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Post by Dutchy on Sept 14, 2008 14:46:51 GMT -5
It's awesome *exalts*
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Post by Horyo on Sept 14, 2008 16:16:49 GMT -5
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Post by Chibi Chan-o on Sept 14, 2008 20:40:33 GMT -5
Horyo, why did I kill Hinata? 0_0
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Post by Horyo on Sept 14, 2008 21:29:44 GMT -5
Uh..you killed a mary sue, hehehe =D
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Post by night on Sept 14, 2008 21:33:56 GMT -5
Yay, I'm thar. =D
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Post by Horyo on Sept 15, 2008 22:16:24 GMT -5
Wooowwwww, DH must be reallyyyy dead, otherwise I'd expect more feedback D;
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Post by Solvabibble on Sept 15, 2008 23:06:36 GMT -5
Exquisite, Horyo ♥
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Post by Blind Bandit on Sept 16, 2008 1:35:34 GMT -5
Wooowwwww, DH must be reallyyyy dead, otherwise I'd expect more feedback D; Nice work, sorry some of them are hard for me to see. But karma when I can
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Post by tiaramaki on Sept 16, 2008 14:56:40 GMT -5
Very nice, Horyo.
The only criticism that I'll give is that when you add the "SFX: [whatever]", 1.) In most comics that I see, this only applies in a few of the comics that have sound effects in kanji, Korean, or whatever, and 2.) In English comics, the sound effects don't have the SFX part. Putting in "SFX: [insert sound here]" kinda messes up the... what's the word I'm looking for? Flow of the story? Emotion? I dunno. It just gets in the way. Don't kick me; you don't have to take it out, but I'm trying to make a point. =X
But your art is fine. Nothing wrong with that. =D I can't wait for the next pages.
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Post by Horyo on Sept 16, 2008 15:14:06 GMT -5
Ohhhh I'm reading the translations of other mangas, that's why.
Hmm, I should be drawing in the words with the pictures themselves.
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Post by darkblood_alchemist on Sept 16, 2008 19:33:26 GMT -5
^Yeah, the "SFX:" thing is usually just because different cultures have different "sound" conventions.
For what you said before about redrawing frames you can always go back and do that later. (kind of "spruce up" the entire thing)
And um, who's who? *attention span dead/can't focus enough*
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Post by Horyo on Sept 18, 2008 23:42:33 GMT -5
I just added in Night, Gacs, and Orangey.
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Post by LiveInThaskyE on Sept 18, 2008 23:51:23 GMT -5
Excellent stuff Horyo, I really can't wait to see what happens next.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 19, 2008 3:37:29 GMT -5
Yay another update, I love the new pages Horyo.
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Post by Horyo on Jan 20, 2009 7:22:50 GMT -5
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