into so much trouble together; my record said we only broke into school twice, but we did a half-dozen times.”
Toph leaned onto Miya’s shoulder. “What happened to them?”
“We all moved away after my dad died,” Miya looked at her green eyes friend. “What about you? What do you miss the most?”
“Me? I miss being able to run around without worrying about when my leg was gonna give out,” she said softly. “I miss the feeling of knowing that anytime I would get hurt it would heal, after my mom died nothing seemed to heal.”
Miya and Katara hugged Toph tightly. Yue rubbed Toph’s head. “It seems it would be more fitting to call us the Motherless than the Skirtless.”
Katara looked up. “You didn’t say your favorite memory Yue.”
“Oh, I didn’t?” she asked with a laugh as she pressed on the yellow type. “Well it’s my stop anyway. I’ll tell you tomorrow.”
“Um…okay. I’ll tell Sokka to call you later.”
“Thanks,” Yue said as she got off the bus. She waved at them until she was out of their sight.
Toph leaned back into the bus. “Our lives suck don’t they?”
“Yep, sure do,” Miya agreed with a nod.
“At least we have our…um hair,” Katara offered with a strained smile.
“Ah, nice try Sugar Queen, we really have to teach you how to think on your feet.”
They all laughed as the bus drove off into the distance. For now this was gonna be the only moment in time worth carrying about.
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“Like, black is so over Mai,” Ty Lee said as she walked down the street with her friends. “You really should try some red eyeliner or maybe gold.”
“Or maybe you should keep your fashion advice to yourself,” the dark girl spat.
“Well excuse me for having taste,” Ty Lee said sticking her nose up.
Azula, however, was thinking. She had seen that new boy, Aang, she recalled his name being. He was kinda cute and the fact that he was Katara’s made him all the more attractive in her eyes. So the plan was to get Aang for herself, Zuko for Mai and Sokka from Yue. A soft smirk appeared on her lips. The path of conquest.
Ties screeched next to them on the street and the girls yelped and step back. It was a jet black Mercedes and diamonds one the rims of the car.
“Someone went to Pimp My Ride,” Mai commented.
The window rolled down to revel a tan teenager with deep golden eyes, she raised a brow and looked at Ty Lee. “You look familiar,” she commented.
Ty Lee seemed nervous as she stepped back. “I, like, don’t know what you’re talking about. I’ve never seen any girl like you before.”
The girl looked across to the person in the driver’s seat. “Yo, Ama doesn’t the pink girl look familiar?”
Another teen girl with deep red hair and brown eyes stood in the driver’s seat showing off a pair of tight short shorts and a ripped AC/DC shirt. “Well, well if it isn’t Ty Lee. Long time no see chick.”
Azula and Mai looked at Ty Lee oddly, the pink girl shook. “Look I don’t know you people, so like, stop harassing me or I’ll call child services on you!”
“Well I’ll be damned,” the girl called Ama said folding her hands over her chest. “Little Ty Lee is a stuck up Clueless girl now? Who would have though huh Avani?”
Avani laughed and shook her head. “Not me. So Ty Lee you know where Miya stays? We wanna stop by and crash at her place for awhile.”
“She lives on 789 St. On the corner of Oma and Shu,” Ty Lee said wanting the girls gone.
“Thanks sell out,” Ama said sliding back into her seat. “Oh, and by the way Ty Lee. Your friend in the red is sexy.”
Avani laughed as Ama sped off, breaking the speed limit and leaving the Populars dazed.
“Azula did you just get hit on by a…”
“Shut the hell up Mai!”
A/N: Phew, that’s over. This is another filler chapter, but it has important stuff that you need for later chapters so read it. Amaterasu aka Ama is a character from my other Avatar story as well as Avani.
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Post by Kirsten on Mar 18, 2007 23:07:05 GMT -5
Yo, finally.
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Ulu
Aang
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Post by Ulu on Mar 20, 2007 16:52:15 GMT -5
That was good. I hope you update again soon.
