Avatar Haiku!

[desilva]

I don't know if anyone has started a thread like this before... I frequently come in a little late in the game, so feel free to delete the topic if such is the case.

If not...

I started this thread so we could all post our Avatar haiku. If you haven't made one make one!

These are all the haiku patterns I know of...

Traditional Haiku: 5-7-5
Tankan Haiku: 5-7-5-7-7
American Haiku: 2-3-2 or 3-5-3

These are my examples, please forgive the sucky-ness.

(Traditional pattern. From Tales of Ba Sing Se
Through all the long night
Winter moon glows with bright love
Sleet her silver tears


(American 3-5-3)
Dear Yue
The moon itself pales
Next to you

Maybe we could even make a game of it. Someone makes a haiku and others try to guess what it refers to. Might be a nice way to distribute some karma!

[Jenny Lee]

Princess Azula:

Perfection and ruthlessness;

Supreme prodigy.

[desilva]

Little turtle duck
Forget your fears and sorrows
Mother is here now

[samfan911]

Hope,where are you so
Are you there flying away
Oh!I see! Hi Aang!

[desilva]

Hope; absolution,
once a distant horizon,
is now within grasp.
My sin is now forgiven,
but with it came another.

[Solai]

I read this one on a shirt, but its good for a laugh...
Haikus are easy
but sometimes they don't make sense
refridgerator

[desilva]

I want that t-shirt!

Tears falling softly
Like a stream of shining stars
Drowning and burning

[Pleading Eyes]

Birthright forsaken
The true path muddled and lost
By Prince, forgotten

Well, I tried. I should stick with comedy... -_-'

[desilva]

Not bad! If you want to next time make a comedic haiku.