Post by ~»Lava Lamp «~ on Mar 24, 2009 19:59:50 GMT -5
do you ever get random urges to do something?
well i get that with poems or little stories all the time. but my urges happen when you get those weird situations kink of deal. this story is real. anyway can you read this and tell me what you think. personally i think it's really crappy.
Unaware
I was heading my way towards the gym doors as if I normally would, thinking nobody was around. but as I'm walking towards the door out of no where, he swiftly walks out the door with his music playing loudly, wearing his hat and jacket that he usually where’s, not knowing I was there. Thought I thought little of it just a where did he come from kind of thing. So I continued on and walked out the door towards the cafe. And as I'm walking I notice him walking away in the opposite direction I was going. Then all of a sudden, something turned inside of me, I'm not sure what it was but I know it wasn't anything like love or liking him at all. It felt like a "goodbye", it was sort of a good feeling, for some reason, I don't know why. Yes, he was lacking the knowledge of my presence, still lacking the knowledge of how much he hurt me. Yes, he was walking away, such a valuable friendship fading away. Yes, I did look back, a few times actually, to remind myself that we would always be friends and all I’ll always be there for him, even if he doesn't know it. buy this time we are about to turn the corner, and I just came to the realization that almost made me cry, we're probably not going to be as close as we use to be, and I'm probably not going to talk to him as much, and we're probably not going to see each other after high school. I hoped he still cared about me as a friend. I just hope he hasn't forgotten, or replaced me with someone else. I walked away with a little smile, which faded away soon after I whispered to myself "Goodbye friend".
well that's it. tell me what you think!
well i get that with poems or little stories all the time. but my urges happen when you get those weird situations kink of deal. this story is real. anyway can you read this and tell me what you think. personally i think it's really crappy.
Unaware
I was heading my way towards the gym doors as if I normally would, thinking nobody was around. but as I'm walking towards the door out of no where, he swiftly walks out the door with his music playing loudly, wearing his hat and jacket that he usually where’s, not knowing I was there. Thought I thought little of it just a where did he come from kind of thing. So I continued on and walked out the door towards the cafe. And as I'm walking I notice him walking away in the opposite direction I was going. Then all of a sudden, something turned inside of me, I'm not sure what it was but I know it wasn't anything like love or liking him at all. It felt like a "goodbye", it was sort of a good feeling, for some reason, I don't know why. Yes, he was lacking the knowledge of my presence, still lacking the knowledge of how much he hurt me. Yes, he was walking away, such a valuable friendship fading away. Yes, I did look back, a few times actually, to remind myself that we would always be friends and all I’ll always be there for him, even if he doesn't know it. buy this time we are about to turn the corner, and I just came to the realization that almost made me cry, we're probably not going to be as close as we use to be, and I'm probably not going to talk to him as much, and we're probably not going to see each other after high school. I hoped he still cared about me as a friend. I just hope he hasn't forgotten, or replaced me with someone else. I walked away with a little smile, which faded away soon after I whispered to myself "Goodbye friend".
well that's it. tell me what you think!