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Post by kataangist™ Is Nostolgic <3 on Dec 14, 2007 16:54:15 GMT -5
use my idea!
toph dark secret!
(e.g toph actually loved sokka!)
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Post by Hinata Uzumaki IS BACK on Dec 14, 2007 17:56:43 GMT -5
hmmm. maybe
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Post by kataangist™ Is Nostolgic <3 on Dec 14, 2007 17:58:58 GMT -5
tokka
:mouuth waters:
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Post by Time Bandit on Dec 15, 2007 6:53:32 GMT -5
((to,Kataangist likes tokka,....oh yeah,join his side!!!)) Apocalypsering,i appriate your sugestions and critism but, this is my story to decide how it goes and how much description and stuff is in it. TRUE this FF ROCKS!!!!!!!! I say keep your writing the way you want it. TOKKA PLEASE!!!!! KARMA!!
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Post by kataangist™ Is Nostolgic <3 on Dec 15, 2007 7:25:56 GMT -5
yeah!
and no offence apocalypsering! but as we can see, hinata uzimaki is a talented amautuar!
she has good ideas and is really talented!
and no offence but we didn't ask you to even review it?
maybe hinata wanted to share her work with the world and wanted to be nice and keep their critismes to themselves!
just leave off and give good comments!
GREAT JOB HINATA!
CAN'T WAIT FOR CHAPTER 6!
(or was it 5? i can't remember lol)
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Post by Apocalypsering on Dec 15, 2007 9:03:28 GMT -5
First off: (please read the entire topic through thoroughly) distanthorizons.proboards31.com/index.cgi?board=fic&action=display&thread=1173314173Secondly, it's clear that you don't really care for my opinion in the first place, so please stopping talking to me about it. Thirdly, since you brought it up again, I'll tell you one last time, She is both talented and an amateur. An amateur will never get any better if all people ever do is worship them. And this: isn't helping anybody.
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Post by kataangist™ Is Nostolgic <3 on Dec 15, 2007 10:16:19 GMT -5
ok ok.
i admit defeat.
i'm sorry apocalysering.
can we just call it a day and be friends?
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Post by Hinata Uzumaki IS BACK on Dec 18, 2007 17:13:28 GMT -5
~~~~chapter 5~~~~~~((couldnt think of any thing with toph and aang in it so heres something while i think))
Zuko and Katara starred at each other with disbelief. This was the first time either of them has seen each other in 5 years. "Katara." Zuko whispered. His smile reached both ears.(that was a first xD) "hello Zuko."Katara said to him,grinning as well. She studied him.Some things that were totally familiar was the big,red scar on his eye and his messy black hair. He didnt have a mustache or anything ugly like that. His body was still lean and muscular like it always was. "ARE YOU GONNA ORDER SOMETHING OR NOT!?" some cranky ,impatient customer in line behind Katara. Katara jumped and turned around. "Oh,right sorry."she said to her mocasins,blushing. "Later...."Zuko whispered and pointed to the entrance of the shop. Katara nodded,still smiling. "YEAH,THATS RIGHT KICK HER OUT!" The person shouted behind her. Katara scowled at that person and walked out of the shop. Her excitement of seeing an old friend again practiclly lifted her out of her moccasins.
she hung out in front of the shop for a little while. Katara continuelly glanced at the door. She looked there for about the 100th time and saw Zuko pulling off his apron thing and folding it over his arm. "hey,"he greeted katara,walking over to her. "hi! "she excitedly said and ran toward him and embraced him in a hug. "i missed you"he murmured. Zuko felt a nod buried in his shoulder.
xDD
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Post by kataangist™ Is Nostolgic <3 on Dec 19, 2007 12:55:34 GMT -5
:cries: Zutara :cries:
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Post by Hinata Uzumaki IS BACK on Dec 23, 2007 13:58:52 GMT -5
~~~~~~~chapter 6~~~~~~~ ((more zutara,couldnt think of any taang, kataangist,i might use your idea...maybe))
Zuko and katara let go. "its good to see you."Katara said to him. They continued walking through town. Zuko gazed at Katara. She looked similar,yet different. Her hair flowed down her back and she wore dark blue pants and a shorter version of the blue dress that she wore when she was 14. Katara still had her mothers necklace around her neck. "what have you been up to?" Zuko asked breaking the silence. "Training little kids,living in the north pole, and my dad is here and wants to see me."she replied starring ahead. Zuko didnt bother asking why her dad was here. "How did Aangs fire bending go?"she asked.
"oh, pretty good."Zuko stampered. "where do you live now?"Katara asked him with genuine curiosity. Zuko pointed at some apartment buildings ahead."in one of those Apartment buildings.he answered. "How's Iroh?" Zuko didnt answer and kept on walking. "oh,um.....did he?-" "No,he isnt dead,or at least, I dont think he is"Zuko answered cutting her off. They stepped into his small apartment. ((thats all i can think of right now))
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Post by ilovetaang03 on Dec 23, 2007 17:58:02 GMT -5
that is good i like it
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Post by kataangist™ Is Nostolgic <3 on Dec 24, 2007 8:10:49 GMT -5
zutara but there might be tokka has you said you might use my idea.
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Post by Hinata Uzumaki IS BACK on Dec 24, 2007 8:43:26 GMT -5
zutara but there might be tokka has you said you might use my idea. MAYBE ........kataangist.......maybe taang AND tokka
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Post by kataangist™ Is Nostolgic <3 on Dec 24, 2007 9:06:45 GMT -5
your gonna make toph a two-timer?
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Post by ilovetaang03 on Dec 24, 2007 11:43:10 GMT -5
NO TOKKA OR KATAANG ZUTARA AND TAANG FOREVER!!!!!!!!!
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