interesting,I'm not a great fan of cross overs, especially cross overs that consider the Avatar world another planet. However i've never heard of an Avatar/StarTrek deal. Its interesting and except for a few out of place words I like it. The wroiting is superb and the setting is pretty good. ilike how smoothly you connected the Avatar characters into this. Good luck and I'm eager to read more.
very interesting, yet again, but it feels as though you're not seperating the two. You don't have an avatar and a Star trek, you have both in the same cold, serious tone. It is almost like two peices of startrek, not an intersection. This woks well with a conherent tone, but not with a feeling of recognicance. I like how things are going, but I hope you don't turn this into a situation that seems too mystic or too scientific.