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Post by Zukosfire5 on Jan 16, 2006 17:37:54 GMT -5
This is a plot I thought up on Element Benders RPG, and here it is:
After Zula killed her father to ascend to the throne, she ordered all her soldiers to search for the Avatar. Finally, he was brought to her, and she killed him with a swift Firebending fist. However, he was reborn in the Water Tribes, unbeknownest to Zula. However, the war was soon finished, and The Fire Nation ruled the world. But a resistance began to form, led by none other than Prince Zuko. 15 years after the end of the Great War, the resistance movement has gone to search for the Avatar, and perhaps restore balance to the world.
Characters: Zuko-Taken by zukosfire5 Katara- Sokka- the Avatar-
OCs: Kasvar Masnai Hei Tenkei
Please sign up! Post either your OC info here, or post the link to the info.
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skygrl16
Momo
I may be the Avatar, but I never wanted to be.
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Post by skygrl16 on Jan 16, 2006 19:21:19 GMT -5
This is a plot I thought up on Element Benders RPG, and here it is: After Zula killed her father to ascend to the throne, she ordered all her soldiers to search for the Avatar. Finally, he was brought to her, and she killed him with a swift Firebending fist. However, he was reborn in the Water Tribes, unbeknownest to Zula. However, the war was soon finished, and The Fire Nation ruled the world. But a resistance began to form, led by none other than Prince Zuko. 15 years after the end of the Great War, the resistance movement has gone to search for the Avatar, and perhaps restore balance to the world. Characters: Zuko-Taken by zukosfire5 Katara- Sokka- the Avatar- OCs: Please sign up! Post either your OC info here, or post the link to the info. I like it SOOOOO mutch! I wouldn't mind helping out. how about making the Avatar a girl this time..?
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Post by Zukosfire5 on Jan 16, 2006 19:27:03 GMT -5
The Avatar can be a girl or a boy, so long as he/she is in one of the Water Tribes. If you want to be the Avatar, you can.
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Post by godhunter on Jan 16, 2006 19:43:53 GMT -5
are you going to be talking OC's or are you just looking for those specific characters?
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Post by Zukosfire5 on Jan 16, 2006 19:57:10 GMT -5
I want both the canon characters, plus OCs.
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kasvar
Meng
I'm trolling. *is slapped* Okay I deserved that....
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Post by kasvar on Jan 19, 2006 17:57:18 GMT -5
I am so there!
Name: Kasvar Age: 17 Hair: White Eyes: Brick Red Height: 5'10'' Likes: Water Nation People Tolerates: Earth Nation People, Zuko Hates: Leaders of the Fire Nation Hobies: Stealing from the Fire Nation. Goals: To not be captured by the fire nation. To turn the war around. Attitude: Wise, and solitary Past: An X-Commander of the Fire Nation. Lead the brigade of new recruits to attack earth nations most powerful units. Disliked the mistreatment of enimies and prisoners so he betrayed the fire nation by realesing all the prisoners and then fleeing into the night. Now-a-days he steals from the fire nation and just general messes with them. Doesn't like for anyone to know he's a elite firebender, or his connection with the royal family. Pet: A fire hawk named Thunderbolt.
*Note: Minor changes made to fit storyline in the likes and dislikes section.
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preada58
Jet
{INSERT WITTYNESS HERE}
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Post by preada58 on Jan 22, 2006 20:00:26 GMT -5
Name: Masnai Hei Nickname:Masho Age: 20 Hair: Black Eyes: Brown Likes: Archery,meditating Tolerates: People from the other nations Hates: Leaders of the Fire Nation Hobies: Archery Goals: To make a difference in the world Attitude: Stubborn,witty, Past: Masho lived on a small fire nation island named Arcane island,it was named that because of the many archers,everyone who was responsible enough had a bow and arrow.When Masho was 6 her mother had died from a bad sickness.Since her mother and Masho were the only benders on the island.Masho couldn't advance her firebending.She went to a school after her mother died and quickly advanced in her knowledge of firebending,in three years she had mastered firebending.With nothing left to do she decided to perfect her archery,she has greatly improved and her aim is deadly after about 5 years.Now,she decided move into the earth nation to help them in the war.She now spends her days trying to stop the fire nations reign of the world at all costs.She lives in a small house on the top of a cliff. Pet: A red ribboned hawk named Shiva. Appearance-She has jet black hair that is tied into a braid that is tied with a silk ribbon that goes down to her waist,but sometimes she wears it down,and she wears a sleeveless black shirt and black pants the hem of her pants are edged with red and the neckline of her shirt is edged with red.She's 5 ft tall. Fighting Style: When using her archery she attacks from a far, but when the enemy is to close to use her archery she uses a wooden staff and uses it to trip them and then knock them out.
