Sakura
FN Sokka
Sakura. Just Sakura.
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Post by Sakura on Jan 5, 2008 19:49:48 GMT -5
okay. I'll use better grammar. i'm at a friends house right now so i dont really feel like writing any thing. i already started writing the next chapter in my notebook but i dont like it so i'm gonna try to write it again and see which one i like better. Please do use better grammar. It really annoys me when people don't...no offense to you, though.
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Post by Hinata Uzumaki IS BACK on Jan 6, 2008 11:47:43 GMT -5
~~~~~next chapter((crap i lost track of my own fanfic.xDD))~~~~~ Light Streamed through the guest room as Aang woke up. It took him a second to remember that he was in Tophs house. He slowly got up and made his to the door. No one was even awake yet. He absentmindedly opened the door that led to outside. The morning sun warmed his face and bare shoulder. "hey buddy"Aang greeted Appa who was in a barn thing in the back. He stroked the Bisons Arrowed head. "Thought i'd find you here Twinkle Toes".A voice greeted behind him.
Aang's head shot around. "Hi Toph."he said to her. Toph walked drousily over to Appa and Aang. She petted the bisons Head. Appa moaned lovingly. "How long have you been up?"Aang asked her susspiciously. "A little bit after you". Toph smiled. There was a long silence between them. "Toph?"Aang quietly. "hmm?"Toph looked up. "Do you want to know why I kissed you yesterday?"He asked slowly. "Why?" Aang took a deep breathe. "because I love you." Tophs blind eyes widened with disbelief. He continued."i loved you, And you left,5 years ago. You ,suggested that we all split up. Do you know how i felt after that?!" Aang blurted out. Toph starred at him blankly. "but you were'nt ly-"she started "But i still loved you" he told her,sortof angerly,cutting her off. "And you were just all falling over Sokka!" "WHAT!?"She squealed like a little kid. t"i've always known that you had a crush on him" He mumbled.
Toph was silent for a minute;taking everything that Aang said in. "well,"she started slowly."you had to finish up fire bending with Zuko, and had to keep the world together and Katara and Sokka had to go back to there village."Toph said. "but still,"He said softly.His head sagged down and he walked back to the house. A soft breeze pushed Tophs back. "now he tells me"she whispered and slumped down against Appa's furry leg.
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Post by *Erin* on Jan 6, 2008 11:50:36 GMT -5
Nice chapter!
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Post by Hinata Uzumaki IS BACK on Jan 6, 2008 11:53:02 GMT -5
thanks =D
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Post by kataangist™ Is Nostolgic <3 on Jan 7, 2008 7:51:08 GMT -5
that was an upfront confession eh?
but i am not saddened by the taang because you put tokka in there.
as long as you have a tip of it in .
i will not go beserk and kill my computer screen.
good chapter.
kinda confusing though?
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Post by Hinata Uzumaki IS BACK on Jan 7, 2008 18:07:12 GMT -5
see, i told you i'd put some tokka in it!! lol thank you?
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Post by kataangist™ Is Nostolgic <3 on Jan 8, 2008 15:03:13 GMT -5
:feels special:
thank you!!!!!
but because of the bad grammer is what kinda confusin.
srsly hinata you should get a proof checker.
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Post by Hinata Uzumaki IS BACK on Jan 8, 2008 16:27:38 GMT -5
come on the grammar is not THAT bad....oh fine...lol
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Post by kataangist™ Is Nostolgic <3 on Jan 9, 2008 13:09:44 GMT -5
:pats on shoulder:
the best way to solve a problem is to admit you have a problem.
it is bad dear, it is.
may i suggest me being your proof checker.
:puts on commercial voice:
I CHARGE 1 KARMA PER PROOF CHECK JUST ONE KARMA!!!!!!!!! DON'T LET THIS ONCE IN A LIFE TIME OPERTUNITY GO TO WASTE!!!
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Time Bandit
Meng
There is no war within the walls!
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Post by Time Bandit on Jan 9, 2008 15:29:56 GMT -5
YAY I LIKED IT!!!!! Karma=]
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Post by Hinata Uzumaki IS BACK on Jan 9, 2008 16:45:49 GMT -5
Thanks. i'll put up the next chapter really soon.
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Post by kataangist™ Is Nostolgic <3 on Jan 11, 2008 6:16:11 GMT -5
:jumps up and down crazily waiting for next chapter:
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Post by Hinata Uzumaki IS BACK on Jan 11, 2008 7:40:21 GMT -5
yah know what? i'm getting braces today and will be missing school . I'll get the chapter up as soon as i get home and stuff.
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Post by kataangist™ Is Nostolgic <3 on Jan 11, 2008 11:50:58 GMT -5
woo hoo!!!!!!!
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Post by Hinata Uzumaki IS BACK on Jan 11, 2008 13:23:27 GMT -5
~~~~~~next chapter~~~~~~~~~ kinda boring but still
Zuko pushed open the door to the small apartment. The light from the open door flooded in. Slowly the light slipped away as the door shut. Katara looked over to Zuko and he was lighting a small lamp. The lamp gave off a small yellow light. "Okay, here we are" He announced, hanging up his apron on a wooden hook near the door. Katara studied the room, It was very small inside, She could tell only about 2 rooms.The main room had a Red and black Rug centered on the floor. In one corner there was a small counter,with a fire place oven. There was no art or pictures on the walls. In the other corner, a table with 2 burgundy cushions sat there. Next to it was a small cabnet. Straight ahead, a long tatami mat hung from an arched doorway. probably to his bedroom or something. She thought. The whole room smelled of insence and charcoal. "I know, its small and boring, but I don't need that much space."He admitted. "I like it." Katara said cheerfully. Zuko smiled warmly. They then walked over to the table and sat down on the red cushions. Katara's eyes wandered around the room. Her eyes met with the eyes of 2 pictures. One she could tell was Iroh, but the other one she wasnt familiar with.
"Zuko?"she asked quietly. "Eh?" "Who's that women in that portrait over there?"She asked with genuine curiosity. "oh. that"Zuko said. He stood up and walked over to the painting. He slowly picked it up. "That is my mother. She got banned from the firenation when i was 10 years old. I don't know where she is or if she's alive."Zuko told her quietly. Katara's eyes widened. "so you were'nt lying when we were in those crystalcatacombs in Ba Sing Se that time!"She announced. Zuko smiled and put the picture back where it was. "I told you I wasn't "He smiled.
((ehh thats all i can think of right now....i think i'll have a smoothie.))
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