Post by random bender on Sept 6, 2008 13:54:07 GMT -5
ok after mabey forever i have added more to this story and i belive i have fixed most of the spelling errors.
I don't understand.
How could I have turned out like this? Every thing was planned so well. I have nothing nothing now. I can barely move and it's been weeks already.
Zuko is Fire Lord now.
Zuko!
The Prince who knew nothing of respect or authority figures! The coward who refused to fight for his honor the first chance he got! He who betrayed his own country and was praised because of it!
Peace and kindness!
That's a fool's dream for the world. The only way you can get what you want is to fight for it! War is the nature of this world. It always will be. Conflict will arise in Zuko's time and war will never be an option for him! He will be destroyed! Along with the Fire Nation!
And when he falls with the fire nation, who will be there to rise it up to its former glory? To once and for all show that FIRE is the supreme element. I no longer have my bending but there is still a fire in me to rule.
FIRE LORD OZAI WILL REIGN AGAIN!
Mark my words.
My plot to rule the world began years ago and it seemed like it took the Avatar so little effort to take me down, and he was still too weak to kill me.
He will regret that.
He will regret it, but I still don’t understand why he did not kill
me.
Humf, why should I have to understand anything from the mind of a twelve year old boy? With every moral and value, they just get in the way of what you want.The only thing you keep close is what you can use to get what you want.
Zuko and Ursa were just in the way.
Two of a kind.
Useless.
Azula was not completely useless. She had many of my traits, but she could not handle being feared by all. She was not strong enough to tolerate those who could not hold their tongues.
She got paranoid.
Thought every one was out to get her. She should have known that she was feared enough that she knew that not one would even dare.
She could not handle that.
And she fell.
Of course use of her vanished when I became Phoenix king and……..
and…….?
……………….I….?
I’m in a prison cell.
ok break in the middle of the story "red" is zuko taliking "white" Oazi talking, white no " " is oazi thinking.
There are so many things that I will never admit to anyone.
Not even myself.
I stayed in denial so I would never have to deal with my problems.
And that seemed to work.
Till now.
Hummh? Who could that be? The guard should not be her with dinner till later.
Zuko.
What does he want.
Probably here to gloat about his glorious victory.
Now that he knows I can’t do a thing to him, he chooses this time to laugh at me in my defeat! The coward.
“I should consider myself lucky, the new Firelord has graced me with his presence.”
“You should consider yourself lucky the avatar spared your life.”
Right! I’m so lucky that instead of the avatar killing me he spares my life and leaves me …
IN PRISON!
To rot.
So lucky.
“Actually, I should thank you. Banishing me was the best thing you did for me. It put me on the right path.”
You think I’m an idiot.
That’s not why you came down here.
To thank my, Phu!
You hate me and you know it!!
“Maybe your time in here will help put you on the right path”
Path to what…….nothing
I’ve done my part as your so called villian.
I’m defeated.
I should be dead.
“Why are you really here?”
“Because you are going to tell me something.
Where is my mother?”
Why would I know that?
I did not keep track of you when you where banished!
Why in world would I keep track of her!?!
Stupid boy.
“I don’t know…”
“Don’t give me that!! I know you know wher…!!
“I SAID I DON’T KNOW NOW GE…!”
“….I don’t know, your highness,
Please leave.”
No one Knows.
I miss spoke ealear, Ursa was not a usless as I made her out to be. She was the only reson I became firelord when I did.
But she did not do it for me.
She was only conserined with saveing zuko's life.
Love and family became nothing but dead weight to me.
When Iroh had lost his son, he fell apart, along with our chance to take control of ba sing sa.
I found it the perfict time to ask and convince father to relinquish the crown to me.
Iroh was a faliure and had no heir.
All did not go as planed.
I had to kill Zuko.
After thoght I relized that this could help me become firelord.
I slay zuko and have no emotional phase. Compared to my brother who fell to peices and lost the battle of ba sing sa.
Father would see I was the strongest of the two brothers and I would become the next heir.
Ursa found out.
She refered to me as a heartless, evil, monster to even think of the plan.
I remember the last day I saw her.
The first day I hated her.
I can't say I even ever loved Ursa. It was an arrange marriage. We were happy the first years of our marriage, but it did not seem to last.
The summers so long ago.
She did not understan, even if I had decided not to kill Zuko I would of had no choice. I was orderd to by Father.
Uras plan was genius and undetectable.
In order to save zuko there had to be someone eals on the thrown. But Father was in no danger of dieing, and Iroh was weeks from home.
Things just seemed to fall into place of what I wanted.
A cheery
pit
and a natrual cause of death.