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Post by godhunter on Jan 23, 2006 17:07:32 GMT -5
mind if i join with my OC. I would be on the fire nation side if thats kewl
Name: Tenkei (Heaven's blessing) Sex: Female Age: 17 Nation: Fire (can only create sparks and small explosions that are effected by temperature)
Weapons:She has two swords that very unique. They are circular with ten slits that go across the whole of the cylinder and a ball at the end of each. By rotating the handgaurd ten extremely sharp blades appear. After the blades are out if she turns the ball on the base of the hilt an oil like substance will fill the gap where the blades are stored. She ignites the oil and after a few minutes her swords become blazing hot. and she can create very large and destructive explotions around them because of the heat. She also has two wristbands that fire needles out of the bottom of them by igniting gunpowder at their base. They are coated with the oil so that she can explode them once they hit the target.
Appearance: She has silver eyes that shine in the presence of fire and dark black hair that she had cut to just above her sholders. She is very lean and powerful and she wears a red kimono, don't think that is the right word but for anyone who wants to know what I am refering to look up Sheena from Tales of Symphonia, and has her swords across her back. She wears a darker red sash on which she keeps refills of her oil and whatever else she needs.
History: She was raised in the fire nation and when she was young she created an explosion when she was angry. Her parents hired a firebending master to teach her, but he said she would never be able to create more than a spark and left after a year. Her father intent on getting her into the military taught her swordsmanship and her mother taught her how to mix ingredents to create things like gunpowder and her special mix of oil that burns hotter and longer. At the age of 15 she joined the military and was promoted quickly because of her obvious knowledge of war and her skill at swordsmanship.
Personality: She is a very kind person but has a hot temper and isn't all that great at controlling her emotions. She is extremely intelligent though and a very good strategist.
Family: Both of her parents are still alive and push her to progress in both her swordsmanship and in her ranking in the fire nation army. After she joined the army her mother bore a son who is now four and shows signs of becoming a powerful firebender.
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Post by godhunter on Jan 24, 2006 20:43:30 GMT -5
sry about the double post and all but I think I speak for everyone when I say that we want this to get started. People seem to want to use their OC's instead of the canon characters, so why don't you change the story a little so that it could include OC's easier and we could, hopefully start sooner.
Change it to something along the lines of: Zuko finds and captures the avatar and company and brings them before Zula. She kills the avatar and instead of imprisoning Sokka and Katara she kills them as well. Zuko gets agrivated by this and starts the resistance movement. It doesn't receive much support however until fifteen years after the war once the original fear of the firenation somewhat dies down.
Just a suggestion to get this thing started sooner. and sry if it seems as if i'm trying to take over.
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Post by Zukosfire5 on Jan 27, 2006 15:05:21 GMT -5
((It's okay.For now, the main characters will be NPCs until someone wants them.))
15 years ago Zuko brought his ship into the main port of the Fire Nation, happy to be home. "Finally." he said. "It's good to be home." He brought the captive Avatar and his friends out, and headed toward the palace. When he arrived at the entrance, the waterbender girl began pleading with him to let them go. Zuko wasn't about to though, and he continued on toward the throne room. He entered, and made the neccesary formalities. Then he heard a voice. "Brother. How nice to see you." said the voice with a hint of malice. Zuko looked up to see Zula, dressed as the Fire Lady. "Zula? Where is Father?" "He's dead. That's why I'm the ruler now." she responded smugly. She ordered the soldiers to bring the three captives before her, and Zuko felt a strange new emotion begin to build in him. Zula pulled out a sword, and without any hesitation, cut off their heads. Zuko stared at the dead bodies, then realized what Zula had done. "You idiot! You can't kill the Avatar! He's going to be reborn into the Water Tribes, and we'll have to start the search all over again!" Zuko yelled. Zula sat back in her throne, and said, "You really believe that reincarnation story? Brother, you are even more hopeless than I thought." Zuko began backing out of the throne room, and said "You are going to regret this Zula. I'll make sure of that!" Zula laughed, and said "What? For killing your waterbending girlfriend? She wasn't that pretty anyway." Zuko only shook his head and replied "You have no idea what you've done Zula. No idea." Zuko then headed for the harbor, and left the Fire Nation.
