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Post by kyogoon on Sept 25, 2006 21:52:57 GMT -5
ok, I've added it and I've added your kataang vid. too kataang^^
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Kataang101
Mai
100 years alone, Forever Together
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Post by Kataang101 on Sept 25, 2006 21:58:59 GMT -5
yay
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Post by Amira on Sept 25, 2006 22:00:28 GMT -5
Just a little something I wrote. I don't know. I might use it as a lead in for a fan fic. Or it does have weekly dicussion narrative potential...LOL
The children of Ba Sing Se loved to hear the stories of times long past. Of a terrible war, brave young warriors, and heroic feats. Shensu the Storyteller repeated the tales over and over to eager crowds of children, all hanging onto his every word.
It was a small girl, pale and quiet like the breeze whipping through her hair, that approached Shensu as he closed up his cart. She looked at him with wide green eyes, clutching nervously onto a treasured doll.
“Master Shensu, I’d like to hear a story.” Her voice was barely a whisper.
The storyteller shook his head. “I’m sorry, young miss, but I am closed for the day. You will have to ask for a story at another time. Tomorrow perhaps?”
The girl’s face fell. “But I never get to ask and the only stories the other kids want are stories of war and battles. I want to hear one about love.”
Shensu sighed and stopped packing things onto his cart. He turned to the girl and sat down on a nearby stool, motioning for her to join him.
“You asked for a story about love and you shall get one, young miss.” He smiled. “I’m sure you’ve heard of Avatar Aang and the waterbender Katara?”
The girl nodded.
“Well, let me tell you that tale of how they fell in love here in Ba Sing Se.”
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Kataang101
Mai
100 years alone, Forever Together
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Post by Kataang101 on Sept 25, 2006 22:08:04 GMT -5
that's really good i liked how you set the scene
just wow
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Ana
Metalbending Cop
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Post by Ana on Sept 25, 2006 22:56:02 GMT -5
Oh, very nice Amira and I especially like the little girl. But I can say no more since I'm heading off to dreamland. Good night.
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Post by kyogoon on Sept 25, 2006 22:56:55 GMT -5
Have fun at dreamland Ana^^ Cause its fun for meh x3
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Kataang101
Mai
100 years alone, Forever Together
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Post by Kataang101 on Sept 26, 2006 0:06:04 GMT -5
k night everyone!
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inuyatta
FN Aang
The joy of SoKo comes at a heavy price...my sleep, for example
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Post by inuyatta on Sept 26, 2006 0:18:31 GMT -5
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Post by avatariaxxxmari on Sept 26, 2006 5:01:32 GMT -5
Nice job Amira!! ;D ((Gotta go to school lol))
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RadiantBeam
Long Feng
Rosa rubicundior, lilio candidior.
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Post by RadiantBeam on Sept 26, 2006 5:28:30 GMT -5
Hi guys. I have to go to school soon.... JOY.
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daydream11
penguin
"I love you, Bolin! AHHHHH!!!"
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Post by daydream11 on Sept 26, 2006 7:38:12 GMT -5
Nice fic, Amira.
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Post by snowthewerewolf on Sept 26, 2006 9:08:25 GMT -5
ok, I've added it and I've added your kataang vid. too kataang^^ Aly and AJ!? I Did one with "Into The Rush" by aly and Aj a few months back...March or april I think..
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Post by frozenwind141 on Sept 26, 2006 9:55:30 GMT -5
I love that mini fic Amira!
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Post by thedarkone on Sept 26, 2006 11:52:34 GMT -5
Nice mini fic and good afternoon everyone!
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Post by frozenwind141 on Sept 26, 2006 12:25:34 GMT -5
Good afternoon dark!
I just read all the posts on does Katara love Aang and all I have to say is wow, some of the effort people put into those posts...
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