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Post by Nightmare on Sept 26, 2010 2:16:15 GMT -5
PLEASE COMMENT. PLEASE. I worked hard. Well, if you're gonna beg. I hope the Cowboys win tomorrow. How cool would it be if Tony Romo was a firebender. He could set up a wall of flames when his front line can't protect him. Better yet, a quaterback should be an airbender. That way he could just float the ball into the end zone and suspend it on air until one of his receivers, probably Miles Austin, could catch up with it. Oh, you meant comment on your story. Ok, well, I've just read your first chapter so far. Not bad. Lemme ask, do you have a target audience in mind, specifically a certain age group?
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