((splee! the first post!))
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preada58
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Post by preada58 on Jan 27, 2006 18:59:31 GMT -5
(OOC:Going to bring this back to the present if it's okay,and my OC goes by her nickname)
15 years later aka the present
Masho released her arrow at the slave trader.Down he went.He was unconscience,but not for long.Masho walked up and released the slaves,who were shaking with fright.She handed them a bag of supplies and wished them luck.After they had left Masho looked at the unconscience body."Great,I have to move this",Masho groaned.She dragged him towards the bushes and left him there.
Masho put up the hood on her cloak and headed towards the closest village to spend the night.She thought about rumors about resistances.She had heard rumors that one resistance group was going to start looking for the avatar,also she heard it was growing in number every day,she had also heard it was really strong.She had to find that one.
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Post by godhunter on Jan 27, 2006 19:55:17 GMT -5
Tenkei was in at a meeting of the generals in place of her superior who was on a mission for the fire nation. Her job was to present the information from her superior and then to remain quiet and listen. She did as was expected of her. She had no reason to complain, she was at the general's meeting, and in the presence of the fire lord(lordess?). She listened intently to what they said for a few minutes until she got bored. She then allowed her mind to wander off until she heard a name that she hadn't heard for years, Zuko. Her mind was immediately back in the room and she was paying full attention:
"It seems that Zuko stills believes in those child stories. We have received information that he is searching for the new avatar." said general #1, "It also appears that he his starting a resistance in the earth kingdom. Fire lord, who should we send to squash this Resistance.?"
The fire lord smiled a little and then spoke, "Send Tenkei and some troops, this will be her opportunity to prove that she is ready to take a real place at this table." She then turned her gaze upon the shocked Tenkei, "That will end the meeting, Tenkei I expect you to succeed. You will leave tomorrow with any 10 men that you wish. You goal will be to find information about what they are really doing and, if the opportunity arises, kill the new avatar, and Zuko."
Tenkei bowed her head in respect and left with the rest of the generals. She was full of joy as she walked home to tell her parents, this was her time to shine, her chance prove herself, and most the most exiting part would be is that it would mark her first voyage outside the fire nation.
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Post by The Blank Magician on Jan 28, 2006 13:05:12 GMT -5
Oh! can i be the Avatar? Here's a profile...
Name: Manami (love beauty) Nationality: Southern Water Tribe Age: 15 Gender: female Appearence: Long brown hair tied in a bun, deep blue eyes, and wears the tradintional parka and blue shirt and slited skirt. She is average weight, a little thin, and has mad waterbending skills. Personality: She is very level-headed and uses logic most of the time. She daydreams a lot, though. She is kind and cares profusly for others sometimes using her own time to help others in need. When she gets angry she bends water to calm herself, always carrying a canteen of water wherever she goes, for this reason. History: She lives with her cousins in a small igloo on the outskirts of the Southern Water Tribe city. She was told that her parents left to join the ressistence and lives happily with her five cousins and thier mother and father. She was taught waterbending by a high-ranking waterbender in the city, until she had learned all his techniques and even invented a few of her own.
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Post by godhunter on Jan 28, 2006 13:51:26 GMT -5
I would asume she should be 15/16 since the avatar died 15/16 years ago
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Post by The Blank Magician on Jan 28, 2006 14:06:45 GMT -5
"Come on Ami! Let's just go home. We have enough to last us for ages!" Manami turned to her little cousin. "Only about a week, they're so small. I just want to make sure we have enough fish, ok? We'll go home in a minute, Aiko." Manami focused on her fishing line in front of her, dropping in the water from the small canoe she and Aiko shared. Aiko sighed and crossed her arms in a pout. "Fine!" She said. Manami smiled. Her 10 year old cousin was always complaining about something.
An hour and two fish later, Manami and Aiko began paddling back to the igloo. They had only caught about twenty fish, enough to last a week after they were dried. But with seven people to feed, they were lucky if they lasted a few days. She began to daydream, a bad habit as her aunt always said. This time, she was thinking about her mother and father, hoping they were doing okay.....
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