BurningMoon's Poems....

[burningmoon65]

Just something I'd like to say before You read any of these Poems (if You even bother to read them): I'm not that good at Writing, so PLEASE don't be too mean with your Comments. I'll take the Criticism and Suggestions, but please don't Flame me if You don't like what I've written.

As always, I'm open to any Comments and Suggestions you may have. I accept Anonymous Reviews on FictionPress, in case you wanted to know.

Title: Sometimes, there are Days....
Author: MidnightMoonBeams65 (A.K.A. BurningMoon65)
Rating: PG
Summary: Some days, I just feel this way....
Link: www.fictionpress.com/s/2629933/1/Sometimes_there_are_Days

Title: Late at Night, the Thoughts in my Head....
Author: MidnightMoonBeams65 (A.K.A. BurningMoon65)
Rating: PG
Summary: When he left, she was forced to make the hardest decision of her Life. He never knew what went on in that head of Hers....
Link: www.fictionpress.com/s/2636216/1/Late_at_Night_the_thoughts_in_my_Head

Title: You were there for Me....
Author: MidnightMoonBeams65 (A.K.A. BurningMoon65)
Rating: G-PG
Summary: The night that I met him, my life was changed Forever....
Link: www.fictionpress.com/s/2636522/1/You_were_there_for_Me

Title: I'll be waiting here for You....
Author: BurningMoon65
Rating: G
Summary: If you have a bad day, I'm right here waiting for You....
Link: www.lunaescence.com/fics/viewstory.php?sid=8271&warning=13+
As you noticed, I LOVE to write in First Person!

[gothloli]

I like your poetry a lot
I read the first and third...the second does not seem to open up for me.
I really liked the rhyme scheme in particular, and I think that's partly due to the fact that I usally don't have one.lol (most of my poetry is written in free verse) But yeah it was good, and even if affronted by negative comments, you just can't stop writing and besides I doubt people will be bothered to write anything at all.
so stop being so hard on yourself.

[burningmoon65]

Awww.... Thanks!

That's strange. It opened up for me.... but then again, sometimes Computers can be pure evil....

That's nice to hear. I always try to make it rhyme, but sometimes it doesn't turn out how I want it to....
Ah, okay. I'm not a big fan of Free Verse. I'll still read in time to time, though.

Well, I haven't gotten any negative comments yet. I'm just hoping it will stay that way. I've seen how mean people can be....

*Giggles* I'll try.

(By the way, I like that Poem in your Sig. )

[notreal]

I think you have a lot of potential, actually, but you really need to use spell check. Also, the rhythm seems a little off. I'm usually a big fan of this type of scheme, but it usually works better when the subject is as uncertain as the style.

[burningmoon65]

Thank you! I know, and I'm going to start to use Spell Check more often. I'll also try my best to work on the rhythm.

Thanks for the Advice!