historyman12
Fugitive Iroh
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Post by historyman12 on Jun 30, 2007 19:47:48 GMT -5
okay, yeah...I know two fics at once but hey, I'm a multitasker. FOREWARNING: some Zutara "Aw, come on!" was Sokka's cry after discovery Aang and his friends latest trouble. Thia one, however, was decidedly greater than the others that had befallen them since Ba Sing Se's fall. "Well," Aang replied slowly "at least we don't have the Earth King tagging along, right?" "Yeah," Sokka grudgingly admitted "but I'm the pessimist so, I have a tendency to not care about the little good things" "I know but still-" "Look, Twinkle Toes, Snoozles, hate to interrupt your nice little chit-chat over there, but are gonna deal with these goons or what?" Sokka quickly began to throw his boomerang at the group of 15 soldiers quickly moving to attack Aang and his friends. Katara and Aang quickly responded with water and, in Aang's case, air attacks. The soldiers retreated quickly and the group celebrated, but, alas, their joy was fleeting. The second the soldiers crossed into the forest Azula and her small gang of assistants emerged. "Great, and here comes the cavalry!" shouted Sokka Azula began the brawl with a few quick fire missiles, which Aang dodged and began launching large rocks at the group. Ty lee jumped to paralyze Sokka and Katara but her feet were pinned to the floor by Toph, through the use of the ground. Mai launched several darts at Aang's friends, but Aang trapped them in a little tornado and spat them back at Azula. Zuk now leaped forward and began his own assault, moving towards the gang of friends' left flank. Aang continued to fire air and water blasts until a large group of soldiers came out of nowhere. Aang quickly realized they were overwhelmed and called for Katara, Sokka, and Toph to run. Aang fired a last water blast at Azula and her cohorts and then took off as well. Unfortunately, before they reached Appa, disaster struck.
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Post by taiyo *on limited hiatus* on Jul 2, 2007 19:02:59 GMT -5
Nice! And excellent way to end it on a cliffhanger. Seriously. I wonder what the disaster is. P.S. I so know where you're coming from with the multitasking. T_T
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historyman12
Fugitive Iroh
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Post by historyman12 on Jul 3, 2007 20:33:47 GMT -5
Nice! And excellent way to end it on a cliffhanger. Seriously. I wonder what the disaster is. P.S. I so know where you're coming from with the multitasking. T_T why thank you taiyo Toph tripped and fell down the rocky incline into the ditch near to Aang and his friends. "Toph!'' cried Aang, Toph stayed on the ground and grunted ,vainly attempting to get up. "are, are you okay?" "Look, I'm fine twinkle toes, just a scratch" As she struggled to get up, Aang decided that it would be a good idea to help her, as Azula and her friends were gaining on the group, and Aang would not like it if Azula captured Toph. He lowered his arms, and, with all his available strength, lifted the ground and Toph up to him. He dragged her along a few feet, fueled by adrenaline, since he had less strength due to his severe back wound. When Aang and his fellow twelve year old. HE simply gave her to Sokka and slowly crawled onto Appa. "Well, thank goodness you made it, now all we have to do is get out of here, and fast. Yip yip!" Appa took off and they simply left the combat zone. I know it's short my dad called me in the middle of it.
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Post by yasudaratsu on Jul 3, 2007 21:05:27 GMT -5
Wow, nice, very nice, can't wait for next chapter, keep going like that.*karmas*
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historyman12
Fugitive Iroh
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Post by historyman12 on Jul 4, 2007 14:39:15 GMT -5
Wow, nice, very nice, can't wait for next chapter, keep going like that.*karmas* Do you love everything I write? ;D
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Post by yasudaratsu on Jul 4, 2007 15:00:25 GMT -5
Wow, nice, very nice, can't wait for next chapter, keep going like that.*karmas* Do you love everything I write? ;D Well, it is well written and the stories are good, so so far, yeah so far.
