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Post by waterbendergrl06 on Sept 8, 2006 22:49:06 GMT -5
Well, I did one and it sort of turned out bad and got deleted so I'm starting another Zutara fanfic. Oh and FYI, it's when there's toph and everyone else, k? Oh and can you guys PLEASE keep it in Katara's POV?
I laid in my sleeping bag, looking up at the stars glistening in the sky. The night sky was always so beautiful. Night itself was beautiful. Suddenly, I had the urge to talk to some one so I called to Momo. He perked his ears up and flew over to me and landed on my lap. I pet him on the head when...
What will happen next!? You continue!
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Post by beautyfr.pain on Sept 9, 2006 18:19:28 GMT -5
I don't know how to continue.....I shall try anyways.
If this story was meant to be post-"Aang's Fury", just ask me to delete this post.
Appa groaned in pain.
"Appa?" I called out. Momo flew over to the bison and sat on his arrow. He groaned again. I got out of my sleeping bag to check on him. A few inches from his mouth, I stepped into a puddle of some kind of nasty, bad-smelling goop. Appa had coughed up his dinner! After bending all of the liquidy puke off from her shoes as she could, she sighed. The stains came out, but not the foul scent.
"Great. Appa's sick and I need new shoes." A second later, after taking off my mocassins, I heard someone turn over in their sleeping bag.
"Katara, why are you up?" the young avatar asked.
"It's Appa. He's ill. We won't be flying anywhere soon." Appa groaned again. Momo squeaked/chirped/made some kind of momo-noise and jumped off his [Appa's a "he", right?] head as he opened his mouth to cough up more. By now, Toph and Sokka were awake too. How Sokka had awakened, no one knew. It's one of the unsolved mysteries in life.
"Appa's sick?!?!? What are we gonna do?!" Sokka said, "We're not safe here! Here...smack dab in the middle of..."
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Post by waterbendergrl06 on Sept 10, 2006 12:30:01 GMT -5
Oh, I want to continue it now. So where did we leave off? Thats right!
"Appa's sick?!?!? What are we gonna do?!" Sokka said, "We're not safe here! Here...smack dab in the middle of..."
"Shh!" Toph said glancing around. "I thought I heard something."
"What is it Toph?" Aang asked.
"Shh, twinkle toes!" she said trying to tell who or what she heard. A few minutes passed and she didn't hear anything. "Well, whatever it was, it's gone."
"Let's each take turns watching Appa." Aang said. "You know, just in case someone or something comes to hurt him."
"Okay, but who will go first?" Sokka said.
"How 'bout Katara?" Toph said.
"Yeah, you don't mind, do you Katara?" Aang said happily.
"No Aang of course not." I said smiling a fake smile. "I'll watch him."
"Thanks Katara," he said smiling. "It means a lot to me."
I walked over to Appa and sat down on one of his legs. I watched him and the surroundings but didn't see anything suspicious. I yawned a bit and stretched out getting a bit tired. 'Nothings gonna come and get Appa.' I said to myself. Aang won't mind... if I... take a little... nap. I said drifting off to sleep. Suddenly...
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Post by beautyfr.pain on Sept 13, 2006 15:51:53 GMT -5
Wait, why should I delete it if it's around the time of bitterwork? w/e...
Suddenly I saw a flame shoot into the air and heard a grunt of frustration in the distance. I quickly got into my waterbending stance, opening my waterskin. After a while, I noticed we weren't being approached. Out of curiousity, I walked toward the sound and occasional fire to see who it was. I peeked through the bushes and saw Zuko attempting to shoot SOMETHING into the air, because obviously, he wasn't satisfied with the fire. I gasped. Was he trying to learn how to shoot blue lightning like his sister could? A second later, he turned in my direction, his golden eyes staring dead at me. I silently gasped. Could he see me?
er ...yeah
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Post by waterbendergrl06 on Sept 15, 2006 16:43:46 GMT -5
thank you thank you thank you! If I hadn't given karma to someone I'd give it to you! Thank you! Oh now I want to continue!
I froze stiff and my eyes went wide in horror. Suddenly, his brows narrowed in. Either he was mad or smirking, either one bad. I gulped not wanting to find out. I tried to run but to my surprise was stiff. I tried to move my legs but couldn't. Suddenly, he started to walk toward me. Come on Katara, MOVE! I said to myself. MOVE!
I know that post was short but oh well, someone else continue. I don't know what to do next. Oh and whoever does it next will decide whether he is mad or smirking. Personally, I want him to be smirking but it's okay if you make him mad.
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Post by waterbendergrl06 on Sept 15, 2006 19:05:30 GMT -5
sorry to double post but I decided I wanted to continue it.
Come on Katara, MOVE! I said to myself. MOVE Why couldn't I move? It was as if his gaze paralyzed me. I watched as he moved closer. Then, suddenly, he stopped.
"Come out of there." he said angrily. "I know your there. If you come out now I won't hurt you." I just stayed there not wanting to come out. "I know your there." he said a little madder. Again I just stayed "hidden" in the bush. He clenched his fist, obviously angry, as fire formed under it. I squinted my eyes a bit, getting a little scared.
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Post by waterbendergrl06 on Sept 16, 2006 7:20:08 GMT -5
"Come out NOW!" he said getting very mad. I then started to move back getting ready to run for it. As if he could read my mind he ran forward and grabbed me by the collar of my shirt.
