Fanfiction Contest #6 VOTING

[catalyst283]

RULES: Vote for your FAVORITE entry for week 6 (Green for good). All entries are ONE CONTEST, and will be judged accordingly. (100-1000 words is the contest word range)

• Voting will be up from Friday until Sunday night, Monday morning at the latest. (A post by me will tell you when the voting is closed for that specific contest)

• Votes will be tallied and winners announced on Tuesday. Winners will each get a banner by me, or a designated banner maker. (There will always be 1st place; but there will also be a 2nd place if there are 10+ entries, 3rd place if there are 15+ entries)

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ENTRIES:

ONE

TWO

THREE

[Sheogorath]

They were all well written, but I have to give it to Entry #1. For three reasons. First, because while I did find Entry #2 to be well written, it seemed to beat you over the head with the fact that it wasn't a happy theme. Second, I really didn't comprehend the ending of Entry #3 at all. And lastly, Entry #1 made me laugh, and I, personally, always have to vote for the one to make me laugh, though serious themes are always easier for me to write.

[avatarasabat]

ozaifan said:

They were all well written, but I have to give it to Entry #1. For three reasons. First, because while I did find Entry #2 to be well written, it seemed to beat you over the head with the fact that it wasn't a happy theme. Second, I really didn't comprehend the ending of Entry #3 at all. And lastly, Entry #1 made me laugh, and I, personally, always have to vote for the one to make me laugh, though serious themes are always easier for me to write.

I didn't like the pacing of three it was forced and the diolouge felt jumbled, I didn't making the theme obvious in it either..of course this seems to be the author's style (yes I know who wrote it)

Two again feels forced, like Nerull said, the drama smacks you over the head

One is ok...I like the funny, but it needs to be more discriptive and longer << it's a little too fast

[ilovetaang03]

i liked one but three had a good theme
which is why i voted for it

[HawkWind]

I finally get to vote, oh boy! *rubs hands together* I adored 1. Witty, in character, nice descriptions and all around a great idea (Great way to work the theme in). Really fantastic, and it featured Jet, which is an automatic win for me (aside from all the other great things this story possessed). The boy needs more love, he really does, and it was nice to read a story that didn't focus around the main characters that we all are guilty of using over and over again.
Number 2... eh, started out as a good idea, liked the idea of Suki contemplating Sokka and Yue, but it did become a little repetitive after a while. However, good effort.
Number 3 was not my favorite. It was rushed and jumbled, like Bard Child said, and I found it hard to figure out what was really going on. I think a little more description could have been used to improve it, if the author ever considers to revise it. Ending again I found confusing, though I understood where 'Green' tied in, so that was good, however, a little cliche. I don't know, I think to sum it up, it felt a little panicky to me, you know? Not really sure where it's going.

Great job number 1, you got my vote!

[catalyst283]

VOTING IS NOW CLOSED.

Winner:

.....avatarasabat, who deleted their account?

Well, whever you are (if you're still around), if you'd like a banner, please tell me so I can make you one. =)

[writer]

Catalyst. I'm Avatarasabat...I got my old account back so I deleted my other one and yes I would like a banner

[ShizukaSakoi]

congrats!^^

[writer]

Thanks