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Post by KrystalFruit22 on Mar 20, 2007 17:18:53 GMT -5
Yay you're still alive! Azula just has to ruin the happy couples doesn't she? I hope she doesn't succede, but something tells me she'lll manage to stir things up. Update soon!
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Post by Sokkaroksya on Mar 21, 2007 8:07:44 GMT -5
Most Excellent, dude. I love your use of pop culture references, I used to watch all those cartoons (Pinky and the Brain RULED!) And I like the Nickelback lyrics you snuck in there.
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Post by PakkunsPosse on Mar 25, 2007 17:37:36 GMT -5
Awesome!! this pwns!! I can't wait for the next part!
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Post by Kirsten on Mar 30, 2007 21:27:00 GMT -5
*Sits and waits quietly for next chapter*
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Ulu
Aang
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Post by Ulu on Apr 12, 2007 17:04:28 GMT -5
Are you going to post anymore soon?
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Post by Kirsten on Apr 13, 2007 22:53:07 GMT -5
*Is still quietly sitting and waiting for the next chapter*
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Ming Ue
Haru
MingZula: The one true ship!
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Post by Ming Ue on Apr 14, 2007 18:22:12 GMT -5
Chapter Nine
The day was ending and the Skirtless had separated onto their different homes. Miya sighed as she stood outside the door of the grand mansion that her sister owned. Every time she looked at it, all she could feel was if she was being someone that she didn’t like. Entering the house she was glad to have been met by no servants.
“Ah, this is beautiful no servants, no big sister. Just me and Guitar Heroes II,” she said laughing as she threw her bag on the floor and went to go pull out the X-Box 360. As she went to get it her ringtone went off.
“Would you like to suck my balls, Mr. Garrison?” It played.
“Huh, that’s Toph’s ringtone,” she answered. “I just saw you like fifteen minutes ago what’s up?”
“Girl, you ‘bout to tick your pants, go to channel 02,” Toph said urgently.
Miya grabbed the remote and changed it to the channel and for a moment she thought she did tick her pants.
“Kai is on my T.V? Why is she on T.V?” she said dropping onto the sofa.
On T.V was a young teenage girl with blazing red eyes and long black hair, she had a kind smile on her face as she stood next to a young man; he had some scars on his face, but he still looked attractive. A reporter started talking.
“We are here today with Fire Nation Pop Diva Kai Yamagata and her bass player Yong Wing,” she said sugary sweetly.
“Yes! My baby is on T.V!” Toph yelled into the phone, she was a total Yong Wing fan-girl.
“Shut up. He doesn’t know you,” Miya snorted into the phone.
“So Miss Yamagata you are taking a break from your international tour to go where?”
“Well you see Barbra; this whole tour has made me miss my family…”
“No,” Miya whispered.
“And I have a younger sister living in Ba Sing Se…”
“Oh God please don’t say it….”
“So I’m planning on returning to her.”
“NO!” Miya screamed slamming the phone onto the couch. “WHY? WHY? WHY?” she cried.
“Jeez, Miya take a chill pill. It’s not that serious,” Toph said laughing.
“And what about the rumors claiming that you and Yong Wing are engaged?”
“NO!” Toph screamed. “WHY? HE’S MINE! IMMA KILL HER!”
“Now who’s overreacting?” Miya scorned.
“Now Barbra Yong Wing and myself are the dearest of friend we are in no way romantically involved,” Kai said with a cool voice
“dang, shut down sis,” Miya said. “Yong Wing must’ve been tight.”
“He needs to come over here and let me take care of him,” Toph said, Miya could hear her grinning on the phone.
“Well if he’s coming here with Kai, I’ll introduce you to him.”
“Really? Awesome, but is he as cool in real life as he is on T.V? Because when you find out that a celebrity you like is not cool it’s like…”
“Going to heaven and seeing God smoking crack.”
“Word, so I guess I’ll see you tomorrow?”
“Yeah, byes Toph rest that knee okay.”
“I know ma, goodnight.”
