Melis
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Post by Melis on Feb 8, 2007 13:23:53 GMT -5
Thanks guys. Here's another update for you: Eternity: Sometimes Katara found herself awake at night, glancing above her to look at the stars, and think about the many people who have lived throughout the span of the universe. She was always a believer of fate and destiny -- ever since she was a little girl she knew that one day she would become a part of something grand and important. When she glances at Aang she sees many different faces all at the same time, different voices, hands and arms and legs. It wasn't a mystery to her now how much she loved and admire her best friend. She kept it to herself because of a selfless matter. Katara knows he loves her, probably more than any man's ever loved her, but he has his duties and she has his. It didn't mean that she never thought of a life with him, of course. When she looks at the stars, she watches for one falling, in hopes of making a wish so that she could spend an eternity with Aang. Following every next life along with him. Sweetest GoodbyeThey hold each other's hand, gazing at the horizon with smiles proudly shining on their faces. Time stopped for them a long time ago, and now that it has caught up with them, the end was closer with each breath they took. Aang looks at Katara, and can still clearly see the young waterbending girl from the South Pole he fell in love with. Katara looks at Aang, and can still find the goofy airbending kid from the Southern Air Temple underneath all the wrinkled and old skin. "I love you" he says to her, holding on to her hand tightly. "I love you too, Aang" she says to him, before they both leaned in for a kiss, and their souls left this world together.
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Post by frozenwind141 on Feb 8, 2007 13:49:50 GMT -5
Why have I not checked this thread earlier!?!? *headdesk*
Fantastic, brilliant, amazing...whatever synonyms there are for great.
I'd give you karma but I just gave you karma for something else xD
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Melis
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Post by Melis on Feb 8, 2007 13:55:34 GMT -5
@frozen: Don't worry about it! It's cool~
Hehe, thanks! I'm glad you liked them. <3 And it's cool. ;D
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Post by firefists101 on Feb 8, 2007 18:42:47 GMT -5
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by KrystalFruit22 on Feb 8, 2007 18:49:12 GMT -5
Aww! iYou should seriously post these on ff.net.
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Melis
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Post by Melis on Feb 9, 2007 0:07:49 GMT -5
@firefists: Hee. Glad you did. <3 KrystalFruit22: I will, once I finish all the prompt challenges which looks to be very soon since I'm on a roll! 'cause of that roll, here's more: Peace: Ever since he could remember Aang was prone to nightmares. It'd sneak up on him without even realizing what was happening. On occassion his nightmares almost seemed real -- as if he was watching it through another person's eyes. He didn't like talking about them, but Katara (Spirits bless her heart) always made him fess up. His nightmares ranged from being killed by the Fire Lord, to watching his entire race die in front of him. The ones that plagued him the most were the nightmares he had of Katara. He never told her about those nightmares, because he didn't want to trouble her. The last thing he wanted to do was that. But on most occassions, whenever he woke up and saw Katara looking at him with concern in her eyes, all he needed was to look into them to find peace within himself. She was here beside him, and nothing was going to take that away from him, not even some silly nightmare. Love: Katara always heard stories of women and how they fell in love with this marvelous figure who was either a dashing prince, or a brave warrior. When she was little, she told Gran Gran that she wanted to be rescued by a dashing man, and fall in love with him forever. Her grandmother laughed and said that she hopes her little waterbender will get her wish someday when she's older. When she first met Aang, she didn't know what it was about him at first but she knew there was something about him that allured her to him. His grace, his mastery, his legacy -- it could've been all of those things combined together. He was a goofy kid, long away from the tall and dashing man she invisioned to be her true beloved. The more she grew to know him, and the more they suffered and achieved together, the more Katara realized that Aang was everything and more she's ever wanted in a beloved. Holding her secret close to her heart, she smiles and finds happiness in the fact that out of all the woman in the world, it was her who the Avatar loved the most. The reason behind this was while other women loved the Avatar, she loved Aang. Pure, kindhearted, goofy airbending Aang and Katara didn't want it any other way. Charity: When Aang was younger Monk Gyatso told him about the many spirits that roamed the land. There was a particular spirit, one that would bring upon good fortune and happiness, if the person deserved it. So when he meditates and prays silently to himself, he prays to the spirit of Good Fortune and Happiness for bestowing upon him its good graces because he believes it was this spirit that brought him into Katara's arms. Rescue/Save/Protect: The nature of their relationship wasn't as complex as many believed. Katara was his rock, and Aang was her pillar of hope. She was his protector, and he was the choosen one -- the one to bring back peace and balance to the world. Not many believe it, but there are times when Aang secludes himself from the world. He loves it dearly, and she knows this better than anyone, but as she discovered earlier than most, he's human. He cries, he bleeds, he feels pain. So she rescues him by helping him carry that weight, and saves him from the burden of holding something so heavy. There are times when Katara feels low and hopeless. Aang notices right away, and runs to her. He holds her when she cries, holding back his own tears out of her suffering. He rescues his beloved, and saves her from having to cry on her own. She tells him that it'll be okay, and that she'll never leave his side. He tells her the same, and that no matter what misfortune comes along, he will help her see the wealth around her. They protect each other, and that was their relationship for as long as anybody could remember. Life: Their duties prevent them from having a life of their own, so they dream together and imagine themselves running away to a place filled with lushful gardens. Beautiful flowers sprouting from the root, and forests filled with hidden paths. Katara smiles, and watches him fly across the sky. Aang watches down and sees her dance across the earth. If life was like this everyday, then they would enjoy it for eternity. But it wasn't, at least it isn't at the moment. They like to think that by sticking to their duties in the end, they'll be able to build the future they dream about.
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Post by firefists101 on Feb 9, 2007 10:27:01 GMT -5
^^Awwww....I love this......*exalts*
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Melis
Long Feng
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Post by Melis on Feb 9, 2007 10:39:56 GMT -5
@firefists: Thanks! I'm glad you loved it. Those are my favorite drabbles so far. ;D
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Post by firefists101 on Feb 9, 2007 10:42:40 GMT -5
Yeah....I wouldn't mind some more Zujin though.......but I LOVE the Kataang ones!
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Melis
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Post by Melis on Feb 9, 2007 10:52:05 GMT -5
Don't worry, I've just been in a Kataangy mood but I promise some Zujin the next time I update! Thanks again, though! <3333
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Post by firefists101 on Feb 9, 2007 11:05:20 GMT -5
No prob!
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Post by Sokkaroksya on Feb 9, 2007 15:48:17 GMT -5
You're definitely one of the best Kataang writers I've ever read. I'd say that about your Zujin stuff, too, but I haven't read a ton of Zujin, so I don't have much to compare it to. That said, KARMA!
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Melis
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Post by Melis on Feb 9, 2007 22:53:59 GMT -5
*Sniff* Thank you so much! I'm not, honest! There's way better Kataang writers out there, but I'm glad you love my Kataangy + Zujin drabbles~! <3
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Post by firefists101 on Feb 10, 2007 3:00:59 GMT -5
^^no one can resist your drabbles Aang......don't even pretend like you don't know! ;D
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Post by KrystalFruit22 on Feb 10, 2007 11:06:35 GMT -5
What firefists said, this is some of the best Kataang I've ever read.
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