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Post by aangxchild on Jun 30, 2007 0:06:37 GMT -5
Okay, this is just merely to practice my poetry skills. I needed a subject to base this poem on so I've decided Maiko . It was more of a mere thought just out of my head for a few minutes while listening to a song. Tell me what you think. --- Time came and went. Years were not spent. I hope you know I could never forget. From childhood memories. To our darkest enemies. I really hope you honestly remember me. I never had the chance to say how I really cared. From the breath of a demon, was what I really feared. In my heart, my words shuttered alone and scared. I see you now, you haven't changed too much. Fingers laced together, eye closed, lips to a touch. I realize now, this is pure love, not just a simple crush. Times seem difficult, they seem like a dreaded task. It felt much easier long ago in our simple past. But the time flew by, and soon it went by to fast. From the scars, and the tears I cried. From the day you left me, I felt as if I died. But now I see you again, and yet my emotions hide. Please listen once, this is something I must do. Tell you my deepest love, and tell you the passion that burns true. I need you Zuko, and I will always love you.
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Post by taiyo *on limited hiatus* on Jun 30, 2007 0:09:09 GMT -5
^Woah! That was awesome! This calls for karma when I can give it to ya. Again, awesome writing and Zuko would (well should) be flattered.
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Post by lunachaos on Jun 30, 2007 1:00:25 GMT -5
MARZI it's great as always, though I'm not teh Maiko fan like you are
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Post by aangxchild on Jun 30, 2007 1:08:15 GMT -5
=] Thanks my loves! It was really randomly thought out, but I'm glad you like, and thanks for the karma! =D I hope Zuko is =D
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Post by lunachaos on Jun 30, 2007 1:10:48 GMT -5
I gave ye some karma
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Post by aangxchild on Jun 30, 2007 1:12:11 GMT -5
Lol Thanks my love! =] I remember this karma luff we had LOL
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Post by lunachaos on Jun 30, 2007 1:14:11 GMT -5
Lol, I remember that too XD And thanks for teh you know what *cough* Beautiful poem
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Post by aangxchild on Jun 30, 2007 1:18:27 GMT -5
Lol thanks for telling me it's beautiful =]
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Post by lunachaos on Jun 30, 2007 1:40:20 GMT -5
No problem, it's true
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Post by aangxchild on Jun 30, 2007 1:43:02 GMT -5
Lol, I've been writing a lot of them lately, especially on my poetry site =] Lala
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