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Post by girlunderglass on Jul 20, 2006 23:36:31 GMT -5
That story is so awesome. I love any story that has the romance.. but keeps a story going beyond it. She's done such a great job... and we need to know if Zuko is alive or not!!!!
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clearsunrise
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Post by clearsunrise on Jul 20, 2006 23:40:23 GMT -5
ohhhhhhhh she updated it recently GUG it's on fanfic.net if you use that site. it's a REALLY good chap. yeah it's one of my fav. stories^_^.
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Post by girlunderglass on Jul 20, 2006 23:41:13 GMT -5
going now!! EDIT: OMG.. It will not let me in! There has been errors on ff.net all day!
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Post by lunachaos on Jul 20, 2006 23:43:54 GMT -5
Hehe....have you read chapter 18? Ok...
Life-
A few years ago when I had been traveling with Aang and Sokka he had looked so...dead. Whenever I had the rare chance of getting close enough to see his golden orbs...they were empty. So hollow and lifeless. But all of that was different now.
Jealously-
He's incredibly jealous. He has an issue, I think. If a nice boy or even Aang hugs or compliment me he accuses me of liking them more of him. I swear he's so paranoid...but I understand. His whole life has been deceit.
Hands-
Her hands were so agile, nimble. As she idly ran them along my chest, I felt my resolute weaken. How did her touch, her hands, have such an affect over him?
Taste-
Delicious. Nothing have I ever tasted could ever match her own sweet flavor. As his tongue explored, and delved further into the caverns of her mouth, he discovered a spot...a certain spot that tasted particularly better...and made her squirm.
Devotion-
He wouldn't leave my side. No matter how much I tried reassuring him I was safe with Aang, no matter how much I pleaded him to go, he wouldn't listen. His devotion for me ran deeper than any ocean, and for once his stubbornness wasn't something to admire. He was being foolish on my behalf.
Forever-
I had never really been able to imagine forever. I had always dreamt of it, of incredibly long worlds and long journeys marking unbelievable feats of bravery and awe- inspiring heroes and heroins. But nothing had had come close to what she felt now. Whenever he tells me we'll be together forever, I swell with this...amazing feeling of...something that tells me that forever is simply...forever.
Blood-
NO! I grimaced as I watched her blood spill. How could I have been so foolish? Her pain and agony was because of my mistakes...
Sickness-
Through sickness and health I had vowed to stay by her side. As she lays there I can't help but rekindle some of our fonder memores...if only she were fine enough to join me in reminisce.
Melody-
The sweet sound of her voice was enough to lull me to sleep. Her loving tone and benevolent nature...it was all he needed. It was the perfect melody.
Like 'em?
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Post by girlunderglass on Jul 20, 2006 23:45:03 GMT -5
I am reading it now.. yay! I was finally able to get in. And when I am done.. I'll come back and read what you just posted
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Post by lunachaos on Jul 20, 2006 23:45:15 GMT -5
going now!! EDIT: OMG.. It will not let me in! There has been errors on ff.net all day! You guys...thanks so much! I'm glad you like it!
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Post by clearsunrise on Jul 20, 2006 23:46:31 GMT -5
lol she got in luna^_^. i'll review it tomorrow if the site's working.
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Post by girlunderglass on Jul 20, 2006 23:55:40 GMT -5
Har! I read. I re-read. I reviewed. Now you have to wait until tomorrow to see my review (Gawd I suck!)
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Post by lunachaos on Jul 20, 2006 23:59:12 GMT -5
Hehe...I already saw your review, thanks a bunch! Did you see the other things I posted?
EDIT: You don't suck! you're awesome... *hugs*
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Post by girlunderglass on Jul 21, 2006 0:01:58 GMT -5
*Hugs Luna for givin g ME a new chapter (Yeah I'm taking it personal ) Yes. In fact I did read what you wrote.. very nicely done. I could never have the talents you gals have with your lovely fanfics and art.
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Post by clearsunrise on Jul 21, 2006 0:02:16 GMT -5
yep GUG you're great^_^. this place wouldn't be the same w/o ya, right luna?^_^
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Post by gigirl942 on Jul 21, 2006 0:05:26 GMT -5
HELLO EVERYONE!
Congrats on the new war room!
I made you guys yinyang cookies! ^_^
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Post by girlunderglass on Jul 21, 2006 0:10:22 GMT -5
OMG.. you guys totally slay me. I'm just an old fool that can not come to terms with my age I am going to take a stab at Sickness. Katara lifted her head off the chamber pot as she felt another wave move through her tired gut. Within one wretching pang she emptied the remaining contents of her belly. "I am sorry you have to go through this." she heard him mutter as he rubbed her back. "The doctor says this will pass soon.. not soon enough though." She looked up at his face with trembling lips and tears brimming over her eyelids. Never had she felt so sick in her life. "It's alright Zuko" she sniffed, "I am honored to be the mother of the Fire Lord's child... sickness and all."
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Post by girlunderglass on Jul 21, 2006 0:13:05 GMT -5
Shoot Me! I have double posted! ACK!!! HELLO EVERYONE! Congrats on the new war room! I made you guys yinyang cookies! ^_^ Thanks Gi Did I ever tell you I call my daughter Gi Girl? Her name is Gianna and it's a cute lil name to match her personality.. much like yours * Get's milk for the cookiesThese sure are good.. like those black and white cookies.. just swirled a bit.
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Post by clearsunrise on Jul 21, 2006 0:14:55 GMT -5
thanks gigirl^_^. aww GUG you're not old b/c you're still young at heart^_^............and you say you're not a writer? that was good GUG.
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