But I know Ursa did not want me to be fire lord, and to keep her form trying to dethrone me
I had her banished.
I don't understand.
How could I have turned out like this? Every thing was planned so well. I have nothing nothing now. I can barely move and it's been weeks already.
Zuko is Fire Lord now.
Zuko!
The Prince who knew nothing of respect or authority figures! The coward who refused to fight for his honor the first chance he got! He who betrayed his own country and was praised because of it!
Peace and kindness!
That's a fool's dream for the world. The only way you can get what you want is to fight for it! War is the nature of this world. It always will be. Conflict will arise in Zuko's time and war will never be an option for him! He will be destroyed! Along with the Fire Nation!
And when he falls with the fire nation, who will be there to rise it up to its former glory? To once and for all show that FIRE is the supreme element. I no longer have my bending but there is still a fire in me to rule.
FIRE LORD OZAI WILL REIGN AGAIN!
Mark my words.
My plot to rule the world began years ago and it seemed like it took the Avatar so little effort to take me down, and he was still too weak to kill me.
He will regret that.
He will regret it, but I still don’t understand why he did not kill
me.
Humf, why should I have to understand anything from the mind of a twelve year old boy? With every moral and value, they just get in the way of what you want.The only thing you keep close is what you can use to get what you want.
Zuko and Ursa were just in the way.
Two of a kind.
Useless.
Azula was not completely useless. She had many of my traits, but she could not handle being feared by all. She was not strong enough to tolerate those who could not hold their tongues.
She got paranoid.
Thought every one was out to get her. She should have known that she was feared enough that she knew that not one would even dare.
She could not handle that.
And she fell.
Of course use of her vanished when I became Phoenix king and……..
and…….?
……………….I….?
I’m in a prison cell.
ok break in the middle of the story "red" is zuko taliking "white" Oazi talking, white no " " is oazi thinking.
There are so many things that I will never admit to anyone.
Not even myself.
I stayed in denial so I would never have to deal with my problems.
And that seemed to work.
Till now.
Hummh? Who could that be? The guard should not be her with dinner till later.
Zuko.
What does he want.
Probably here to gloat about his glorious victory.
Now that he knows I can’t do a thing to him, he chooses this time to laugh at me in my defeat! The coward.
“I should consider myself lucky, the new Firelord has graced me with his presence.”
“You should consider yourself lucky the avatar spared your life.”
Right! I’m so lucky that instead of the avatar killing me he spares my life and leaves me …
IN PRISON!
To rot.
So lucky.
“Actually, I should thank you. Banishing me was the best thing you did for me. It put me on the right path.”
You think I’m an idiot.
That’s not why you came down here.
To thank my, Phu!
You hate me and you know it!!
“Maybe your time in here will help put you on the right path”
Path to what…….nothing
I’ve done my part as your so called villian.
I’m defeated.
I should be dead.
“Why are you really here?”
“Because you are going to tell me something.
Where is my mother?”
Why would I know that?
I did not keep track of you when you where banished!
Why in world would I keep track of her!?!
Stupid boy.
“I don’t know…”
“Don’t give me that!! I know you know wher…!!
“I SAID I DON’T KNOW NOW GE…!”
“….I don’t know, your highness,
Please leave.”
No one Knows.
I miss spoke ealear, Ursa was not a usless as I made her out to be. She was the only reson I became firelord when I did.
But she did not do it for me.
She was only conserined with saveing zuko's life.
Love and family became nothing but dead weight to me.
When Iroh had lost his son, he fell apart, along with our chance to take control of ba sing sa.
I found it the perfict time to ask and convince father to relinquish the crown to me.
Iroh was a faliure and had no heir.
All did not go as planed.
I had to kill Zuko.
After thoght I relized that this could help me become firelord.
I slay zuko and have no emotional phase. Compared to my brother who fell to peices and lost the battle of ba sing sa.
Father would see I was the strongest of the two brothers and I would become the next heir.
Ursa found out.
She refered to me as a heartless, evil, monster to even think of the plan.
I remember the last day I saw her.
The first day I hated her.
I can't say I even ever loved Ursa. It was an arrange marriage. We were happy the first years of our marriage, but it did not seem to last.
The summers so long ago.
She did not understan, even if I had decided not to kill Zuko I would of had no choice. I was orderd to by Father.
Uras plan was genius and undetectable.
In order to save zuko there had to be someone eals on the thrown. But Father was in no danger of dieing, and Iroh was weeks from home.
Things just seemed to fall into place of what I wanted.
A cheery
pit
and a natrual cause of death.
But I know Ursa did not want me to be fire lord, and to keep her form trying to dethrone me
I had her banished.