Gotag
penguin
-Name pronouced as Got-tag, never Go-tag-
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Post by Gotag on Nov 18, 2007 20:54:22 GMT -5
Name: Gotag Shintai Age: 28 Gender: Male Nation: Fire Nation (Was born in the earth kingdom though) Bender?: Yes, Master of fire and somewhat skilled with lightning Appearance: [Click Here] Sword included but take out the long tail of hair that sways alongside his back. Personality: Brilliantly clever and smart. Quiet. Can be dark at times. Strong. Brave. Is a big ponderer. History: When Gotag was just a toddler, his father was drafted into war. Only soon after he and his 4 brothers were hidden away when soldiers rampaged his town. The results of the rampage effected him and his brothers greatly when his mother was taken captive. Days after the attack, him and his brothers were sent away to a nearby orphanage. Then when the eldest brother, Kinn, became 16, he left the orphanage and travel the world with his brothers. Only months after Gotag left his family when Kinn betrayed him with a plan to take over a small village that was home to few wealthy folk. And now Gotag lurks through all nations doing whatever interests him.
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Horyo
RP Admin
All your bending are belong to us.
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Post by Horyo on Nov 19, 2007 22:10:36 GMT -5
Your character is awfully young to be mastering fire and then lightning...
And he has a sad history, he seems to have very "loveable" qualities in all characters. Please re-edit him, and we can talk, if you have any questions, just ask me.
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Post by Zukosfire5 on Nov 24, 2007 14:36:25 GMT -5
Also, please do not use pictures in your descriptions. You need to describe your character using words.
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