Moharke *Northern Water Tribe Contest*

[glowingarrow]

Name: Moharke (mo-hark-ay)
Gender: Male
Nationality: Southern Water Tribe
Age: 14
Bender: Yes, (water)

Appearance
- Thin, average torso
- Neck long , skater hair
- 5'7, in good shape
- Wears Water tribe clothing

History:

Moharke's family lives in a small ice village, outside of the main fortress. They have been banned from the fortress because of Moharke's 'unique' waterbending abilities (see personality). Ever since, they have been living a quiet life in the South Pole. Moharke hopes one day to make a visit to his sister tribe in the North.


Personality:

Moharke is a nice and shy person, but can get aggressive in battle. Moharke's 'unique' ability is unheard of and is extremely rare, but also can be deadly. When rain comes down hard, Moharke's eyes glow, and he obtains massive water bending talent, being able to bend the rain out of the clouds. Moharke's rainbending is extremely powerful, but he does not know how to access this strenght on command.

Other Hopes:

Moharke hopes that one day he will be able to make it to the Northern Water Tribe and find someone that shares his rainbending ability so he can be trained, and become a master.

Other Hobbies:

When he is bored, Moharke puts on his seal blubber suit his father gave him, and goes surfing. His suit prevents the freazing water from affecting his body, and he makes his own waves with waterbending.



This is my guy. Tell me if there is something that needs to be chan

[glowingarrow]

Soooo...I'm accepted? Great.

[Horyo]

No no no, you're not accepted that easily, even if your profile is top-knotch I'd still have to examine it, carefully...

Unique bending is a sign of Mary Sue, this seems to overpower him, demeaning every value of effort other benders exert.

You only have one hope: To go to the NWT.

Seal Blubber suit? Please elaborate, this intrigues me.

For your appearence: Add more detail and put it into paragraph form.

For your personality: Add more detail, move the other hobbies into the personality.

History: You need a more detailed explanation of it, water tribe people are known to be close, why would a little rainbending, which isn't accepted..., be a problem to those who can reject rain.


And, I don't recall it being able to rain in the south, if he's lived there all his life, it's too cold to rain, it snows.