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Post by Hinata Uzumaki IS BACK on Nov 27, 2007 16:33:39 GMT -5
this is my first fanfic on Dh, so i hope you like it. Mods, Please dont throw this in the trash can.!please. this is first the prolouge(spelling?) then i'll see where this story goes Lets start!!!!!!! It has been about 5 years.6 years since Aang was freed from the iceburg, and 5 years since the gang last saw each other. After the war, the gang decided to go their seprate ways.Zuko also, after joining the gang,left to. Aang went with Zuko for about 2 more years to continue his fire bending training but when he was pretty much a master, they decided to stop, and Aang went to travel the world once again. He is the Avatar after all and has to make sure that world stays in balance and no 100 year wars start again.! Zuko decided to go back to the fire nation and just live by himself in a village. He would live with his uncle, But no one ever knew where Iroh went after he escaped the prison he was held in. Sokka and Katara decided to go back to their home and help rebuild the war-devastated South pole. Now that all the men were back, it felt like more of a village then it had before. Katara got an offer from a person from the North Pole, She was asked to become a water bender teacher,since she is a master. Katara decided to leave her home and lived in the North Pole to train water benders, now including girls! Sokka still lived in the village and missed his sister, but he knew that this was a big oppertunity. Toph,like Katara and Sokka decided to go back home and"see" her parents again. They were finally starting to understand that she was not the little helpless blind girl they thought she was. Master Yu needed an assistant teacher, so He asked Toph to help train the earthbending students. They were all interested to be taught by the famous "Blind Bandit". None of them saw each other since they seperated 5 years ago,..... until now. please review! ;D
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Post by ilovetaang03 on Nov 27, 2007 18:03:46 GMT -5
i love that story. i wonder how you are goning to make them meet and all that stuff. it is a good start keep it up
omg i just read chapter one anbd it was soo good!!
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Post by Hinata Uzumaki IS BACK on Nov 28, 2007 18:37:25 GMT -5
~~~~~~Chapter 1~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"Back in the earth kindom, huh buddy?" Aang said to his bison. Appa grunted. Aang had been traveling the world for the past 3 years.Traveling to make sure that no more wars start again. At 17, Aang hadn't changed that much since he was 12. He had hair again,black and sortof spikey.(like in most of S3) And was of course taller and had more of an adult frame,rather than a childish one. He was a bit more mature yet he was still sortof the goofy kid he was 5 years ago. Going to the Earth Kingdom always made him think of Toph. He never saw her though.Aang missed her so much. He knew she was his age now,and probably different. Aang wondered how different. "i can't believe i forgot where her village is." He muttered to himself."She probably forgot about me." Aang whispered doubtfully. Aang also , with all his travel, never saw Sokka and Katara. Strangley. He didnt know where they were , or what they had been doing with their lives for the past 5 years.He lowered to a nearby village. Something about this Village was so familiar, it gave Aang an anxious feeling in his stomach, but he had know idea what it was about it.The avatar started walking through the village.He wondered over to the market stands and started looking at the items the merchant had to offer. Aang heard a faint shout which made his ears perk up but didnt think any thing of it and went back to browsing. "TWINKLE TOES?" Aang perked up when heard the familiar nick name given to him by.... Toph. "TWINKLE TOES!!!" The familiar, feminine voice said. Aang turned half way around but a girl with long black hair and cloudy eyes threw herself on him and embraced him with a tight hug.
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Post by taiyo *on limited hiatus* on Nov 28, 2007 18:56:37 GMT -5
For the spelling on the first one; it's prologue. Cute so far. I wouldn't be surprised if Toph would be that happy to see an old friend after five years. Just one suggestion. When you write the dialogue, you might wanna space it out between the paragraphs/sentences before and after it so it would look like one long paragraph. Other than that, good job.
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Post by *Erin* on Dec 1, 2007 9:58:52 GMT -5
OMG I love this! Write more please!