“Goodnight buddy.” Miya hung up and rested on the sofa looking up at the ceiling. “Big sister is coming home. Fantastic.”
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Aang arrived home right after school, his uncle smiled and greeted him at the entrance.
“Welcome home Aang. Did you make any new friends?” he asked.
“Yeah,” he jumped onto the kitchen counter. “I have two new best friends Zuko and Sokka and I have a girlfriend her name is Katara and I am going to be on the football team.”
Gyatso laughed and looked at his young nephew. “Well young one it seems you have set a record for accomplishments in one day. I am happy for you, now good freshen up and get ready for dinner.”
“Alright,” Aang jumped off the counter and went into his room. It was mostly bare except for a bed, desk, computer and a poster of airplanes.
He placed his bag on the bed and smiled to himself. He kept thinking about Katara and her beautiful blue eyes. He didn’t think you could fall in love with someone because of their eyes, but he did and he fell hard.
“But I’m not going to rush things,” he said to himself. “I mean we did just meet and I want, no, have to make this work.”
He grabbed a polish rag and started to polish his head, have to keep it shiny.
“Aang dinner time! Tofu burgers and French fry night.”
“Yes!” he said jumping in the air. “Coming!”
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Sokka and Zuko were walking home from practice; both were only in muscle shirts since they were hot from practice.
“dang coach is a Nazi. I think he has a personal vendetta against me Zuko,” Sokka complained.
“You think everyone has it out for you Boomerang-boy.”
“Whatever people always hate because they can not be me,” he said striking a pose.
Zuko sighed and shook his head. “Why does Yue date you?”
“Cause I’m a good kisser.”
“Oh, does she know you kissed Su...”
Sokka covered his mouth quickly. “I thought we agreed never to talk about that.”
Zuko groaned and nodded, Sokka released his mouth. “Hey so how are things going with you and Miya Bender.”
Zuko laughed at the joke. “We are doing really well, I mean at first I thought it was just a bet to see if I could get in her pants, but it’s more than that now.”
Sokka shook his head. “I still can’t believe that with her rep that she is a virgin.”
“Well she is, but hopefully if she’s serious we can change that,” Zuko grinned at his buddy.
Sokka gave him a pound. “Dude, you are the man. Not only do you love this chick you get to be her first. That is meaningful.”
“I think so, in fact if everything works out as it does in my head. I might just ask her to meet my family.”
Sokka stopped in his tracks and grave Zuko a look. “Wait a dang minute. I’ve never meet your family, but Miya is gonna meet them.”
Zuko raised an eyebrow. “What you want to meet them?”
“Of course man, I’m your best friend. We’re the Ponytail Twins.”
“We are not called that.”
“Anyway that beside the point man you can’t let Miya meet them before me. How is that gonna look for our relationship.”
Letting out a huge sigh Zuko crossed his arm. “Fine you can meet them on Friday. I’ll pick you up after school.”
Sokka smiled. “Can you pick me up in the limo?”
“Motherfu…”
“Okay, okay we’ll walk. Cheap you never want to spend money on me,” Sokka said with a pout.
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In the shadows on the trees three figures smirked. One of them pulled out a tape recorder, Zuko’s voice came out of it.
“It was just a bet to see if I could get in her pants…”
One girl spoke. “Aww, won’t poor Miya get crushed.”
The second girl laughed. “Well that one girl down, but still a long way to go.”
The last one slowly stepped out of the shadow her dark hair blowing in the night. “Well then let’s get down to business ladies.”
A/N: Sorry for the long wait and the not so great chapter, but listen this chapter is the actually beginning of the storyline. After this we get down to the real good stuff not just humor. And a cookie for anyone who can guess who the girls are and it’s not who you think.
PS. That Character of Yong Wing is not mine nor is Kai Yamagata. Yong Wing belongs to Eric and Kai to Sonia ^^
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Post by KrystalFruit22 on Apr 15, 2007 13:46:32 GMT -5
YES! I would think those girls are Azula Mai and Ty lee, but since you said they won't be what we think maybe it's Suki and her friends?
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