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Zink
Ty Lee
"Whoever does not love does not know God, because God is love." 1 John 4:8
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Post by Zink on Jul 6, 2007 10:36:37 GMT -5
What everybody else is saying. Seriously, though, I think I like this one better than the other fic. (And it really isn't that weird/multitasking to write stories simultaneously. Ever been to fanfiction.net? It's pratically expected. xD)
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historyman12
Fugitive Iroh
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Post by historyman12 on Jul 18, 2007 17:06:07 GMT -5
What everybody else is saying. Seriously, though, I think I like this one better than the other fic. (And it really isn't that weird/multitasking to write stories simultaneously. Ever been to fanfiction.net? It's pratically expected. xD) no, I haven't so...hehheh ANYWAAAAY sorry it took so long to update. "Well, what should we do now? I mean, Toph seems pretty hurt, so what should I do about my Earthbending?" asked Aang "Look, I'm fine, and I can still bend!" Toph shot back "Look, everybody, before this gets too far out of hand, let's just land Appa and see if she still can, okay?" interjected Sokka "Okay, fine, then Snoozles!" Sokka commanded Aang to fly Appa down to the ground and Aang did so. When the reached the ground the entire group dismounted Appa and set out to watch Toph prove that she retained her Earthebnding skills despite the accident. She got off, assumed her position and began to try Earthbending. She lifted up her arms and tried to move them out and move the ground with them, however, she couldn’t move the ground, and quickly drew in her arms and winced in pain. “Toph, I think we can tell that-” began Sokka “I can still Earthbend!” shouted Toph “Uh, Toph, you just winced after trying to bend.” Sokka said skeptically “Look, I’ll do it again.” “You mean fail again?” Toph proceeded to put all her strength in lifting Sokka and throwing him backwards, however she only made Sokka go up on a rock less than an inch and she then fell over in pain. “See, I Earthbent!” Toph declared weakly “Only a little, and now you’re in pain.” “I can bend!” insisted Toph “Toph look,” Katara said gently “We’re only trying to help you, when you recover we’ll let you Earthbend, it’s not some big government conspiracy.” “Okay, fine I won’t Earthbend until I heal,” Toph said dejectedly. Aang, Sokka, and Katara climbed onto Appa, and then sokka and Aang yanked Toph onboard. “Okay, good, Toph won’t try and Earthbend, but, we still have no Teacher for Aang.” Commented Sokka GBFN.
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Zink
Ty Lee
"Whoever does not love does not know God, because God is love." 1 John 4:8
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Post by Zink on Jul 19, 2007 20:14:31 GMT -5
Aw, poor Toph. Earthbending's like, her life.
Very interesting twist, I'm really curious to find out what happens next.
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Post by yasudaratsu on Jul 19, 2007 20:38:54 GMT -5
Pretty interesting indeed, wonders in what this will turn into.
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historyman12
Fugitive Iroh
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Post by historyman12 on Jul 24, 2007 9:13:38 GMT -5
CHAPTER $ (chapter 4)
Zuko kept his ostrich horse going quickly so it could keep up with Azula and her other friends' kimodo lizards.
"Come on, ostrich horse." he mutterred while hurrying it forward. The day was clearly drawing to a close, with the sun almost completely down by then, and storm clouds drawing closer to them from the northeast. Zuko, still hurrying his ostrich horse, decided to ask Azula about setting up camp soon. Azula waved her hand dismissively, and ,with a touch of amusement said, "Stop? We have to keep on the trail of the avatar and his friends, and that means going as long as we can."
Zuko hurried his poor ostrich horse up a little bit and whispered to Mai, "Does this happen often?"
