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Post by kataangist™ Is Nostolgic <3 on Jan 11, 2008 14:16:33 GMT -5
aww cute..... that's what i would be saying if i was a zutarian!!!!!!!! but i will keep my anger at bay..... i wouldn't want to upset any of my zutara friends (including hinata herself) nice chapter though, and guess what? :does happy dance: THE GRAMMER WAS BETTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ALLELUIA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Hinata Uzumaki IS BACK on Jan 11, 2008 14:20:51 GMT -5
thankyou. i know, i'm trying to get better at my grammar
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Post by kataangist™ Is Nostolgic <3 on Jan 11, 2008 14:22:54 GMT -5
it makes it easier to read.
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Post by Alouncara on Jan 11, 2008 16:44:01 GMT -5
yes! your writing has improved! Still a little jumbly but you are doing really well! You seem to be doing alot of Paragraphs where they ren't really nessicary which muddles up with our understanding... But yah so far really good! You mind reading my Fan-Fic?
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Post by kataangist™ Is Nostolgic <3 on Jan 11, 2008 17:40:50 GMT -5
i wouldn't mind!
PM me the link.
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Post by Hinata Uzumaki IS BACK on Jan 11, 2008 18:03:17 GMT -5
sure, give me the link
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Post by kataangist™ Is Nostolgic <3 on Jan 12, 2008 11:29:01 GMT -5
links wuman links!
chapter hinata chapter!
everything is so slow in my life.
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Post by Hinata Uzumaki IS BACK on Jan 13, 2008 10:24:44 GMT -5
~~~next chapter. ~~~~~~ (((WARNING!! HUGE TAANG IN IT!!)))))))
Because I loved you That sentence played back in Tophs head again and again. "love?"She questioned outloud. "Aang, loved me?" She knew that they were close friends but he was in love with her? How could she not tell that he did? All those years. Toph heard the door slam and felt Aang storm inside. "And he just yells at me!?" She stated. "How can a kind disscussion like that go to accusing me?" Toph sighed. "What do you think I should Do Appa?"She asked the bison that she was leaning against. Appa grunted ,stood up and walked away. "ow!"Toph yelped as she hit the ground. "Thanks , that was really supportive."She told Appa sarcasticlly. Toph stood up and walked back to the house. The muddy wet grass soaked her sensative feet. She pushed the door open and walked in.
As she was walking back to her bedroom,She played back everything Aang had said to her. Toph Felt Aangs vibrations coming closer. "Toph?" Aang asked behind her. Toph turned around and Glared at him. "Don't talk to me."She warned coldly. "But toph, I"He started, but Toph already slammed the door in his face.He heard the door bolt lock and a boulder being pushed against the wooden door. Aang just Stood there for a second . He then earth bended a boulder against the wooden door,breaking it and then appeared in Tophs room. Toph was standing in the middle of the room scowing at Aang.
" You know, you taught me that."Aang told her. Toph huffed and walked to the window, her back facing Aang. "Look, I'm sorry for blowing up at you like that." He appologized sincerely. Toph was silent for a moment.
"I just don't get it." She said quietly, still starring out the window. "I mean, You kissed me, You tell me that you loved me and that you miss me, and then you just blame me for everything.?" Aang walked closer to Toph. He ran his fingers through his black hair. He breathed in then out. " I'm sorry. I mean, I was just upset That you left. I missed you so much. I know it was five years, and I should have gotten over that but I didn't. I missed seeing you everyday, The way you teased me Sokka and Katara,How Tough you were, when you earthbended and everything about you." Aang Appologized sincerely. "He really does mean that". She thought. her eyes widened then lowered. "you did?"She sqeaked out. "yeah"He told her. Aang wanted to lean in and kiss her, but he didnt have to. Toph already did. After they broke apart, Tophs head leaned on Aang's shoulder. "I love you too."She whispered. Aang closed his eyes and smiled.
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Im a secret AGENT MAN. A SECRET AGENT MAN!!!! (though im a girl)
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Post by ilovetaang03 on Jan 13, 2008 10:27:31 GMT -5
oh my god oh my god oh my go......... oh you get the picture that was awesome
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Post by Hinata Uzumaki IS BACK on Jan 13, 2008 13:01:34 GMT -5
thanks i'm glad that you liked that chapter.
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Post by kataangist™ Is Nostolgic <3 on Jan 14, 2008 6:14:03 GMT -5
that is really good!
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Post by Hinata Uzumaki IS BACK on Jan 14, 2008 7:54:02 GMT -5
thanks. last night i wrote another chapter, more taang. so i think i'll post that later today. In my town, we have a snow day today so yeah.
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Post by *Erin* on Jan 14, 2008 9:49:14 GMT -5
I can't wait for the next chapter!
-And my town has a snow day too
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Post by kataangist™ Is Nostolgic <3 on Jan 15, 2008 13:00:46 GMT -5
i haven't!!!
woo stinkin hoo!
all i've had are rain days.
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Post by Hinata Uzumaki IS BACK on Jan 16, 2008 17:05:42 GMT -5
~~~~~~~~~~~next chapter. ~~~~~~~~~~
As Toph and Aang were kissing, A servant in the house walked by the broken door. Out of the corner of his eye, he saw Toph and Aang kissing. His eyes widened and then he walked away blushing. ~~~~~~~~~~~at breakfast~~~~~~~~~~ "So, Avatar Aang."Toph's Father started. He now noticed that Toph and Aang were sitting next to each other. "did you sleep well last night?"He asked Aang Aang swallowed the rice he was chewing. He nodded. "And did you two have a good morning?"He asked knowingly. Aang's eyes widened and he blushed and Toph practiccly choked on the rice she was chewing. "What do you mean Dad?"She asked suspiciously. Her father was grinning. "Well, one of the servants told me what you guys were doing in Tophs room this morning". He told them. Tophs Mother gave a look of discust and shock. "no no no no!" aang stumbled out and then scrunched down in his chair. "relax,"Her dad reasured his wife."they were only kissing." "Dad!" Toph squealed. "Ahhh, young love."Her mom sighed dreamily. "Mom! Stop!"Toph practicly yelled. Even though what her mom said was true. "Looks like Tophs got a boyfriend."Her dad chuckled. Toph slid down in her chair. Even though she couldnt see, She looked over at Aang. "ummm.."Aang mumbled
"hey! maybe you two should go on a date!" Her father suggested. "um. Sure."Aang offered. Toph shrugged.
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