A Series of Tokka Oneshots

[liz6363]

Chapter 1: Living a fantasy
Keep in mind this contains spoilers so do not read unless you have seen WAT. (Rating K+)

www.fanfiction.net/s/3970553/1/Living_a_Fantasy

Chapter 2: Journey's End
This is right after the final battle, the night of the finale. It's just my ideal Tokka ending to the series. (rating: K+)

www.fanfiction.net/s/3970553/2/Living_a_Fantasy

Chapter 3: Puzzle

www.fanfiction.net/s/3970553/3/Living_a_Fantasy

These are getting embarassingly fluffy and OOC, I don't blame you guys for avoiding it.

[ilovetaang03]

i hate tokka but that was good

[Sakura]

Wow! Two things I wanted to comment on:

A: Toph could never picture her friends because she's never seen them in her life,
B: WHY would Sokka SLEEP with Toph? Ewwie!

Otherwise: *karma's*

[liz6363]

@ilovetaang: Thanks!

Starlilica: Hahaha, I didn't mean it romantically. I thought it would be a way for them to comfort each other and show how relaxed they are togethor that they can do something like that without having it be awkward. And thanks for the Karma!

I may make this a series of oneshots in case you want to read more.

[mattzilla]

I enjoyed reading it and I wouldn't mind reading more quality Tokka fics if you decide to make more. I really like the way you made Sokka describe what happened in the North Pole for Toph. You showed how connected the two are for Sokka to be able to tell Toph about Yue.

[liz6363]

Matzilla: Thanks! I'm glad you got the point of the story, that it was about Toph and Sokka... not Sokka and Yue.

Zerg: Glad you brought this up, I'll explain myself alittle.

I didn't bring Yue into the story because of Sokka's heartbreak and all that crap. I brought her in to show that he and Toph have the same problem when it comes to not talking about their problems. I also think that it's a very important part of Sokka's life that a best friend should know about. I don't intend on putting Yue in many of my oneshots because you are right, it's not very original and can often turn out horrible when written by a bad author. But I was aware of those two things when I went into the story. I didn't want the focus to be on Yue, the point was that if you look past the fact that, yes Sokka is talking about his lost love (Yes, I know, sooo cheesy), you realize the point is that Sokka is confiding the most emotional parts of his life to a girl and it was simply put in to portray their connection and trust in each other. I put that in alot more blatently at the end when the fell asleep togethor but the point of the story was to look past "ooo sokka is sad about yue" and realize (Like I said to Mattzilla) it was about Toph and Sokka... not Yue and Sokka.

I get what you're saying about "delving deeper" and "find the true meaning of a Tokka fic" (whatever the heck that means XD)but it seems as if you're slipping into the passionate Tokka, something I'm really not a fan of. I actually didn't like the oneshot I just wrote because it was so goddamned fluffy. I'm more about the humor in their relationship and if passion and love come into the picture it will be later on in their lives... not now. How many twelve year-olds fall deeply in love!?

If you still have a problem with it you can tell me, constructive criticism is really helpful. I'll keep your "Criptic critique" in mind when writing my next Tokka fic.

[Ilise]

It was well-written in general, and adorable and fluffy at the end. Nice job keeping Sokka in character, but Toph was just a little OOC at points. I doubt she'd just let Sokka talk, lawl. Since I want to read more, I'd suggest putting in some of Toph's feelings before she asks about Yue. Just having Sokka gives us a little bit of a one-sided feeling, and it would be nice to see you take some creative license with their emotions about the past.
Good job letting us remember she's blind. Well. Besides the picturing her friends part, but I'm sure you can change that with ease.
I can see your effort. Nice work.

[liz6363]

zergneedsfood said:

That's what a Tokka fanfic is, in my opinion. If you can get that emotion of friendship, then that is a Tokka fanfic to be respected.

Oh.... I actually thought I did a decent job of that. Well if you don't think I got that across then how do you suggest I do it next time?

[liz6363]

Oh! Alrighty!

So I think my next oneshot is going to be a Tokka argument. Meant for another fic that never got past the first chapter.

[liz6363]

sorry for the double post, but this is going to become a series of oneshots...

Here's the second one: www.fanfiction.net/s/3970553/2/Living_a_Fantasy

It takes place the night of the finale. This oneshot is K+, the series is T just to be safe.

Tokka of course

[liz6363]

wow... triple posting? I must be a terrible writer

Well on the off chance that anyone reads this I have chapter 3 up for this series

www.fanfiction.net/s/3970553/3/Living_a_Fantasy

It's just my voice rambling in Sokka's head pretty much. I wrote it in half an hour so it's pretty bad... I just sort of wrote without thinking and this is the result.