aquavi
Casual Zuko
Yay for old skool!
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Post by aquavi on Jun 4, 2007 13:11:24 GMT -5
I finally got a chance to read this... it's really good. I have a tendency to shy away from multi-part fics because a lot of the time writers don't know how to formulate a plot that remains interesting chapter to chapter without getting redundant, but you really seem to have a knack for it. I also like your balance of canon characters that we know and love and OCs... giving Zuko an animal companion is important since otherwise it's just him... emo-ing...
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Post by zukosfireprincess on Jun 9, 2007 21:20:05 GMT -5
I must say this story is amazing I love your writing syle you are a truly gifted writer. Keep the updates comin because this is my favorite story so far!!!!!!!!
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Post by grandmaster192 on Jun 13, 2007 6:44:54 GMT -5
I like it. It's like you know Zuko's character like the back of your hand. I've also noticed you have decided to put more emphasis on Zuko's emo side. Also, the dialog between Zuko and Jeong Jeong is great. However, I do feel that some characters are a little out of character, and Ozai seems like a complete idiot. I don't really like that. Your art is incredible! It makes me want to wip out my sketch pad and make some fan art. I'm pretty good to.
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nandireya
Zuko's Path to Redemption Mod
...tickled pink...
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Post by nandireya on Jun 13, 2007 6:57:56 GMT -5
Yeah...Ozai's a little hard to grasp...I don't even like how I write him...but we've seen so little of him...and I hope you do whip out your sketch book, I look forward to seeing your interpretation of the characters.
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Post by grandmaster192 on Jun 13, 2007 7:03:43 GMT -5
Yeah...Ozai's a little hard to grasp...I don't even like how I write him...but we've seen so little of him.... Yeah, I agree, but that where your imagination kicks in. Thats what so fun about Ozai. Anything is possible.
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HeartofFire
Haru
Or should I say, he used to be torn...
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Post by HeartofFire on Jul 11, 2007 21:32:20 GMT -5
I love this story! I wish i had the knowledge and skill to write an involved story like this, where there's so much traveling through different parts of the country... I'm always afraid it won't seem realistic enough. But you make it seem so! ;D And i love how you've written Zuko, and his character development... *is a fangirl of that angsty, conflicted firebender...* lol And I love ellipses, too! (That's what the '...' marks are called, right? Anyway, i find great use for them, as you can see... )
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Ilise
Buzzard Wasp
w00t, it's Jun
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Post by Ilise on Jul 11, 2007 22:19:50 GMT -5
Good, good job. However, when writing quotes, you tend to have a ton of '...'s. It kinda distracts me; I don't know why... anyway. Love your description.
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nandireya
Zuko's Path to Redemption Mod
...tickled pink...
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Post by nandireya on Jul 12, 2007 3:16:31 GMT -5
They're called ellipses...and I love them...I use them to indicate a trail off in speech...a change in thought...or sometimes just for the heck of it...
And you'll all be happy to know I'm working furiously on the next chapter...my work schedule has really sucked lately so I've had little time to write...but I'm still hoping to finish this before the real season three begins.
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historyman12
Fugitive Iroh
IS IT JULY 14TH YET?
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Post by historyman12 on Jul 12, 2007 11:54:17 GMT -5
They're called ellipses...and I love them...I use them to indicate a trail off in speech...a change in thought...or sometimes just for the heck of it... And you'll all be happy to know I'm working furiously on the next chapter...my work schedule has really sucked lately so I've had little time to write...but I'm still hoping to finish this before the real season three begins. hey...do you know...how much longer...there is to this...fic...
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nandireya
Zuko's Path to Redemption Mod
...tickled pink...
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Post by nandireya on Jul 13, 2007 6:09:12 GMT -5
At a rough estimate...I'd say I'm about half way...
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historyman12
Fugitive Iroh
IS IT JULY 14TH YET?
Posts: 4,822
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Post by historyman12 on Jul 13, 2007 8:56:54 GMT -5
At a rough estimate...I'd say I'm about half way... okay...then...that's cool...
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HeartofFire
Haru
Or should I say, he used to be torn...
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Post by HeartofFire on Jul 15, 2007 20:45:06 GMT -5
I'm looking forward to the next chapter! (In the meantime, i've been working on fanart pic or two of this story, which i shall show you when they're done... ) Btw, nandireya, i like your siggy. lol
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nandireya
Zuko's Path to Redemption Mod
...tickled pink...
Posts: 6,822
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Post by nandireya on Jul 16, 2007 4:48:36 GMT -5
I inspired more fanart? Cool...
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Post by luthien on Jul 17, 2007 10:42:41 GMT -5
I'm looking forward to the next chapter, too! I've said it before, but I'll say it again, this fic is among the best out there, and is a balm to the soul of us Zuko fans. It gives us hope.
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ZukosGirl
Bolin
Mad-Eye and Sokka have so much in common
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Post by ZukosGirl on Jul 18, 2007 19:24:47 GMT -5
Wow, I really love this story and am really excited to read more of it! Keep up the good work!
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