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Post by happyhapppypizza on Jan 4, 2007 16:00:17 GMT -5
Short but, eh, there was a bad excuse at least. Good.
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Post by historyman12 on Jan 4, 2007 17:16:37 GMT -5
Oh, haha. But, it's my first two page fic!^_^ *exalts because hewants to*
*NOTICE* from this point on we will enter variouscharacters P.O.V.s, thank you.
Anyway chapter 6.
At the lack of a great healing, Katara said, "My healing can't do too much, we should bring him to Ba Sing Se, we are only few miles from here. Aang's wound won't beable tokill him unless it's infected, but it needs a doctor to heal it."
Sokka nodde and they left for Ba Sing Se. Within the hour they arrived and sought entrance to the city. After finding no point of entrence they asked Toph to earthbend them above the wall. They went upquickly andcouldsee most of the flat city from there. Toph asked if theycouldsee any kind of hospital from there.Sokka said thatno, they couldn't see much of anything individual, just a large city. Sokk ran up to the guard and asked,
"Um, excuse me, sir, but do you knowwhere we could get a hospital?"
"We do not cater to the unwealthy with directions tohospitals."
"THIS is the AVATAR!" Sokka shouted
"Oh,my mistake sir, I shall get the best hospital."
"Well, we have a soldier going for us." Sokka said in a slightly relieved tone
"Well, it's better then nothing." Katara replied nervously.
Within inminutes a cart arrived, pulled by Ostrich-horses.
"Is the Avatar with you?" the driver called out.
"Yes, he is!" Katara shouted down
"Bring him down!" ordered the driver.
They brought Aang down and put him in the ambu-cart.
"Okay, you can follow on foot!"
"But- oh, all right." Sokka said.
They droped Aang on a piece of cloth rapped around several wood pieces, and two men lifted him in the ambu-cart. The cart took off and moved quickly towards Ba Sing Se Hospital.
More tommorow
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Post by happyhapppypizza on Jan 5, 2007 12:44:09 GMT -5
Good, very good.
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Post by historyman12 on Jan 6, 2007 11:18:10 GMT -5
Okay, here's the next chapter:
The ambu-cart took off, rocketing towards the hospital. After anear crash not thirty seconds intothe ride they slowed down.Sokka, Katara and Toph were now no longer forced to run.After a little while the cart passed Zuko's home and causedZuko to awaken. Hebegan following the cart, realzing that such a fuss could only be made about someone important, like the Avatar.
ZUKO'S P.O.V.
Now, at long last I can capture the Avatar, and return to my country. Father will love me again, and I will have my honor back. I will have redeemed my self formy insolence. No, Zuko you won't have, and you know it. But, father said that- Do you really trust the man that scarred you for life? I was insolent and- No Zuko you werent insolent, youwereworried, concerned. But, but father gave me a chance to redeem my self. OPEN YOUR EYES ZUKO! He looked for him, Uncle looked for him, even Azulon and Sozin looked for him! He didn't excpect you to find him, it was a fool's errand. It wasn't a quest it was a fool's errand to keep you busy. At last, I near the hospital, I can forget this at last.
"You there, what is your business?" a guard says
"What, oh, the Avatar, he is here I heard."
"Well, even he was, you couldn't see him. You aren't even a companion."
dang, no use.I'll just tell uncleI went for a walk in the city.
END ZUKO'S P.O.V.
Katara, Sokka, and Toph had actually smuggled Aang in the back, for fear of a crowd. Aang was put in the refugee area, to further guard from excessive attention. The dctor that treated Aang said that the wound was not at all life threatening, and that Aang would, in all likelihood, leave the hosptial in a week to two weeks.
"What do you think we should do now?" sokka askedKatara and Toph. "Well, it we bein our best intrest to find outwhere we couldstay." Katara replied.
"And that would be?" Toph asked
"We need to find a place first." Katara said
"Well, let's get looking."
Just then a messener appeared inthe doorway of the hospital
"Excuse, but is there a warrior named Sokka here" "Well, I'm Sokka," Sokka said, takin a small step forward "but how did you know I was here?"
"The Earth Kng knows all in the city."
"Um, okay, what do you need."
"The King wishes to see you."
"Okay, then I'll come then.'
More evantually.
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Post by Jenny Lee on Jan 6, 2007 13:55:02 GMT -5
Nice cliffhanger.
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Post by historyman12 on Jan 7, 2007 12:49:20 GMT -5
Thanx.
