Post by cara24 on Jan 6, 2007 11:13:02 GMT -5
I wrote this first chapter a couple nights ago, but I already have the whole little thing planned out in my head, it was originally meant to be a one-shot, thats why its so short, lol.
This story was inspired by a scene, narrated by Olivia, from the book "Playing With Boys"
Haunted~Chapter 1
(Katara's P.O.V)
"Katara come on!" a determined and frightened, 10 year old Sokka says as he tugs me away from the fire, the soldiers, onto the ice, away from our home.
"What about Mommy?" I whisper, choking on my salty tears.
"Shes coming with Daddy, like she told us, Kat." Sokka reassures me.
We keep running and sometimes slipping until our small village is but a dot on the horizon, other people are fleeing now too.
Sokka hugs me close, I wrap a hand around the pendant on my mother's necklace, as I bury my head in his parka. We stand together like that for what seems like eternity, others with us now, I turn my head around, frantically searching for my Mother.
"Dad," I hear Sokka call,"Gran-gran!"
My Dad and Gran-gran walk over to us, faces drawn, tears in their eyes.
Gran-Gran looks at my father, who doesn't seem able to speak to us, or even look at us, I frown, and ask,"Whats going on?"
Our grandmother sighs,"Children..."
"Where's Mommy?" tears form in my eyes.
"Children.....your mother, she fought her best, and till the end when the soldiers began to leave." Gran-Gran replied.
"So shes alright?' Sokka ask.
Gran-Gran shakes her head sadly at Sokka, as tears begin to make their way down her wrinkled old face, and thats when I know my mother is never coming back to me.
"W...who?" I ask, I needed to know who had killed my mother, I thought maybe my Gran-gran knew somehow.
Everyone begins to fade away from me, my speechless father, my strong brother, and my crying Gran-Gran. They disappear.
"Who killed my Mommy?!" I scream my question as loudly as I can, as tears begin to leak from eyes, and down my own cheeks.
Flames erupt and I let out a blood curdling shriek as I look up into those gold eyes, on that scarred evil face.
What did you think? Now be honest, if it sucked I'd really like to know, lol.
EDIT: Lol, I tryed my best at making the format better, I don't know it helped or not. lol.
This story was inspired by a scene, narrated by Olivia, from the book "Playing With Boys"
Haunted~Chapter 1
(Katara's P.O.V)
"Katara come on!" a determined and frightened, 10 year old Sokka says as he tugs me away from the fire, the soldiers, onto the ice, away from our home.
"What about Mommy?" I whisper, choking on my salty tears.
"Shes coming with Daddy, like she told us, Kat." Sokka reassures me.
We keep running and sometimes slipping until our small village is but a dot on the horizon, other people are fleeing now too.
Sokka hugs me close, I wrap a hand around the pendant on my mother's necklace, as I bury my head in his parka. We stand together like that for what seems like eternity, others with us now, I turn my head around, frantically searching for my Mother.
"Dad," I hear Sokka call,"Gran-gran!"
My Dad and Gran-gran walk over to us, faces drawn, tears in their eyes.
Gran-Gran looks at my father, who doesn't seem able to speak to us, or even look at us, I frown, and ask,"Whats going on?"
Our grandmother sighs,"Children..."
"Where's Mommy?" tears form in my eyes.
"Children.....your mother, she fought her best, and till the end when the soldiers began to leave." Gran-Gran replied.
"So shes alright?' Sokka ask.
Gran-Gran shakes her head sadly at Sokka, as tears begin to make their way down her wrinkled old face, and thats when I know my mother is never coming back to me.
"W...who?" I ask, I needed to know who had killed my mother, I thought maybe my Gran-gran knew somehow.
Everyone begins to fade away from me, my speechless father, my strong brother, and my crying Gran-Gran. They disappear.
"Who killed my Mommy?!" I scream my question as loudly as I can, as tears begin to leak from eyes, and down my own cheeks.
Flames erupt and I let out a blood curdling shriek as I look up into those gold eyes, on that scarred evil face.
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What did you think? Now be honest, if it sucked I'd really like to know, lol.
EDIT: Lol, I tryed my best at making the format better, I don't know it helped or not. lol.