Growly
DOBS Katara
The Jester of Multishipping
The Mod behind the Myth
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Post by Growly on Jan 6, 2008 0:18:23 GMT -5
How about a very short preview?
For a long moment, Growly was caught up in a maelstrom of thoughts and emotions. Shock was the strongest at first, although it started to wear off quickly, allowing other things to bubble up and take its place. Just seeing an Earthbender was astonishing enough, but to know that this man had been personally involved in fighting the Fire Nation was a bit of a thrill. It was also a bit scary.
It wasn't until he got a good view of the man's expression that he realized that the Earthbender was actually afraid of him! Well, probably not of him, but certainly of being discovered. The scribe realized that he'd better reassure the fellow before he ran (or worse, decided to lay some Earthbending moves on him). "I mean… There are some soldiers looking for you." Probably not the best thing to say… "That is, they were, but they're not now. Well, they are, but not right here. They were just here. And they left - so they're not anymore. Here, I mean." He wanted to smack himself for messing up in his attempts to communicate his goodwill towards the escapee.
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Seabiscuit
Naga
Named for a Legend
I drive a flying bison, what else do you need to know?
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Post by Seabiscuit on Jan 6, 2008 0:28:41 GMT -5
And yet you don't reveal who it is.
GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR.
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Growly
DOBS Katara
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Post by Growly on Jan 6, 2008 0:34:23 GMT -5
But I will reveal it soon!
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Post by Blind Bandit on Jan 6, 2008 0:45:17 GMT -5
The suspense
Maybe if I beg.lol
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TML
Happy Festival Mask
Thee Vampirate
Even if I disappear, I want to always be in your heart
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Post by TML on Jan 6, 2008 1:18:31 GMT -5
LOL. The cliffhangers Ya gotta love them!! Man....this earthbender is interesting HAHAHA!! NOOOOIIIICEE!! He messed up!! xD LOL!! I really like it!! hahaaha
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Post by kyogoon on Jan 6, 2008 2:14:10 GMT -5
Everyone's curious to see who this Earthbender is. xD
Oh the suspense. Can't wait for the next update. :3
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LiveInThaskyE
The Avatars
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Black God
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Post by LiveInThaskyE on Jan 6, 2008 4:55:33 GMT -5
@haremking: Must you tease us with little previews such as this??
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Growly
DOBS Katara
The Jester of Multishipping
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Post by Growly on Jan 6, 2008 8:33:34 GMT -5
@skye: Yes, I'm afraid I'm contractually obligated to tease the haremites every once in a while
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Post by Blind Bandit on Jan 6, 2008 8:57:31 GMT -5
@skye: Yes, I'm afraid I'm contractually obligated to tease the haremites every once in a while And its fun too. ;D
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Ana
Metalbending Cop
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Post by Ana on Jan 6, 2008 15:03:44 GMT -5
He wasn't clueless enough to not get the gist of her words, but Ana was just a friend. A really sweet, really nice friend. Aww, I've been denied. Seriously though, this is looking fabulous so far Growly. You're very descriptive which is, you know, good for the first chapters when you're setting up the plot and the characters (not to mention writing in general). All bias aside, this is hard considering I’m actually in it being adorable/awesome, the characters are quite likable too.
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Post by Kohana on Jan 6, 2008 16:55:09 GMT -5
He wasn't clueless enough to not get the gist of her words, but Ana was just a friend. A really sweet, really nice friend. Aww, I've been denied. That's only because he has to realise he's in love with his friend. @growly: I'm really liking this story. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Post by Empy on Jan 6, 2008 17:01:46 GMT -5
True, I mean look at Kataang! =D Have you seen your awesome drawing, Ana? It's gorgeous
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Post by Blind Bandit on Jan 6, 2008 17:03:22 GMT -5
True, I mean look at Kataang! =D Have you seen your awesome drawing, Ana? It's gorgeous Ya I was just going to say that I hope I my pic turns out well.lol
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Ana
Metalbending Cop
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Post by Ana on Jan 6, 2008 17:42:07 GMT -5
That's only because he has to realise he's in love with his friend. We'll see! The Harem has a lot of ships though, especially where Growly is concerned, so you never know. I'm hoping for it though. <3Have you seen your awesome drawing, Ana? It's gorgeous I have! I like it a lot (it’s too bad I’m not that pretty though ) and I think it shows how much Growly’s artistic ability has improved since he first arrived.
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LiveInThaskyE
The Avatars
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Post by LiveInThaskyE on Jan 6, 2008 23:28:37 GMT -5
@skye: Yes, I'm afraid I'm contractually obligated to tease the haremites every once in a while Contractually obligated by Jade??
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