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Post by kataralovesaang on Jun 8, 2006 15:24:12 GMT -5
Have you ever wished a scene had ended diffrently for your ship, one that would help your ship out? I have, and I decided to make a thread in which you can change the lines that they say, and adjust them to your liking. If you can, write the acutal lines first, then your adjusted lines below it! I'll try to get us started. A/K Gran-Gran: Katara, I'm sure you'll feel better after... Katara: I hope you're happy! There goes my one chance at being a waterbender! Redo Gran-Gran: Katara, I'm sure you'll feel better after... Katara: I hope you're happy! There goes my one chance at love!
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gambitia
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Post by gambitia on Jun 8, 2006 15:27:52 GMT -5
Song: I know you don't think there's any hope left in the world. But there is hope! The Avatar has returned!
Zuko: I know...but my hope doesn't lie with the Avatar. It lies...with you.
Song: Oh Zuko!
Zuko: Oh Song!
*makey-outey session*
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storybookgirl
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Post by storybookgirl on Jun 8, 2006 15:34:48 GMT -5
(Heads straight over to avatarspirit.net. ...still thinking of how to change certain things into a more Zutara-y way.)
EDIT: HAHAHAHA!!! I love you, Gambitia! ...well, FINE, if you want cheesy:
Episode: Waterbending Scroll
Zuko: Try to understand... I LOVE YOU!
Katara: ...WHAT? (blushes)
Zuko: I'm sorry but... I can't hide it. I must tell you how much I admire and love you.
Iroh: Admire and love you? Ooo! A Pride and Prejudice quote!
Zuko: Katara... will you marry me? (pulls out necklace)
Katara: Oh! Yes. Yes, I will! I can't hide it either! I love you, too!
Pirates: (raise eyebrows)
Captain: Where's our scroll?!
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gambitia
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Post by gambitia on Jun 8, 2006 15:40:14 GMT -5
(Heads straight over to avatarspirit.net. ...still thinking of how to change certain things into a more Zutara-y way.) When I grow up, I'm going to write cheesy soap operas. Zuko: I'll save you from the pirates! Katara: But who will save you...from yourself? Give up your hunt for the Avatar! It will lead to nothing but your destruction! Teach Aang firebending! You could help us, Zuko! Zuko: Mein Gott*, woman! But how? How can I help you? Katara: You can start by marrying me! A bi-nation marriage will show everyone that not all firebenders are evil! Zuko: Okay! *Why does Zuko speak German? Because Gamby likes it. I abuse the exclamation point something awful.
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storybookgirl
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Post by storybookgirl on Jun 8, 2006 15:45:24 GMT -5
LOL! Yay! I wanna be a bridesmaid at their wedding!!!
I love cheesy stuff...
Zuko: You rise with the moon. I rise with the sun.
Katara: Wow, that was really poetic.
Zuko: Really? Yah like it? Cool! Then you'll like all the cheesy romantic poems I wrote for you!
Katara: Oh! I'd love to hear them! (they kiss)
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gambitia
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Post by gambitia on Jun 8, 2006 15:53:37 GMT -5
*This is strangely amusing*
Lee: You don’t seem like you’re from around here.
Zuko: Uh-uh.
Lee: Where are you from then?
Zuko: Far away.
Lee: Oh. Where’re you going?
Gansu: Lee, give it a rest. Stop asking the man personal questions, got it?
Lee: *sighs dejectedly* Yes… *then brightly* So, how did you get that scar?
Zuko: *angrily* By asking too many questions!
Lee: Oh. *is quiet for a while* Do you have a girlfriend?
Zuko: *a troubled expression crosses Zuko's face*
*cut to clip of Zuko and Song skipping through a flowery meadow, hand in hand. The sun is shining brightly. Song trips, and Zuko catches her. They laugh for a while, then stare deep into each others' eyes.*
*make-out commences*
*cut back to Zuko*
Zuko: I wish I did...but it's too late now...*tragic music plays*
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Post by almighty on Jun 8, 2006 15:59:36 GMT -5
That's great gambitia... If only it would really happen. Can you write one including Julius Emu Song?
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storybookgirl
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Post by storybookgirl on Jun 8, 2006 16:00:22 GMT -5
HUGS ZUKO! Poor baby...
(I don't know if the quotes are completely accurate...)
Jun: Your girlfriend run away from you?
Zuko: It's not the pretty girl I'm after. (not realizing what he just said) (eyes widen as he realizes)
Iroh: ...pretty?
Zuko: Ummm... (blushes)
EDIT: Yay! Julius Emo Song! (grins)
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Post by kataralovesaang on Jun 8, 2006 16:05:23 GMT -5
This one acually doesn't have any lines in it.
End of Seige of the North Part 2: Katara and Aang turn around and insted of hugging, they start kissing.
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Post by gambitia on Jun 8, 2006 16:07:51 GMT -5
*okay, so it's a drabble, not rewritten lines...*
Maybe it was the desert's heat. Maybe it was that he hadn't eaten or drank anything for days.
But he swore that ostrichhorse was talking to him.
"I want to go back to Song," it said, looking angrily at Zuko.
"Too bad, ostrichhorse," Zuko replied.
"My name is Julius Emo Song."
"Too bad."
"Why don't you want to go back to Song? She's nice."
"It's not that I don't want to go back, " Zuko blurted, "It's just...I can't face her. I can't. Not after I stole from her. What would she think of me?"
"She'll forgive you. She always does. I told you, she's the nicest person I've ever met," Julius Emo Song counseled.
"Really?"
"Yep. Now let's turn around and go back."
"Okay."
And into the sunset they rode, back toward the one woman they both wanted to see.
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Post by almighty on Jun 8, 2006 16:14:40 GMT -5
Duuuude... gambitia... you're my hero.... even though Zuko kind of seemed like he lost it. You konw.. talking with Julius Emo Song and everything. ;D
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Post by gambitia on Jun 8, 2006 16:17:33 GMT -5
Duuuude... gambitia... you're my hero.... even though Zuko kind of seemed like he lost it. You konw.. talking with Julius Emo Song and everything. ;D Julius Emo Song is a magical ostrichhorse. And...I'm in that type of mood. I already made Zuko speak German, so...why shouldn't he talk to animals?
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Post by storybookgirl on Jun 8, 2006 16:19:02 GMT -5
Aw! Julius Emo Song is so cute... I love how you wrote him, haha! ...I want a Julius Emo Song plushie.
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Post by howdythere on Jun 8, 2006 16:36:01 GMT -5
Toph: Who's Zuko? Sokka: Oh, just some angry freak with a ponytail. Katara: What's wrong with ponytails? I like the way Zuko's ponytail swishes around all the time!
Who doesn't the love the way it swishes around all the time?
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Post by silverdreams on Jun 8, 2006 17:58:42 GMT -5
Song: I know you don't think there's any hope left in the world. But there is hope! The Avatar has returned! Zuko: I know...but my hope doesn't lie with the Avatar. It lies...with you. Song: Oh Zuko! Zuko: Oh Song! *makey-outey session* hahahah that just made me lol xD
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