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Post by wildimagination on Sept 14, 2008 11:10:26 GMT -5
(I debated whether or not to put this in the fanfiction board, but I couldn't decide...) So...I made a fanfic: www.fanfiction.net/s/4434066/1/Life_Turns_AroundIt's not gaining popularity, and I don't know why. All of the characters are in character, there are no Mary Sues/Gary Stus, and it's not AU. I know some authors have times where they write fanfiction that no one likes, but still! I worked hard on that fanfic! I want to know what I'm doing wrong! Can someone please tell me where I wernt wrong with that fanfic? Thanks in advance!
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Grandi
Bato
Prince of All Cosmos
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Post by Grandi on Sept 14, 2008 12:08:19 GMT -5
might be better to put this in the creations board
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Post by Paraiba Ocean on Sept 14, 2008 12:08:28 GMT -5
It's in your opinion that the characters are IC.
From the first chapter, Mai doesn't rub me off as Mai and the situations are...just plain weird. :/
If Azula popped out after escaping prison, I doubt Zuko would sit there and just converse with her, and then just leave her.
Moving this to the fanfic board.
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