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Post by Karatelover on Mar 10, 2007 15:21:18 GMT -5
Well it's not perfect, but it's a start and my very first Zutara artwork. So please be gentil with the critisism.  |
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tara22
Warrior Sokka 
mmmwaa....ouch, my lips
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Post by tara22 on Mar 10, 2007 19:47:00 GMT -5
Katara is one oblivious girl. Turn around, for goodness sakes! Nice job, you get a *karma* for it.
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Kana
Yu Yan Archers 
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Post by Kana on Mar 10, 2007 19:51:51 GMT -5
Great job! You may want to work a little on on Katara's nose. Good job! I would give karma, but I need to wait until my hour is up.
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fuego
Pabu 
Four Nation Health Care
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Post by fuego on Mar 10, 2007 23:31:57 GMT -5
Lol...Seem like a Billboard
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Post by Karatelover on Mar 11, 2007 7:34:03 GMT -5
Yah I agree with the nose part, personally I don't have the right colors or drawing pencils I have to get those from the store. He he he.
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Ilise
Buzzard Wasp 
w00t, it's Jun
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Post by Ilise on Mar 11, 2007 20:36:16 GMT -5
Katara's hair is usually uber-calm, so if you're making it ripply, I might suggest making everything ripply. Also, being a grammar freak, I would LOVE it if you'd add the apostrophe and the d after 'she'... Sorry. Nothing to do with the art. Try making the lips and eyes a little smaller- I love Zuko overall, and Katara's torso is well-proportioned. It would look REALLY nice if you put intricacy into her necklace. This is great for your first one! Continue!  |
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Pico
Haru 
Rawr.
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Post by Pico on Mar 11, 2007 15:51:07 GMT -5
Or a 'D ' after notice. Either would work. XD
It's very sweet though. I said that already, but the concept is really cute. ^^
I'd reccomend getting some nice colored pencils, they'll last you forevah.
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Post by Pakku on Mar 11, 2007 16:49:22 GMT -5
wow..thats uber cool for a first timer  ! |
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