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Post by Gran Gran on Apr 10, 2008 13:11:49 GMT -5
No1 is very nice, how ever it seems you cut the base of the building off. It is a very nice picture, but sometimes for tall buildings an upright format is more favorable. No 2, Love it. However, you could have cropped the windshield wipers. No3 (the angel) perfect, not much if anything to improve. No4 while I like the idea of the frame, the motive is a bit off...I know I am absolutely insuffereable about these things... No5 again nice, but the composition/centering of the focal point can use some improvement. i love the B&W No6 again nothing to add to what GUG said. closeups are very difficult IMHO No7 love the scenery...I am sure it looked a whole lot better IRL it's nice (looks like at my grandma's house...naturally I love it) however - again composition....it's lovely, but a bit bland. over all, I am impressed! You might want to experiment with different lighting, back light, early morning/late evening, dusk and dawn... BTW I have read that the pros prefer overcast days, almost to the point of rain to shoot gardens for magazines... and from another perspective - mostly as gardener who sometimes gets envious looking at magazines - what you leave out of the picture can be just as, if not more important as what you include... (and the manipulations are nice, too. The overlay is maybe a little generic...but it gives the family photoes an interesting touch!) Also, if you can lay your hands on them (and your camera supports them) experiment with filters and lenses that are added to your camera. Polarisation lenses enhance daytime pictures, color lenses make the sunset really pop or optical lenses that distort the image...they are a bit on the pricey side though
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