*karma*
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Post by Hinata Uzumaki IS BACK on Dec 6, 2007 19:55:39 GMT -5
okay, sorry i haven't posted any thing in a while.....had no ideas here is chapter 2.
"welcome to your first day of water bending training!" Katara said enthusiasticly to 10 seven and eight year olds. It was a new day with a new water bending class in the North Pole. She had been teaching there for about 3 years,and was greatly appritiated of it. She got the job offer by Master Pakku,who was getting very old. Katara left to go to the North pole. At 19,If you had known her well before you would be able to recognize her,but if you didnt know her well,you wouldnt be able to. "has any one ever water bended before?" She asked the class of little kids. Th kids looked at each other and said nothing. "okay then."she said. She continued the lesson by teaching the children the very basics of water bending. "okay, great job every body."Katara told the children as they walked back to their houses. "Sifu Katara," A voice said behind her. It was the chief. "hello"She greeted him respectfully. "i got a message from your father today,he's in the Fire nation and he wants to see you."The chief told her. "to visit him in the fire nation?" she asked. He nodded. "alright then." Katara slowly said. "you leave tommorrow." he reminded her. Katara nodded and walked away with him.
i know, very boring,but i will get better...theres gonna be Taang and Zutara in it.
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Post by ilovetaang03 on Dec 6, 2007 20:13:43 GMT -5
i gave u karma good chappie
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Post by *Erin* on Dec 7, 2007 19:32:50 GMT -5
Nice chapter!
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Post by kataangist™ Is Nostolgic <3 on Dec 7, 2007 19:58:16 GMT -5
WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Hinata Uzumaki IS BACK on Dec 7, 2007 20:05:15 GMT -5
thanks every one who replied
~chapter 3~ "Its good to see you Aang." Toph said hugging Aang. Her voice was muffled because it was buried in his shoulder. "i missed you Toph."Aang told her slowly,cherishing the reunion. They finally broke apart,And started walking more into the village. Aang studied her. Toph looked very more grown up. Her hair was no longer in a big bun but it cascaded down her back. She still wore her yellow and green head band and belt.She had green baggy pants on and a yellow shirt dress thing that came up to her knees. Her dress was quarter sleeved. Toph still had some bangs in her face but part of it had been placed behind her ears.She looked beautiful to Aang. "so...how have you been?"She asked him with geniuine curiosity.
"Oh, you know,Learning fire bending,traveling the world, making sure no more wars start." Aang stumbled out. "you havent changed a bit."Toph said playfully punching him in the arm. "neither have you."Aang whispered quietly. "what?" Toph asked. Aang turned her towards her and then kissed her before she could say any thing. He didn't care that they were in the middle of the street.He didn't care that there were random people starring.He didn't care that Toph would probably kill him afterwards-Aang didn't care about anything at the moment. In that moment,it felt as if all his worries were lifted off his shoulders. They broke apart and suprisingly, Toph didn't punch him or do any thing that she would usally do. "whoh."was all she could choke out at the moment. Toph had change more than Aang had thought.
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Post by kataangist™ Is Nostolgic <3 on Dec 8, 2007 10:05:42 GMT -5
AAW!!!
i think taang is so fanon cute!
but i'm kataang all da way!
but taang is so cute as fanon.
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Post by *Erin* on Dec 8, 2007 19:18:43 GMT -5
I LOVE the third chapter!! I'm a supporter of Kataang, but still taang is nice. Keep writing! =] *more karma*
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Post by kataangist™ Is Nostolgic <3 on Dec 9, 2007 12:13:56 GMT -5
same here erin! karma!
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Post by Hinata Uzumaki IS BACK on Dec 9, 2007 18:39:29 GMT -5
((awww.thanks guys.i feel so loved now....i cant think of any ideas...any sugestions?
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Post by kataangist™ Is Nostolgic <3 on Dec 10, 2007 8:29:47 GMT -5
toph reveals a deep dark secret that happened after aang defeated the firelord!
that's a good'n
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