daydream11
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Post by daydream11 on Dec 21, 2007 16:39:54 GMT -5
She'd be Azula's worst nightmare; then again, Azula would just hit her right back, show her who's boss, and tell her to mind her own business. XD Can't wait for the family reunion! I'm here, but I've been working and writing. You do want a new chapter, dont you? It's kind of a difficult chapter to write, suprisingly. I'm trying to move it along without underdoing certain details. *le sigh*
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Post by ethe on Dec 21, 2007 16:52:02 GMT -5
She'd be Azula's worst nightmare; then again, Azula would just hit her right back, show her who's boss, and tell her to mind her own business. XD Can't wait for the family reunion! I'm here, but I've been working and writing. You do want a new chapter, dont you? ;) It's kind of a difficult chapter to write, suprisingly. I'm trying to move it along without underdoing certain details. *le sigh* Yeah, Katara would definitely uh... try to break Azula. Literally ^^; But Azula would fight back, haha~ I can just imagine the catfights between them. Hope they can work things out xD Oh and hey, I'm going to read your fic ^^~. I'm guessing that you're talking about the one listed on the front page, right? Well once I read all the chapters (or at least half of them X3) I'll submit a review~
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daydream11
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Post by daydream11 on Dec 21, 2007 21:35:21 GMT -5
I have a question for y'all: Would Suki be a decent addition to D'Amour & Deteste? When? How? Why? I've been trying to figure out if characters that, at the moment, missing from the story (Iroh, Suki, etc.) would fit into it. I have my OC Ai as a very minor love interest, and she and the maids will play a (minor-ish) part in the story, but I want a boatload of major characters to show up, too, and have an even bigger impact.
So please, an author could use your advice! I'm trying not to ask for an official beta, but I'm more than willing to receive outside help.
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Post by ethe on Dec 22, 2007 2:16:57 GMT -5
Hmm... I say no to Suki. Adding Suki is so cliche' XD I mean, I'm even doing it myself... Hmm, well I guess it wouldn't be that bad if you added Suki :P The SokkaSukiAzula love-triangle-but-not-really seems like it would be common in sokkla fics, but I'm not sure. I like Ai, and for some reason the image I have of her is somewhat like Hama when she was young only a bit more feminine.~
._. and you referenced to Marie Antoinette in your fic. To that all I can say is yay! XD I love Marie Antoinette~ It's just so sad that she had to die ):
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Post by LiveInThaskyE on Dec 22, 2007 2:22:55 GMT -5
I'm not sure daydream,I'd have to read your fic first, I have't been in the mood to read fanfics lately.
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Post by luna on Dec 22, 2007 2:44:49 GMT -5
In answer to kaiba, mine fav aspect is the good boy/ bad girl thing. Love. It.
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Post by LiveInThaskyE on Dec 22, 2007 3:04:04 GMT -5
^Where did Kaiba pose the question?
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Post by luna on Dec 22, 2007 3:21:24 GMT -5
e-chan wrote something for the sokkla100 challenge on LJ ^^ Here it is if anyone wants to read it, but it's rated R, so just a warning. Topic...Oooh, okay, I asked this over at the Taang thread, but let's try it for this pair. What's your favorite aspect of the Sokkla relationship? Mine's definitely the humor XD Right thar!
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Post by LiveInThaskyE on Dec 22, 2007 4:35:54 GMT -5
^Oh,I saw that right after she posted it. Thanks for answering my question.
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Post by ethe on Dec 22, 2007 15:38:00 GMT -5
@dream~: I'd die (in a good way) if you added Yue *-* A yue/Sokka/Azula love triangle would be nice ^^, IMO.
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daydream11
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Post by daydream11 on Dec 22, 2007 21:03:57 GMT -5
No love triangles, y'all, sorry. Well, okay, there might be one later on, but I'm not quite sure how I want that to go. XP Yue, is someone I hadn't even thought about, but would be a good addition. I wanted/need Suki because Azula did pwn her in Season 2 (at the end of which the DAED starts), so I need closure. We also have Ai, who's Sokka's current girl. Hmmm... Evie, you're a wonder. My notes are piling up! ANYWAY... since I've been home for all of ten minutes and I'm much too tired to actually write, I have to say this: Vive la Sokkla!
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Post by catalyst283 on Dec 22, 2007 23:48:55 GMT -5
Hey everyone, guess what? =D
I just wrote chapter SEVEN today (the next chapter XD) of "Taking Over Me" (btw, thanks for putting it on the front page ;D) and have pretty much planned out the rest of the fic. :3 I'll be typing up and editing the chapter a bit tomorrow before posting it; but you will see it very soon! *dances*
ALSO, I am editing the FANFICTION.NET versions of the story; while looking over my previous chapters (to get inspiration for the next chapter and figure out where I was going with the story) I found a lot of grammatical errors and the like, so I'll be fixing those in the fanfiction.net version of all previous six chapters; I won't edit it here because I'm lazy. :X
Just letting you all know. ;]
And to your question, daydream, I agree and think adding Suki might be too much...though it'd be interesting to see Iroh in the story! XD
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Post by ethe on Dec 23, 2007 19:06:34 GMT -5
^YAY! :D Ficcage~ ^^~ And I guess it really will be like a christmas present~ Haha~ When are you going to be finished with editing everything? I'd like to give it a re-read then, unless your just going through to fix grammer and the like 8D
and I'm waiting for the kissy scenes 8D
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Post by catalyst283 on Dec 23, 2007 20:54:42 GMT -5
@etheral: YAYZ! ^_^ I'm going off to type the chapter up right now, and after that I'll edit it again (I edited it a couple times after writing it in my notebook) before posting it. ^^ It will be! Because I'll probably post it tomorrow, midday, so more people see it. XD Cause whenever I post things late at night, nobody sees them---anywhere...and then they get bumped down the page and nobody ends up seeing them. DX I edited everything all last night; I re-posted the chapters on fanfiction.net---all of them. And it's just grammar and the like, actually; I just noticed I made a lot of grammar mistakes and had messed up sentence structure in some chapters....so I fixed all those mistakes so the chapters are easier to read. XD But I didn't add any more description or anything; so you aren't missing anything, really. XD So am I---I really want to WRITE the scenes.....but I've got to take their relationship very slowly...or else it won't be realistic. XD I already can take it a tad faster because Azula has amnesia....but once she gets her memory back-----oh boy. ^___^'''
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Post by ethe on Dec 24, 2007 16:58:50 GMT -5
Funny thing about fics -- the one I type on my computer is basically the same thing as the one in my notebook but I always end up doing major editing. So many lines are added and removed @-@ It's like MS Word has this... magic power that improves my writing and makes my fics semi-but-not-really-awesome~ And I so understand about taking it slow. Romances seem more... realistic when they aren't rushed into. Unless it's love at first sight... but even when someone becomes immediately infactuated with a person, it's usually unrequited So yeah, slow is the way to go~
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