Sokka followed the messenger towards the palace.When they arrived Sokka was completely shocked at the palace's beauty. It had 3 levels with each levels wood awning coming slightly inward, causing it to come evantually to a point.
"Where does the king make his residence?" inquired Sokka
"At the top."
"Figures," whispered Sokka.
They entered the palace and were asked for identification several times, each time they replied theexact same way and the guards moved away. After a time of climbing the top floor was reached, they enteredthe Earth King's private chambers.
"Messenger, your servicesare unneeded, that means leave!" barked the king, he was old and dressed in formalrobes, faling almost to his boot covered feet, he was nearly 80 and had long hair and a beard.
"Are you the warrior of Sokka?"
"Um, yes." Sokak said in a bewildered tone.
"Good, I have a mission for you."
"And it is?" "We have recieved news that the Fire princess and her companions are gearing up for an attack. You are to go out there and scout for them"
i get the suicidal mission because?! thought Sokka
"Yes sir I'll leave ASAP"
Sokka left the palace an began walking through the streets of Ba Sing Se.
SOKKA'S P.O.V. hmm, there suer are a lot of trange people in Ba Sing Se, there are muggers, performers, beggars, rich men, traders, people with weird makeup on wait that's Suki!
"Suki!"
"Huh? Oh, Sokka!"
"It's great to see you!"
We hug and she says
"Where are you going Sokka?"
"On some mission, I'll be back soon."
"Oh, alright." she says, and she goes to leave
LATER: IN THE FIELDS:
nothing here, I'll just keep looking what's that over th- OW!
Ohh, what was that? Feels likethere's something on my back, probably hurt it, maybe I can get- nope, pushed right down. One last- no. Maybe if I crack my back-better, but no. Other side-no. Why don't I just look up, aw crap. It's Azula Mai and Ty Lee.
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Post by Jenny Lee on Jan 7, 2007 13:45:56 GMT -5
XD Sokka and his bad karma.
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Post by historyman12 on Jan 7, 2007 14:13:15 GMT -5
yup.
Chapter the next one:
When Sokka wokeuphewas on Azula's train, with his hands tied behind back and confused as to where he was. He saw several otherpeople, perhaps 20 there, ranging from teens to middle aged men.
"Okay, where am I?" asked Sokka
''Here," came a reply from the back.
"And here is?"
"Prison," "Would anyone mind if we have a little introduction ceremony?" the group laughed at this comment
"Yuan, Earth kindom soldier captured." one of the older ones said
"Qin, man in the wrong place in the wrong time" a younger one said "Kyo, accused defector." said one in the back
"Keong, soldier." "Zho, accused assasinator of a general
"Wakizu, water tribe warrior."
"The rest keep to themselves." Yuan said
''New Water tribe peasent, get in here!' came Azula's voice from ahead.
Sokka rose and began walking towards the front of the train. When he arrived in the front ofthe train he was greetedwith a sudden kick to the chest, knocking him down.
"Ug," Sokka said as he awkardly rose without the use of arms. By the time he was half up, therewas a kick to the face, knocking him over yet again. Azula stood him back up and grabbed him by his wolf tail and hit him yet again.
"What the hell do want of me?"
''Information."
"There are better ways then beating it out of me." at this statement Azula kicked him in the groin and grabbed his ponytail at once.
"Well, if you want it so bad then there's some stuff I could tell you." lied Sokka, mind racing for anything he could tell Azula that wasn't true.
"Like?" asked Azula still holding him by the wolf-tail.
"There's a resistance movement in Omashu, theyre planning to kill your parents, Mai." Sokka said, hoping that he could unnerve Mai.
"That can't be true, Omashu is the most heavily guarded city on the continent, next to Ba Sing Se." Mai said with next to no emotion.
"If you don't give us something better, you will DIE."
''Okay then,'' Sokka said, tryiong desperatelyto think of something more plausible "The Earth King is going to be assasinated by a large rebel organization. It would be a good time for you attack."
"You foolish peasant. You cant foolme. There are loads of guards in there!"
"the guards are in on it."
"You worthless little-"said Azula with the flame beginning to form in her hands.
"Would it get you anywhere to kill him?" asked Ty Lee.
"Good point. But, he must be punished." Azula kicked Sokka between the legs and let him fall, and began kicking his ribs in.
"Foolish peasant. Duna, bring him back to the others." Azula commanded.
