riverbird
Zhao
Flying with the wind
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Post by riverbird on Nov 11, 2008 16:33:25 GMT -5
I didn’t want to post this up until I had a decent amount of pages posted, 16 is a good number. This is a story idea that popped into my head a couple of years ago, after working out the main details of the story I decided to get started on it. I have always preferred drawing to writing (I am not that great of a writer) I knew it would end up as a fan comic. So here we have Avatar: Within the Circuit! It is an AU story where the fire nation has managed to win the war long before Aang woke up. With their take over was near complete; the Fire Nation focused their attention on keeping the people repressed, and advancing their technology to make up for the lack of bending (an affliction that began about 70 years before the start of this comic storyline). Now much of the population of the world has been relocated from their home lands to the major cities so that the Fire Nation would have more control over them. This story takes place in Ba Sing Se. You can find all the current pages here: within-the-circuit.deviantart.com/
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Post by Empy on Nov 11, 2008 17:46:15 GMT -5
Wow, this looks awesome so far! The character designs are really great and I really enjoyed reading what you have so far =D keep up the good work. ^_^
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Post by dragonflly on Nov 14, 2008 1:54:41 GMT -5
I didn't have alot of time to read alot, but I like what I got to. Keep up the great job, I can't wait to see more!
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Post by mattzilla on Nov 15, 2008 23:34:36 GMT -5
Wow, this is amazing! Keep up the good work
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Post by wexelia on Nov 19, 2008 12:27:29 GMT -5
Wow
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.::Alexia::.
Avatar Kuruk
Top Zutara Icon by bagpipe turtle! Thankies! ^^
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Post by .::Alexia::. on Nov 19, 2008 15:56:33 GMT -5
Really interesting idea. ^^ I like the grayscale as the color. Feels more like a comic/manga.
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~*~WhItEsHeEp~*~
Appa
Honorary Maiko Fan
**...and he came from a family full of black sheep...**
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Post by ~*~WhItEsHeEp~*~ on Nov 19, 2008 18:41:38 GMT -5
OMG! I love it, I hope you get to the next page soon ^_^
I have a question though, are they their normal ages, or older? Cuz the way you draw, which is awesome by the way ^_^, makes them look older.
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riverbird
Zhao
Flying with the wind
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Post by riverbird on Nov 20, 2008 8:43:56 GMT -5
Thanks a lot everyone for the comments : D Ming Ue They are older... Aang and Toph are 17, Katara 19, Sokka 20 and Zuko 21
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~*~WhItEsHeEp~*~
Appa
Honorary Maiko Fan
**...and he came from a family full of black sheep...**
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Post by ~*~WhItEsHeEp~*~ on Nov 23, 2008 17:49:52 GMT -5
ah, kk then ^_^
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Post by Chibi Chan-o on Nov 30, 2008 21:06:11 GMT -5
Sweet cover. *goes to watch on DA*
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