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Post by mattzilla on May 24, 2006 15:38:12 GMT -5
That was great! Good job!
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Post by Alleluia on May 24, 2006 16:05:58 GMT -5
LOL The Iroh one was funny! I can just see Zuko's face when he screamed "Argh!" XD
And oh my gosh, Toph pawns the Blue Spirit!!! XD hahahaha! Poor Zuko. And he was just after the berries, too! lol I love the last line about the Blue Spirit feeling pretty stupid. *nods* Teach him to steal from blind girls.
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Post by storybookgirl on May 30, 2006 4:07:14 GMT -5
Okay, so I was seriously going to let this thread die. I really was. But what's the use of starting a new thread to put this on when this is already here?
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"Why didn't you tell me you were the Fire Nation princess?!" growled Jet. "You were just using me to get the Avatar, weren't you?!"
"Did you honestly expect any less from me?" smirked Azula.
"You don't GET IT, do you?" he said, emphasizing his words as he sliced through the air with his hooked swords, inches away from Azula's face. He had meant to scare her. "I'm NEVER used."
Just as fast as it had come, the princess's smirk vanished. She shot a flash of lightning from her two of her fingers at Jet's head. It shot through his hair, leaving a bald line on his head. Jet winced and almost fell back, leaning on a tree for support.
"You've seen what I can do, Jay Jay. If you're going to play with me, get used to being used. You see that flower?" She pointed to a large, but delicate white flower sprouting from a clump of lush, green moss. Azula shot another blast of her deadly blue fire. "Would you like to become nothing but a smear on the ground, just like that?"
Jet glared at her.
"I didn't think so."
With a roar of fury, Jet launched himself at the princess, hooked swords ready to peirce into her flesh.
Azula blocked the swords with her arm gaurds and in an instant, Jet found himself flipped him over her back and sprawled on the damp forest floor. He reached for his swords, which were lying near him, but she stepped on his hand, causing him wince a second time.
"Your own power will destroy you one day," said Jet, staring seriously into her narrowed, golden eyes.
"Until then," she answered, "I'll just have to destroy something else...."
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Post by The Blue Chibi on May 30, 2006 4:20:43 GMT -5
;D *likes* (especially the end) Flora and Fauna have decided to give you blue karma... no, pink! ...blue! ^ Lol, never stay up all night reading fic. ;D
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Post by storybookgirl on May 30, 2006 4:56:38 GMT -5
(Gasp!) I LOVE Sleeping Beauty! It was my favorite Disney movie when I was little! Haha!
I'm glad you liked it! (hugs!)
As I treat, I'll write you something. What would you like? It can be a shipper one, but it doesn't have to be. If you'd like it to though, I'll write any pairing!
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Post by The Blue Chibi on May 30, 2006 5:17:45 GMT -5
Aw, thanks... lol, I loved Sleeping Beauty, too. The backgrounds were and my favorite part was the birthday cake. (lol, I'm always hungry, nu?) ;D Also, as long as karma is imaginary, it might as well be any darn color I want it to be. Okay... I know I told you I was wrung out of ideas, but I do have one tapping me on the shoulder just now... If it doesn't work for you, then whatever floats your boat; write what you like. Thanks ~ and also for posting your work. Can you please write one about what's in the mysterious middle compartment of Azula's freaky train thingy in The Chase? And perhaps even who's driving it? Ooo, and if you could fit it in, please, what are the Dangerous Ladies noshing on as they steam through the night after the Avatar? ;D (lol, dang, there I go hungry again...)
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Post by storybookgirl on May 30, 2006 18:05:06 GMT -5
Mai sat on the ground, picking at the grass in front of her out of sheer boredom. She ignored Ty Lee’s giggles as her friend one once again won at cards against Juro, the train driver.
“Haha, Juro, you better not be letting me win!”
“Deceive a pretty thing like you, Lady Ty Lee? That’s unthinkable,” he smiled.
Mai, though her visage showed no expression, was deep in thought. Azula was taking a long time to come back. Something wasn’t right. Perhaps she was fighting the Avatar right now. ...or maybe Zuko had showed up. Mai blushed faintly, hiding a smirk, and pushed those thoughts away. The Avatar was much more important at present. However, Mai was soon distracted from her thoughts as a certain someone climbed out of the train’s middle compartment, a bow in one hand and quiver on his back.
“Hello, Lady Mai,” he grinned widely, his tone a little too cheerful for her taste, and she was used to hanging out around Ty Lee!
“Hello, Goro,” she acknowledged dryly, sparing barely a glance at the boy. Goro was Juro’s son and he was the only servant traveling with them and he fulfilled many duties.
“I’m going out to hunt some animals to feed to the lizards,” he said, as if it were the most exciting thing he had ever gotten to do. He waited for some sort of comment from her, but none came. “I think yours is the best lizard of the three. It’s the fastest.”
“Azula’s is the fastest,” was the only answer he received. Goro was not put off by her answer and continued to try some conversation.
