ryanj27
Haru
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Posts: 315
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Ketan
Jul 20, 2007 10:28:03 GMT -5
Post by ryanj27 on Jul 20, 2007 10:28:03 GMT -5
My Character: Name: Ketan(key-tan) Age: 13 Skin: Light Tan eye color: sparkling blue Hair: Fine short black hair Gender: Male Personalty: quick to act but doesnt think things through, tough on the outside but has an affectionative side. Skill Level: INtermediate Air Bendng Clothing: average airbending clothing History: Was born in the Northern Air Temple but one day, with his biscon, Tak, and lemur, Sayli, he flew away to join the nomadic colonies. The reason? the monks in the Northern Air Temple had asked a few people to go join the Nomadic Colonies.
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Horyo
RP Admin
All your bending are belong to us.
Posts: 2,572
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Ketan
Jul 31, 2007 22:55:25 GMT -5
Post by Horyo on Jul 31, 2007 22:55:25 GMT -5
Your character profile lacks structure and detail for one thing.
And I don't remember anything about a blue-eyed air nomad.
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Ketan
Aug 2, 2007 19:35:23 GMT -5
Post by Zukosfire5 on Aug 2, 2007 19:35:23 GMT -5
Please use paragraph form when making your profile and like Horyo said, you need to adds lots of description to history, personality, and appearance.
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