Kyatto
Kyoshi Azula
Dance, magic dance!
Posts: 2,228
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Post by Kyatto on Mar 12, 2007 11:24:41 GMT -5
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Post by KyoshiWarrior on Mar 12, 2007 13:24:00 GMT -5
OMG!! Is zuko gonna die or is katara gonna use it and then die!!!?? Your story is getting more and more better *KARMA*
I can't wait for the next chapter!!
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zukoxme
Agni Kai Aang
Rabid Zuko Fangirl
Posts: 7,769
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Post by zukoxme on Mar 12, 2007 16:09:42 GMT -5
I love it. karma
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Post by mentalmishaps on Mar 12, 2007 17:59:25 GMT -5
Nice, very nice. W00T! Zutara smex! -is shot because she is a Kataang shipper-
However, I must say that your kissing scenes are getting VERY repetitive. Also, I command thee to proof read slowly. Three or four times. There were a few typos that were easy enough to figure out what you were saying, but it hinders the fic.
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Kyatto
Kyoshi Azula
Dance, magic dance!
Posts: 2,228
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Post by Kyatto on Mar 12, 2007 22:44:06 GMT -5
Nice, very nice. W00T! Zutara smex! -is shot because she is a Kataang shipper- However, I must say that your kissing scenes are getting VERY repetitive. Also, I command thee to proof read slowly. Three or four times. There were a few typos that were easy enough to figure out what you were saying, but it hinders the fic. Yeah, I proofread and then send it through my Beta. So anything left is whatever she missed. XD Once the fic is done I plan on going through it all again and redoing a few things. But I gotta focus on the bunnies while they're there before they decide to hop away. XD
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Jenny Lee
Ba Sing Se Azula
Icon by me, sig by Catalyst
Posts: 2,765
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Post by Jenny Lee on Mar 13, 2007 17:25:05 GMT -5
Yay, can't wait to read it. I have to eat now, so I'll read it in about 30 minutes. ;D
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Ilise
Buzzard Wasp
w00t, it's Jun
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Post by Ilise on Mar 13, 2007 20:04:22 GMT -5
The suspense... the intensity... the ZUTARA... *growl* It's brilliant. I loathe you. About your signature... have you seen " How to Kill a Mockingbird" lately? Cause that has some stuff... like in your sig... o.0 Ha ha hah ahhaha ahah that thing cracks me up. Don't let Zuko die.
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Kyatto
Kyoshi Azula
Dance, magic dance!
Posts: 2,228
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Post by Kyatto on Mar 14, 2007 12:54:36 GMT -5
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zukoxme
Agni Kai Aang
Rabid Zuko Fangirl
Posts: 7,769
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Post by zukoxme on Mar 14, 2007 16:14:25 GMT -5
Lurve it. *karma*
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Post by mentalmishaps on Mar 14, 2007 17:17:00 GMT -5
Oooh, fun. And more slashy goodness courtesy of Mai and Ty Lee of course. Just one question, did you get the "no attraction" thing from deviantart? I can't remeber the artist, but there were two little fancomic things.
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trustno1
Happy Festival Mask
"You got served xD"
Posts: 3,838
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Post by trustno1 on Mar 14, 2007 23:10:32 GMT -5
Wow, some more MaixTyLee action please.^^
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Kyatto
Kyoshi Azula
Dance, magic dance!
Posts: 2,228
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Post by Kyatto on Mar 15, 2007 16:37:29 GMT -5
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Post by KyoshiWarrior on Mar 15, 2007 18:24:52 GMT -5
Nice job!!! I love your story even MORE!! Nice soundtrack too!!! i downloaded some songs becuase i begna to hear them and then i loved them!!!
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zukoxme
Agni Kai Aang
Rabid Zuko Fangirl
Posts: 7,769
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Post by zukoxme on Mar 16, 2007 16:28:29 GMT -5
There are no words to describe the awesomeness in this story except one.
Karma.
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Kyatto
Kyoshi Azula
Dance, magic dance!
Posts: 2,228
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Post by Kyatto on Mar 21, 2007 13:08:25 GMT -5
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