“You look tired. I just fluffed the pillows in the middle compartment, if you’d like to lie down. I also opened a fresh bag of flaming fire flakes, if you’d like some.”
“I don’t like fire flakes.”
“Oh. I’m sorry, I thought that you’d said that fire flakes were your favorite foo-”
“Nope,” she answered, exchanging a look with Ty Lee. Ty Lee gave an amused, but disapproving glance, causing Mai only to smirk. She turned back to Goro. “Shouldn’t you be hunting?”
“Oh, yes, yes. Forgive me, my lady.”
Juro chuckled as his son ran off into the woods.
“Forgive my son, my lady. He’s young.”
Before Mai could give an answer, she stood abruptly at the sight of her other friend, Princess Azula, striding up the hill. She looked tired and vexed, her clothing somewhat worn and ever so slightly damaged.
“Prepare for departure,” she said, addressing Ty Lee and Mai, who were both standing now. “You,” she said, looking at Juro, “make sure that your son doesn’t go out hunting alone. There were platypus bear tracks on the way up, and if he gets eaten I won’t be able to sleep on my unfluffed pillows.”
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(I figured I’d add in a Zutarian one, since you’re Zutarian.)
Zuko was in the market, searching for the apothecary’s store. His Uncle Iroh was doing better, but the burn was still pretty bad.
“My, I haven’t seen something like this for quite some time! I’ll give you five gold pieces for it! A water tribe engagement necklace is certainly worth it.”
Zuko turned his head sharply toward the voice. He spied a booth keeper eyeing a necklace held between his fingers, another man across from him eyeing his expression eagerly, excited at the amount of money he’d get for selling such a treasure.
“Where did you get that?!” questioned Zuko as he strode up to the man.
Both the booth keeper and the man looked quite surprised. “I found it.”
“Let me see that!” Zuko grabbed the necklace from the booth keepers hands and began to examine it.
“Hey! That’s worth a lot, you!”
The young firebender ignored their protests as he ran his fingers over the glistening charm. Yes. It was definitely hers.
That meant that the Avatar was nearby. ...and probably in trouble.
“I’ll give you two gold pieces for it.”
“That’s insane! It’s worth over-”
“I SAID,” threatened Zuko, pulling out one of his duo swords, “two gold pieces....”
Both men quickly agreed to give it to Zuko for the requested price and Zuko went on his way.
“After all...” muttered the banished prince, “it would be honorable to return it to her.”
Zuko ran his fingers along the necklace, feeling it’s familiar sleekness against his skin as he tied it around his wrist once more.
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Okay, so it wasn’t really Zutara.... (shrugs). But I hope you still enjoy it! I’ll try to write something more Zutara worthy later!
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Post by The Blue Chibi on May 30, 2006 19:07:26 GMT -5
Story, those were great! You really like that kicker at the end, don't you? ;D Yay for writing binges!
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Post by Zuko's wife forever on May 30, 2006 19:10:56 GMT -5
Question for Zuko: My Nickname says I love you but right Now I'm in the Chunnin exams and was wondering... CAN I BORROW YOUR SWORDS?
can I get a drabble of this girl who enters an Exam, and put it in the second part of it (the forest of death) but when her teamates die she joiuns zuko(who is in the exam)
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Post by storybookgirl on May 30, 2006 19:16:33 GMT -5
Zuko: Borrow my swords? Psh, yeah, sure, as soon as I stop breathing.
Iroh: Zuko, the girl needs them for some sort of exam! The least you could do is let her borrow them for a short time. I'm sure she'll return them in good shape when she's done.
Zuko: No, Uncle! I refuse! And who let you in here? (Both turn slowly to look at Story.)
Story: Um... I love you, Zuko.
Zuko: (ignoring the Story's statement and turing back to zukoloverforever) No. You cannot borrow my swords. ...unless, you give me information about the Avatar or my sister, that is. (smirks)
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I'm sorry, zukoloverforever, but could you maybe elaborate on your oneshot request a little more? That would be great. Thanks!
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Post by Alleluia on May 30, 2006 23:43:30 GMT -5
Story, I'd like to make a drabble request I am sure you will like. Could you continue that necklace one you just did? lol
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Post by storybookgirl on May 30, 2006 23:59:58 GMT -5
Lol! I was actually thinking about continuing it! Yes, I'd more more than happy to.
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Post by storybookgirl on May 31, 2006 14:41:33 GMT -5
I'll finish the rest later, Alleluia! Haha, this is getting pretty long, but I hope you enjoy it!
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Aang, Toph, Sokka, and Katara had been staying the night at a kind villager’s home on the outskirts of the town. Someone must have leaked the information out, because when Aang woke up, none of his friends, not even Appa and Momo, were around.
Aang was wary, hoping that perhaps he had just slept in and everyone else was readying for departure. *But Sokka’s always the last to wake up* he thought.