The servant brought the injured Sokka back to the group.
"Hi, guys." Sokka said witha weak smile.
"Are you okay?" one asked
"For a guy that just got beaten half to death, I'm great."
That's the chapter.
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Post by happyhapppypizza on Jan 7, 2007 18:14:29 GMT -5
real good
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Post by yasudaratsu on Jan 7, 2007 18:28:10 GMT -5
Yeah! That is good!! Good going.
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Post by firefists101 on Jan 7, 2007 19:46:30 GMT -5
Awsome! I would give you karma if I could........
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Post by historyman12 on Jan 7, 2007 20:22:30 GMT -5
I feel cool! This one goes out to the losers at school who will work at Wendy's while I'm a succesful author ( ) Thank you guys! Next chapter SOKKA'S P.O.V. Ohhh my ribs, my balls. I think I'm sterile now, and my ribs are broken. "guys, dos she beat you this bad?" "Well, not that we think we're half-dead. But yeah, it ain't pleasent in there." "No crap." oohhh, when I get out she is a dead woman. "how do you guys keep her from beating you this bad?" "Come up with lies." "That's what I did." "well, a you're could be a bad liar. B you came up with weird lies." "B." OW! OW! OW! "Try something like army movements." "Thanks." wwoah it's all dark now. "Sokka, Sokka, you up boy?" "Wha-" "That girl, if you don't get in there now we're all screwed." "Hmm." I get up and begin walking. Remember troops, not rebels. "Peasant." I just grunt "You'll have to do better than that if you want to stay alive for very long." "well, you see princess, there are some troop movemens that are going on." "Like?" ow, that's my hair! "There are troops moving towards the Northern Air Temple for an attack on the Fire Nation held territory." "really?" "Yup." "Well, that's odd, another one just told me that there were movements to the southwest." And here comes the blow to the mouth, and the blood. "Well, there are two." "Seems odd to leave your capital city undefended." now the nose and more blood "But there are more there" "Really?" "yup." "Odd, the last spy mission said that there weren't enogh troops for that." "well, there was this whole troop surge thing and-" "clever, very clever" and the groin kck. you can never brace yourself for that. and the floor comes now. "you can go now.'' oh very funny time to crawl. "stand and go." and yet she kicks me in the back. she is a dead woman. END SOKKA'S P.O.V. The torture continued for nearly a week and they evantually hatched an escape plan. ontheir execution date they would attack azula and her companions and break out of there. "Okay, the plan is set, whenshe leads us out for the summary execution we all act normal, then we attack, using such advanced techniques as head butts shin kicks shoulder smashes." MORE-TOMMORROW!
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Post by firefists101 on Jan 7, 2007 20:40:33 GMT -5
SWEET! I love it! Nice violence! LOL....karma to you since I can again!
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Post by historyman12 on Jan 8, 2007 19:10:41 GMT -5
Alright thanks, anyway here's the chapter which is next.
"So we're good guys?" came the final check from Sokka.
"Let's kick their asses." came a reply from the back.
"All of you get out here!' came the call
"Okay," came Sokka's last comment
They all marched out with steely faces, like there was no fear in them. Like they were ready for death. They assumed a line and kept the steel masks on.
"Now, you areal to be executed for treason. You have been entitled to a last sentence.'' Azula said, with the lame ready and Ty Lee looking on with a grimace, and Mai looking on with but a small sense of any worry.
"I shall," Sokka replied, taking a large step up, trying to hold back any emotion and looking around at his new found friends, "And it is but: GET THEM!!"
The group charged at Azula mai and Ty Lee. Sokka struck first with a head butt followed quickly by a kick. The fire in Azula's hand involuntarily shot up into the air.
"Come on!" taunted Sokka, delivering a shoulder straight across the chest. he took her folding to deliver another kick and then a body slam and a bite. Yuan ran up and punt-kicked her. causing her to fall over. Sokka began stomping and kicking with Yuan at once.
"How do you like me now?!"
Ty Lee and Mai weren't doing much better than Azula, they had jumped and beaten about half a second after Sokka hit Azula. ty Lee was on the ground already and Mai was soon to follow. Sokka walked over to Ty Lee and considered kicking her but decided against it, as she had saved his life the first time. He walked ovver to Mai and kicked her once and continued walking. The group quickly broke into a run.
The next part tommorow
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Post by Jenny Lee on Jan 8, 2007 20:58:53 GMT -5
Awewome.
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