tokogawa
Momo
All my dreams have gone away, none of these shall be...
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Post by tokogawa on Jun 25, 2008 0:12:31 GMT -5
interesting,I'm not a great fan of cross overs, especially cross overs that consider the Avatar world another planet. However i've never heard of an Avatar/StarTrek deal. Its interesting and except for a few out of place words I like it. The wroiting is superb and the setting is pretty good. ilike how smoothly you connected the Avatar characters into this. Good luck and I'm eager to read more.
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Post by Taintedmushroom on Jun 26, 2008 0:37:50 GMT -5
Ooooh, that was interesting, and original!
Great writing btw; after my hour is up, I'll be sure to karma you. (if I forget, do pm me xD)
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tokogawa
Momo
All my dreams have gone away, none of these shall be...
Posts: 31
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Post by tokogawa on Oct 18, 2008 12:03:53 GMT -5
very interesting, yet again, but it feels as though you're not seperating the two. You don't have an avatar and a Star trek, you have both in the same cold, serious tone. It is almost like two peices of startrek, not an intersection. This woks well with a conherent tone, but not with a feeling of recognicance. I like how things are going, but I hope you don't turn this into a situation that seems too mystic or too scientific.
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Post by graywand1 on Nov 20, 2008 16:33:58 GMT -5
I'm sorry for getting rid of my story but I just received some writing books that made me reevaluate the entire way I do this so I've decided to rewrite this story from the beginning.
-Gray
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