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Post by Maylene on Dec 2, 2007 3:45:39 GMT -5
I can barely grasp what you're saying, but I wouldn't really call that a weakness....it's more like a mistake...an accident...but then again with Azula, it could be seen as weak. As for her reaction if Sokka were to see it. She'd either intimidate him by glaring at him enough, for him NOT to even inquire about it; or she would say it was nothing. Most likely the former. But how did Sokka stumble upon this?
Because that counts too. If he accidently hurts her, than Azula would be POed at being revealed, but if he saw it by accident then she wouldn't.
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kaibasgirl
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Post by kaibasgirl on Dec 2, 2007 3:47:05 GMT -5
um...are you saying that she gets herself hurt, by her own fault, and Sokka finds the injury, so how would her reaction be to that?
I say angry. First at Sokka, cause he found it, and it exposed a flaw so therefore he must die, and then angry at herself, because it was her own fault she got hurt, so it's not like she can pin the blame on someone else, and she's supposed to be perfect, so how could she do something stupid like injure herself.
are you gonna make Azula a cutter? J/K!!!
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Post by Maylene on Dec 2, 2007 3:50:28 GMT -5
^ Actually Kaibasgirl there is a Sokkla fic where Azula is a cutter and bulimic.
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Post by MsJimmy on Dec 2, 2007 3:52:54 GMT -5
XD Oh Kai. You got me. Azula's a cutter XD
Anyway, Maylene, *I* can't even grasp what I'm saying... how you guys put up with me I will never know.
I think I got it across enough though. I think you guys are right in the reaction of being mad. Although I will say it's a whole different scenerio then what you're thinking. Which is good, cause I didn't awnt to give away my story XD For once my confusing nature is good!
I haven't quite decided how Sokka is going to come across it yet... dangit
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kaibasgirl
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Post by kaibasgirl on Dec 2, 2007 4:04:02 GMT -5
^ Actually Kaibasgirl there is a Sokkla fic where Azula is a cutter and bulimic. What?! o_____O It's either very well-written, or very, very bad. Link please! MsJimmy, XXXXXXXDDDDDD! Ha, you can't hide anything from me! ;P LOL. You're not confusing, you're just...very obscure. Yes. And being obscure is a good thing ![:D](//storage.proboards.com/forum/images/smiley/grin.png)
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Post by Maylene on Dec 2, 2007 13:52:13 GMT -5
I thought it was pretty good. It was written way before we really got to know Azula though, so she had to kinda improvise. The first chapter is kinda OOC a wee bit, or rather it comes off rather strong since Azula insults Katara, but afterwards I thought it was good. But I'll let you judge for yourself. I wouldn't have found it if it weren't for Radiantbeam, since she has it in her favs. It's called Nobody's Home and there is one thing: it's not completed. It hasn't been updated in like a year, and I don't kow if it's been abandoned.
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Post by daydream11 on Dec 2, 2007 15:09:03 GMT -5
It's humor. -_- Now I'm kind of wary about this fic, because cutting and bulimia aren't exactly the Comedy Central channel.
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Post by Maylene on Dec 2, 2007 15:33:43 GMT -5
^ Huh, I didn't notice it was supposed to be humorous. It certainly wasn't humorous when I read it--at least not the cutting and throwing up part. And no those two things are definitely not funny.
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kaibasgirl
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Post by kaibasgirl on Dec 2, 2007 17:04:19 GMT -5
It's...um...interesting. The genre says humor, and it is funny, some of the parts...but huh...yeah.
The cutting and bulimia weren't funny, but it didn't fit with the context of the story, you know what I mean? It was skipping from humor straight to drama and straight to angst, it was kind of inconsistent.
The tone she set for the story was comedy, so when you try to stick in angst into comedy, unless it's extremely well done, most of the time it doesn't flow, especially if the character isn't known to angst.
...but that's just my personal opinion, and what do I know? ^^;
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Post by Maylene on Dec 2, 2007 17:14:01 GMT -5
^ Hmmm well you could know if you've written chapters 4 and 5 for your fic. ^_________^
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Post by kaibasgirl on Dec 2, 2007 17:26:03 GMT -5
ROFL! I have them written, typed, waiting to be posted. I'm just waiting for daydream to update hers XD
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Post by daydream11 on Dec 2, 2007 17:28:17 GMT -5
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At this rate, Maylene and MJ will be cracking rocks over my skull. I have exams next week and two papers due tomorrow. *cries* I'm trying! On the plus side, I am halfway done with Aang and Ozai's part in it, and the ending I wrote when I started writing it. So in all actuality, the story is 3/5 done... just gotta write it! ^_^;;
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Post by kaibasgirl on Dec 2, 2007 17:31:37 GMT -5
XXXXXXDDDDDD!
Awww, it's okay daydream, I have finals coming up next week too, and we're cramming like crazy ><
Don't worry, it gives me time to finish chapter six and plan out chapter seven, so I'm really not complaining XD
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Post by Maylene on Dec 2, 2007 17:35:23 GMT -5
ROFL! I have them written, typed, waiting to be posted. I'm just waiting for daydream to update hers XD Cool! I have chapter four for PoLY written, but I'm gonna have to wait to post it until I finish chapter 5 cuz of a conversation Aang and Azula have. Daydream: aahh I'm sorry. School sucks, always will and always will be. But you're such a good writer so we can't help but want to read more of DAED. ^_^ Wow a lot of people are busy with exams.... I wonder if/when I get mine. T_T
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Post by daydream11 on Dec 2, 2007 18:14:45 GMT -5
They are my first exams ever (HS Freshman! I think I'm the baby in this room, heehee), so I'm especially going crazy. Biology, World History, English/Literature, Algebra, even Drama... I'm pretty much screwed when it comes to that last subject there. DX Ahhh... I need to switch windows ASAP. English is calling me.
Writing Aang and Ozai's meeting in this chapter is interesting... because Ozai is working the split personality thing, Toph is pinching the hell out of Aang, and poor Aang doesn't know whether to faint or fight Ozai, ahahaaa. Then we have Azula and Ursa with daughter-mother issues (*ahem*), and Katara giving Sokka the ultimatum. All in all, this story is turning out to be a complex mish-mash of relationships, mentalities, and emotions. I'm excited, trying to get everything just right.
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