"All the time, and this isn't the worst of it." Mai replied
Zuko grunted and continued hurrying his apparently slow ostrich horse. After a few minutes of continued riding on the ostrich horse Zuko and the rest of Azula's group noticed a small village coming up on the horizon. Now, it was late, and they couldn't see as far as they might in daylight, so the village was actually less than 100 feet away, and they came into it quickly. The first house they noticed there Azula commanded they gather around the door. Azula knocked on the door, unsurprisingly forcefully. A girl stepped out and quickly gasped in fear at the sight of Azula, with her blue fire "drawn" and Mai, Ty Lee, and Zuko looking ready to assume position and fight at any moment. The girl's eyes darted quickly around the group, and came to settle on Zuko's, she recognized him, but couldn't remember his name. Zuko saw the girl to and noticed her as well, and remember all the features, the same face, the gray eyes, the worried eyebrows. But what was her name? It started with an "s", he knew that, Sin? San? Seng? Close, but no, Song? Yes, that's it, Song
that's today's update
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historyman12
Fugitive Iroh
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Post by historyman12 on Jul 26, 2007 20:36:44 GMT -5
okay.
hoooo.
Azula looked at Song and demanded "Do you know anything about the avatar's whereabouts?''
"No, I don't know anything about him"
"But why would you tell us even if you did? And just to make sure you don't try and run off... Mai."
"Yes Azula" Mai said and threw several of her darts, pinning Song's arms and legs to the wall.
"Do you hasve any new information about the avatar now?" asked Azula "No, I don't know anything at all about them."
"Really, well then, perhaps this will refresh your memory"
Azula put out her hands in fists and quickly turned them so that a spinning ball of fire was created that tore through the wall next to Song.
"Do you know anything new yet?"
"No, I'm not lying to you."
"Ah, well, then , that's too bad."
Azula entered the house and emerged after a few moments saying, "let's leave, this was a pointless endeavor"
"What did you do in there?" Zuko asked
"Oh nothing, jsut lit the house on fire ,Zuzu, it'll be down in a few minutes, let's leave now" Azula replied
Zuko gasped in rage and, attempting to conceal it said, "You go, I'll meet up with you in a few moments." "On your ostrich horse? Well, suit yourself, just know we won't come to help you if you get lost."
'twould be it.
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Post by Kohana on Aug 4, 2007 18:48:25 GMT -5
Good story, historyman. ^_^ I like it so far.
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Zink
Ty Lee
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Post by Zink on Aug 4, 2007 22:20:52 GMT -5
ZOMG, the plot thickens.
Azula's really quite the diehard, isn't she?
GREAT update, Historyman. Stupid Zuko, barely knowing Song's name. SHE SAVE YOUR UNCLE'S LIFE, YAH-
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Post by historyman12 on Aug 5, 2007 19:50:53 GMT -5
^ yep! ^_^
Aang conitinued flying Appa after a few minutes, Sokka looked up from his diligent map stufying and said,
"Guys, we're trveling over a major artery in the Earth Kingdom, there's a town coming up in a minute or two"
Sure enough, in a little over 2 minutes a tine blob appeared below them, and Aang steered Appa downwards to a soft landing and they walked into town, commanding Appa to stay at the landing site. Upon their entry, the villagers gasped in shock and parted in Aang, Katara, Sokka and Toph's path.
"Hi, everyone, I was just wondering if there was anyone who could Earthbend here, actually." Aang said
"We shall take you to him now," a villager said, and lead Aang and his friends, along with their newfound entourage of village people along the dirt path. After a few minutes of walking the group arrived at what was apparently an Earthbending school. They walked and sought the teacher, when they found him, Aang approached him and asked, "Excuse me, but would you mind doing something for me?"
"I don't have time for it." the man said dissmissively
"But it's really important," Aang said
"What is it, and it had better be good." he said
"I was wondering if you could teach me Earhtbending."
"That's it? Just sign up, you blustering fool."
Aang stepped back, hurt, and Katara stepped up "Hey do you know who is?"
"No, if I did I would have greeted him."
"He's the Avatar!" Katara shouted
"Ah, you can find your training in the "lunatics" section, goodbye now."
Aang stepped up, confidence decidedly increased and said, "I'll prove it to you."
"Oh really?"
"Yeah," Aang stepped back and lifted some Earth from the ground, then drew water and air in his hands and sliced the ropck in two.
"Hm, perhaps you are the avatar, I am Shih Zhou owner of this school."
GBTF (Good-bye till Friday)
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