"Now where do you think you're going?" he said staring me right into the eyes. Then another idea popped into my head, I could knee him in the shin and then make a run for it. Yet again it was like he read my mind. He spun me around and grabbed me by the hands with one hand and grabbed my waist with the other. As much as I struggled to get free, it was no use. I was stuck.
Come on people! continue this! I'm doing way past my share!
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Post by beautyfr.pain on Sept 17, 2006 19:31:37 GMT -5
He pinned me against a tree. I could feel his hands heating up in anger, and yet cooling down, as if he were trying to control his anger.
"Why were you watching me?" he said in a hushed voice. In the background, I heard a heavy snore. It was the man that Zuko was always with...What did he always call him?
"Your Uncle...is he ok?" I asked abruptly, completely ignoring his question.
"Why should you care, peasant? Aren't I just an arrogant fireprince?"
"You may be an arrogant fireprince, even a BANISHED one," he winced as I mentioned his status in the firenation's heirarchy, "I've seen the posters. But you're still human. We all are."
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Post by waterbendergrl06 on Sept 17, 2006 20:11:29 GMT -5
He paused for a second, as if no one had said he was human before. But it quickly ended and be again became mad.
"I asked you a question peasant!" he said angrily pressing his hands up against my wrists. I bit my lip, having my wrist begin to hurt.
"Well I asked you a question!" I said a bit louder pushing forward.
"I ask the questions, you answer them." he said glaring at me pressing even harder on my wrists.
"Well, I'm not answering your question until you answer mine." I said determined not to give in to him.
"He's fine." he mumbled looking away. I paused not knowing what to say. "Well?" he said waiting.
"Well what?" I said.
"I answered your question, now you answer mine!" he said getting angry again. "Why were you watching me?"
"Well, I heard you while watching Appa and..." I paused. Dang it, I just gave away that Aang was near and from what I saw during the three way fight, Zuko was still after Aang.
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Post by waterbendergrl06 on Sept 18, 2006 19:16:15 GMT -5
"And!" he said looking at me as if he didn't care Aang was nearby.
"And I was wondering what was making all the noise." I said thinking off the top of my head.
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Post by waterbendergrl06 on Sept 19, 2006 20:43:10 GMT -5
"Now can you let go of my hands." I said trying to get free.
"What's the matter?" he said as a smirk spread across his face. "My hands too warm for you?"
My only response was a glare as I was getting very mad at him. This only made him smirk more.
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Sparky
Sokka
i heart Sokka AND Zuko!!!! (wonderful siggies made by AngelEyes and icon by catalyst)
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Post by Sparky on Oct 2, 2006 19:09:31 GMT -5
I'm new at this but ill give it a shot (first fanfic) ;D
I looked at him, trying to look fierce but obviously it didnt work because all he did was arch one eyebrow at my pathetic attempt. I guess he had had enough of teasing me because he let go of my wrists and turned around. He looked like he was thinking about something because he was staring at the starry sky above us. I watched him for a few moments and then cautiously asked "what are you thinking about?" he half turned towards me. That one gold-as-honey eye looking at me. "none of your business waterbender" he answered harshly but did i detect a little hesitation in his voice kind of as if he hadnt meant it to sound so harsh? it could just be me. Suddenly he reached out and grabbed my wrist once more, this time not so tight, and started pulling me towards a large tent. I began struggling violently but i started to feel his hand warm up and an image of my wrist being burned to nothing popped into my mind. Instantly I stopped. He pushed me into the tent and sat me down on a bench, never letting go. He then tied my arms and legs up and made sure there was no water anywhere near me. "What do you think youre doing?" I shouted at him. "If you must know, I'm using you as bait for the Avatar. He'll come after you and thats when I can capture him." His mouth twitched, almost a smile, as if he were very pleased with his plan. "But I have to keep you here tonight, my plan will be executed in the morning" and with that he walked out of the tent leaving me alone and a bit confused. A few minutes later he came back, he looked extremely annoyed. He was carrying his sleeping bag. "What are you doing?" I asked, trying to sound brave. "My uncle's snores are driving me crazy!," he answered "I can't sleep in the same tent as him I'll sleep here" He spread his sleeping bag away from me. I must admit it was kinda awkward, watching him go to sleep. You know i never noticed how bright his eyes shone gold when even the littlest light hit them...
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Post by PakkunsPosse on Oct 4, 2006 22:07:32 GMT -5
He fell asleep and I got very bored. I couldn't even twiddle my thumbs because my hands were tied behind my back. Finally I fell asleep. When I woke up the tent was empty. I tried to move my hand but I couldn't so I kind of freaked out. Then I remembered my hands were tied up. Then Zuko came in and grabbed my shoulder, stood me up, and shoved me out of the tent. I stumbled and fell because well my feet were tied up.
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Post by waterbendergrl06 on Oct 6, 2006 14:15:46 GMT -5
My face hit the ground and got a little dirt in my mouth, causing me to cough. I started swinging back and forth trying to roll over. Suddenly, someone grabbed the rope tying my hands together. I didn't even have to look to know who it was.
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Post by waterbendergrl06 on Oct 26, 2006 9:36:47 GMT -5
update this NOW! I have waited for people to yet they HAVEN'T!
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