Aang pushed the door to the barn open.
“Katara!” he called. “Momo! Sokka! Appa? ...Toph?”
No one was about. Aang burst inside the house, only to find six Fire Nation soldiers waiting there for him. He turned around to see six more outside. He was surrounded....
“Where are your little friends, Avatar? Are you worried about them?” asked a pointy-nosed soldier greasily.
“Where are they?!” demanded Aang.
“If you surrender, you’ll find out.”
Aang had no choice.
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Aang was chained to the wall of a large cell, next to Katara. While going in, he had tried to blow on his bison whistle so that Appa might come and rescue them. It was in vain, however. It was soon taken from him and he was told that the bison and he lemur were chained up somewhere, too.
“Sorry, you guys,” he muttered after the cell door had been slammed shut.
“Oh, Aang, you didn’t mean for this to happen!” comforted Katara.
“Some Avatar!” cried Toph. “Of course he didn’t mean for it to happen but- Aang, you were our only hope at escaping!”
Before Katara could say something, Sokka barged in.
“Enough, Toph! Aang tried, okay?!” After a moment,, though, Sokka slouched back. “But let’s face it. No one’s coming to rescue us.”
No one spoke for hours with the exception of a few complaints about the tight chains around their wrists and ankles. The morning turned to afternoon, afternoon turned to night. A sliver of silver moonlight shone onto the cold, stone floor. It clashed with the golden glow of lamps overhead. A bird’s twitter was soon the only sound that reached their ears through the night.
Suddenly, they heard clangs and shouts from outside the door. They turned their heads sharply toward the sound and raised they’re eyebrows at each other. Aang gasped. ...it couldn’t be.
The door burst open and in strode the Blue Spirit, duo swords in hand.
“Ah!” cried Sokka as Katara gasped and Toph flinched.
“You-!” shouted Aang, but he was cut off as the Blue Spirit put a finger to his wooden lips. The masked figure turned his head flowingly, finger still to his lips, so that everyone knew not to make a sound.
The Blue Spirit went to Aang first and freed him. Aang was afraid that the spirit wouldn’t free any of the others and was about to say something, when the masked man sliced his swords at Katara’s chains. Aang was a little surprised and he looked up with confusion as he helped Katara to her feet. The Blue Spirit only nodded at him before turing to the opposite wall.
He cut Toph’s chains, then paused in front of Sokka. He turned to look at Aang, as if saying “Do I have to?”
Aang nodded, amused, but still disapprovingly.
After Sokka was freed, they left the cell, Aang and the Blue Spirit in front. The went down a corridor and up a flight of stairs, everyone in a while coming upon a soldier or three.
They came upon a corridor with as open door where there were five soldiers drinking, talking, and laughing merrily. The Blue spirit signaled for them to keep low. He silently, but swiftly, crossed to the other side of the door and waved for the rest to follow his example. Sokka was the last one, but as he was crossing, he stopped.
“My boomerang!” he shouted. The men in the room it seemed had been going through the gang’s things, arguing over who got what. The men saw Sokka and started clammering forwards.
Toph and Katara grabbed Sokka and everyone started running, the soldiers not far behind.
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Post by Zuko's wife forever on May 31, 2006 14:57:58 GMT -5
Info for the author:
The girl is part Human part mermaid and when she Entered the forest she said it would be as easy as pie. then When her teamates a killed she well sorta feels like she needs to join the other team.
Info for Zuko:
Avatar... His Name is Aang and well as you know he's the last air bender. He's got a major crush on Katara and well when you captured Him he was in the spirit world
If you get a plan to kidnap Katara to get Aang Just say to Her. "Your sister told me that The avatar likes you." that should shock her
~My mother was a witch and so am I~
Join me Zuko and I will help *gives Zuko cursed seal* Now zuko if you need anything more just close your eyes and Say Anna helpus *Zuko faints* ohh so sorry *Zhao and Icy Apear*
question for zhao: Do I make you proud Father? I've mastered all of my fire
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Post by storybookgirl on May 31, 2006 20:15:49 GMT -5
Sorry Zuko's wife forever, but I'm having trouble following your story. What is your character taking the exam for and what's this about teams and Zuko being a part of one? And what is her name, please? I'm sorry to ask you to go through your story and character again. So let me get this straight:
Your character's part mermaid, but her mother was a witch and Zhoa was her father. So she is a mermaid witch firebender, right? And after becoming friends with Zuko, she gives him a cursed seal so that if he ever needs anything, he can just close his eyes, say Anna Helpus, and everything will be taken care of. Now she is taking an exam that is taking place in a forest and she has to defeat all these animal/monsters and stuff and at the end of the forest is Zuko, who is a part of the exam and she has to beat him. Her friends are on her team, but they die, so she decides to join another team.
Another quick question, though: How is Zuko part of another team and how do he and the marmaid witch firebender become friends? And do they start out as friends and them fall in love?
Please correct me if I'm wrong about anything.
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